I comprehend, I simply do not pretend. But if you look past the artistic aspect, you find the truth, and the truth is rather simple if you have the cognitive capacity to find it.
@UTRLLD I actually don't think you understand the poem at all. Check out the full length version and I'm sure it'll make more sense. This is not about being sad that we aren't pretty (because we are), its about how the obsession with being pretty causes us to lose ourselves in the process.
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Please, they whine because pretty girls are getting attention, so they try to make you feel bad for not giving them the same amount. You can hear this anywhere, but usually from pre-teens....
To me this poem is about women losing themselves to be something that isn't always the best. Its not just about race, actually far from it. But it is about young girls working hard to be noticed just ending up noticed by the wrong one, or getting a negative response. It made me think that they were attempting to tell young women that we should appreciate ourselves for who we are and not work so hard to draw attention because it should come naturally.
SHOUTOUT: To those who didnt get the concept of the poem! It's not about the color of your skin, it's not about bein being beautiful or ugly. PAY ATTENTION & WAKE UP LADIES! Give credit where it is due because it's YOU that they're speaking to but you're too IGNORANT to listen!
I Cried..Look At The Stiletto Throne I've Fallen From...I Think It's Crazy How When a Black Girl Goes Missing They Dont Put It On CNN Or Some Major New Station..But When A White Person Goes Missing Amber Alerts Are Out And It's On National Tevlivison...But Whatever..Great Poem I Love It....SPEAK THE TRUTH
Translation - I cannot keep up with the pretty girls, you should like me even though I am ugly. Its not fair that I am fat and snotty, you should like me for being both unattractive and a biatch....
@UTRLLD Translation - You can't comprehend, therefore you insult girls who have the courage to pour their souls on stage just so you get attention from the others users watching this video. Thank you for your opinion ;)
@stardustpixel1 To me it was more of a calling out of society. We are so concerned with how women look, what we don't notice when they disappear, because there's another to look at. Media, after all, is covered with images of women, but those who suffer, who disappear are merely a foot note in our lives, unlike our attempts to primp and preen. "At least I'll always be pretty enough for news coverage."
to be honest , no1 tells these girls to curl , blow , straighten , etc , real boys don't even appreciate all that , or Like girls that do all that , we just want a real down to earth , humble girl , who expresses herself freely , & is HERSELF ! , its these girls own insecurity that Leads them to do such things for attention .
Riotgrrl I think there talking about rape victims and molested women they try and be so beautiful just to wined up missing or raped because they caught the eye of the wrong person
@dashitbitch13 wow . you both got it wrong . are u even listening to the poem ? Why Leave a comment if you didnt understand it and just make yourself Look silly , & taint the beauty of such a ART PIECE !
@WhiteGlitterTV when I say I meant about gang related, I meant on those days when all gangs drive around in vans and shoot random civilians while also kidnapping girls. I thought it was about that. I apologize that I am not seeing the same frame here. I thought poetry is artistic enough to be seen in a different window. and second of all if its really beautiful, My comment shouldn't get in the way of appreciating it.
@WhiteGlitterTV well 1st no 1 is tainting any thing weather we understand or you think you understand dosnt effect the beauty of it, but thats just what we with our own opinions got out of it and i see you have your own that maybe wrong or right as you can see i said "i think" thank you
"look at the casket they throw themselves into!" wow I am pretty sure they are talking about the gang related issues on the street..wow getting in I appreciate
The truth in this poem is REAL ! POWERFUL AND TRUE! We want all eyes on us,even if that means falling from our stiletto throne and being placed into a casket! Someone is looking at us. DAMN THAT IS POWERFUL.
Ok, I jus broke this dwn piece by piece to get the words and I'm glad to say it's 99% accurate!!! It would b 100%, but I couldn't figure out one word in particular so I jus joined it in with another piece from that list.
I've got pieces of this poem dwn pat!!! Especially "today 500 women will go missing. Dont we all always want all eyes on us!!" ahhhhh!!! I love this sooooo much!!!
"this is how to stay beautiful!" fucking best line!
ashesoflee22 1 week ago
Ladies, this is the most hauntingly beautiful thing I've heard or seen in a very long time. Thank you.
