Dope entry....I can't lie though I think mine is better. I gave the LAKERS a shout out and everything....I don't know that's what was on my mind....LOL check it out!!!
this shit came off pretty hard, but like the comment from obscene, you just gotta keep the energy the whole piece, I feel myself do that too sometimes tho bro, so keep doing you
Pretty ill
chAosmAnicAL 9 months ago
YOU'RE GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Aska1522 1 year ago
love the lines.......loose the style of clothing dude
479cdrp479 1 year ago
ur fucking sexy :):)
emoshelby1 2 years ago
awesome. =] good job. um would mind if i borrow yur last two lines? lol
AnGeLnEnA85 2 years ago
great
cockboy12 2 years ago
"im going to hell i realize how much sense sin makes"
wooow...deep shit bro!
wish id known about this contest earlier, id have thrown some female spice in the mix....good stuff though!
baybebop02 2 years ago
last two lines are niceee
JustMeStarlight 2 years ago
Dope!
4ndyh 2 years ago
Dope entry....I can't lie though I think mine is better. I gave the LAKERS a shout out and everything....I don't know that's what was on my mind....LOL check it out!!!
bigjizzy85 2 years ago
good stuff check mone out
PeabodyTV 2 years ago
dope....check out the contest i got going on right now homie
alanmorrison1986 2 years ago
"I feel like my back is breaking in this limbo life" Niceee. 5/5
619tumbleweed 2 years ago
ur fuckin sick man
TheTRuePhuckinG 2 years ago
flyyy check minee
DrFreestyleKyle 2 years ago
YOOOOOOOOOOO CHECK MINE!!!!!!
youngdeacon05 2 years ago
Yo the last line is sik man
awwe1 2 years ago
yo this is pretty damn good. nice lyrics and decent flow
phillykid1780 2 years ago
That's dope as hell man, 5*. Check out my entry when you get a chance!
BanhueStudios 2 years ago
thats sickk
bongs9909 2 years ago
You've definately got some mad potential in you man, keep at it. 5/5
gayglue 2 years ago
DOPE
Just Subscribed man
Good Luck
aaronsrt4 2 years ago
wow....ill lyrics ...dope as hell
-J*LiiVE
JLiiVE3 2 years ago
omg that quote wyze quoted that u said in is previous comment that line gave me chills this was a dope ass verse...
REALYZE4 2 years ago
yurr sikk
suspec91 2 years ago
shyt dope son uve got my sub
DanDeDa1st 2 years ago
haha wtf this shit is nice man
"what would dreams be without nightmares to compare too"
definently a hip hop quotable
emohkay 2 years ago 8
Not bad, bro.
This world is cold, / and it's never fair, dude // but what would dreams be / without nightmares to compare to //
I like that a lot, man.
AnonymousFlowMusic 2 years ago
this shit came off pretty hard, but like the comment from obscene, you just gotta keep the energy the whole piece, I feel myself do that too sometimes tho bro, so keep doing you
Eiksta 2 years ago
werd, the written is dope..but you lacked the energy and delivery tho..keep at it.
Obscene1love 2 years ago 2
pretty sick man
RealJMusic 2 years ago
really nice..
Capzper 2 years ago
Dope!!!!!!
tharekhh 2 years ago