KEHyatt 1 week ago
I love it
santi25del 3 weeks ago
Tears
NaturelDeese 1 month ago
DEEP!
missaries77 1 month ago
Truth! Powerful spoken word.
novembertalespinner 1 month ago
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ELISEilyu94 2 months ago
Does anyone have the full length version
LiLRoKKonDecK 2 months ago
Love it great job ladies
CkandyCkisses5 3 months ago
look at the coffin we throw our self into!!!!
Loveable344 4 months ago 5
straight 2 my favorites!:):):):)
itskeythedfordnigga 5 months ago
this poem is rockin
gurlasia2000 7 months ago in playlist poetry slam 2
One word....POWERFUL !!
Osocute702 7 months ago 2
awsome
crazymuffintop 7 months ago
I comprehend, I simply do not pretend. But if you look past the artistic aspect, you find the truth, and the truth is rather simple if you have the cognitive capacity to find it.
UTRLLD 8 months ago
@UTRLLD I actually don't think you understand the poem at all. Check out the full length version and I'm sure it'll make more sense. This is not about being sad that we aren't pretty (because we are), its about how the obsession with being pretty causes us to lose ourselves in the process.
KamoneF 8 months ago 16
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Please, they whine because pretty girls are getting attention, so they try to make you feel bad for not giving them the same amount. You can hear this anywhere, but usually from pre-teens....
UTRLLD 8 months ago
@UTRLLD do you even understand the poem...just asking
XXcutieXX554 6 months ago
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TwilightStorm13 5 months ago
Wow! Amazing!
Pvzavala80 8 months ago
Look at the casket they've thrown themselves into....
HorridHazuki 8 months ago in playlist Poetry
This is deep!!!!!
supervirtuouswoman 8 months ago
To me this poem is about women losing themselves to be something that isn't always the best. Its not just about race, actually far from it. But it is about young girls working hard to be noticed just ending up noticed by the wrong one, or getting a negative response. It made me think that they were attempting to tell young women that we should appreciate ourselves for who we are and not work so hard to draw attention because it should come naturally.
kayebrooks1996 8 months ago
SHOUTOUT: To those who didnt get the concept of the poem! It's not about the color of your skin, it's not about bein being beautiful or ugly. PAY ATTENTION & WAKE UP LADIES! Give credit where it is due because it's YOU that they're speaking to but you're too IGNORANT to listen!
lilbabiigurl1989 9 months ago 5
I Cried..Look At The Stiletto Throne I've Fallen From...I Think It's Crazy How When a Black Girl Goes Missing They Dont Put It On CNN Or Some Major New Station..But When A White Person Goes Missing Amber Alerts Are Out And It's On National Tevlivison...But Whatever..Great Poem I Love It....SPEAK THE TRUTH
KaylaDiane123 10 months ago 3
Translation - I cannot keep up with the pretty girls, you should like me even though I am ugly. Its not fair that I am fat and snotty, you should like me for being both unattractive and a biatch....
UTRLLD 10 months ago
@UTRLLD Translation - You can't comprehend, therefore you insult girls who have the courage to pour their souls on stage just so you get attention from the others users watching this video. Thank you for your opinion ;)
specialk9569 8 months ago
Fallen off are stiletto throwns - fave part
BritaniaANDPrussia 10 months ago
I loved this poem, but also struggled to understand It. It felt like victim blaming. Someone elaborate?
stardustpixel1 10 months ago
@stardustpixel1 To me it was more of a calling out of society. We are so concerned with how women look, what we don't notice when they disappear, because there's another to look at. Media, after all, is covered with images of women, but those who suffer, who disappear are merely a foot note in our lives, unlike our attempts to primp and preen. "At least I'll always be pretty enough for news coverage."
fatgirlinlove 10 months ago 4
@stardustpixel1 check out the full length poem, and you may have a better understanding.
KamoneF 8 months ago
Don't We All Always Want All Eyes On Us?
sweetkookiedough 10 months ago
this is my favorite
outhere1212 11 months ago
"Smile pretty girl!"
Explode394 11 months ago
1:00-1:11 DAM!!!!
DRAMADORK620 11 months ago 2
smile pretty girl , smile pretty girl.
Look at the caskets they've thrown themselves into !
CameraLife1 11 months ago 2
to be honest , no1 tells these girls to curl , blow , straighten , etc , real boys don't even appreciate all that , or Like girls that do all that , we just want a real down to earth , humble girl , who expresses herself freely , & is HERSELF ! , its these girls own insecurity that Leads them to do such things for attention .
WhiteGlitterTV 11 months ago
Riotgrrl I think there talking about rape victims and molested women they try and be so beautiful just to wined up missing or raped because they caught the eye of the wrong person
dashitbitch13 11 months ago
@dashitbitch13 wow . you both got it wrong . are u even listening to the poem ? Why Leave a comment if you didnt understand it and just make yourself Look silly , & taint the beauty of such a ART PIECE !
WhiteGlitterTV 11 months ago 2
@WhiteGlitterTV when I say I meant about gang related, I meant on those days when all gangs drive around in vans and shoot random civilians while also kidnapping girls. I thought it was about that. I apologize that I am not seeing the same frame here. I thought poetry is artistic enough to be seen in a different window. and second of all if its really beautiful, My comment shouldn't get in the way of appreciating it.
RiotGrrl45 11 months ago
@WhiteGlitterTV well 1st no 1 is tainting any thing weather we understand or you think you understand dosnt effect the beauty of it, but thats just what we with our own opinions got out of it and i see you have your own that maybe wrong or right as you can see i said "i think" thank you
dashitbitch13 11 months ago
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this poem makes my body tingle
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MileHighTIBBY 11 months ago
WOW!!! That's all I could say... *speechless*
ThugPrincess336 1 year ago
"don't we all always want eyes on us!"
cynderellaman1 1 year ago 3
"look at the casket they throw themselves into!" wow I am pretty sure they are talking about the gang related issues on the street..wow getting in I appreciate
RiotGrrl45 1 year ago
@RiotGrrl45 Seriously ? , this poem had NOTHING to do with gangs .
WhiteGlitterTV 11 months ago
that was just awesomee...
jessyeffbaby 1 year ago
Don't we all always want all eyes on us!!!
TheCamisha1 1 year ago
smile pretty girl! smile pretty girl!!
sweetsea16 1 year ago
Great Work!!!
tindelljr 1 year ago
mannnn that is deep
AyannaSunshine 1 year ago
a powerful poem. I replayed it alot.
taune03 1 year ago
Raped the replay button on this one!!!! SO POWERFUL!!!!
LeSimpleton 1 year ago
The truth in this poem is REAL ! POWERFUL AND TRUE! We want all eyes on us,even if that means falling from our stiletto throne and being placed into a casket! Someone is looking at us. DAMN THAT IS POWERFUL.
MyReddRose 1 year ago
look at the stiletto throne i've fallen from....damn
pnkbabydoll08 1 year ago 49
@pnkbabydoll08 what does it mean..
lupomenduco3 8 months ago in playlist Brave New Voices ( Poetry by young ppl )
Ok, I jus broke this dwn piece by piece to get the words and I'm glad to say it's 99% accurate!!! It would b 100%, but I couldn't figure out one word in particular so I jus joined it in with another piece from that list.
multiracialbabe 1 year ago
I've got pieces of this poem dwn pat!!! Especially "today 500 women will go missing. Dont we all always want all eyes on us!!" ahhhhh!!! I love this sooooo much!!!
multiracialbabe 1 year ago
This is on another level of talent.
MsJWolfe 1 year ago
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mh38200 1 year ago
god damn...
Flowapella 1 year ago
i love it too
18764856269 1 year ago
"Look at the stiletto throne I've fallen from"
loserbiotch2 1 year ago 105
I absolutely love this poem it is one of the best poems I've ever heard
KimmieCub17 1 year ago 2
So True This Should Be On Newszx! I Agree Highly !!!!!! Listen !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111 Outsatndinq
lexiegirl90 1 year ago
this was the best one from the whole show.!
DEliRiOUSmvs 1 year ago 2
Outstanding....
KUUKUA2000 1 year ago 2
Wow!!!! So good!
sdelma1 1 year ago