Annabel Lee

[ElnaCopper]

your should of got top grade.....done so beautiful....elna

[MrJamesalexanderwalk]

ur great at reading poems not

[SherriBear78]

i was wondering what did you use to make this because i'm doing something similar as this for school and i need some advice

[thevampirelock]

@SherriBear78 I used windows movie maker. It comes standard with most pcs or laptops

[SherriBear78]

@thevampirelock do you know if you can add subtitles on the bottom with windows movie maker? cus i have to do that

[thevampirelock]

@SherriBear78 Yes, you can make subtitles. It's the program people use when they take a piece of music and post the lyrics with the song on youtube. The program is pretty user friendly as well. Good luck on your project!

[gzac95]

You might like my version if I uploaded it my voice isnt as good as some other video of the peom but it is deep and clear for a 15 year old boy.

[Daanyx1]

Have you listened to mysticxingjing16's Annabelle Lee? I believe you did a great job on the narration and introduction, so i think you would enjoy their version as well. Their song, in my opinion, is a better match to the mood of the poem. Thanks for reading.

[LadyMurderMaid]

Reading this poem, I feel like i know this Annabella Lee...Like Ive been to this Kingdom by the Sea like Ive had the joy to witness there beautiful and unconditional love, if only from a distance. and I feel the sorrow and love from this man lying by his love in the Kingdom by the Sea. Poe has this effect on you. thats why I love~ his work, with a Passion. This reading is gorgeous you make like the calm before the storm. Good work! 5+

[mimi946mg]

that was really good i waz wondering how old u r? cuz it sounded really good

[thevampirelock]

@mimi946mg I was fifteen at the time. And that was 2006 or 2007

[iStartTheViolence]

I love this poem and I love how u say "devoted someone can be to another even though they are both so young" and "how a broken heart can drive u to want the fate that of your dying loved one".

i love poem very much and your vioce makes it calm and relaxing.

[shefeelslost]

i like your voice, it sounds like my best friends :):):)

[thevampirelock]

@shefeelslost I don't know why, but that comment made me smile =)

[Teejaye92]

This was really nice :)

The pictures were good and the song suited perfectly and the way you read it was great. I can tell you will definitely get better at speaking as you only have a slight speed problem. Other then that. Wonderful!

[tiger54755]

you read it too fast, and without emotion, like a 5th grader would...dont get me wrong, i love your presentation, but read it slower...

[thevampirelock]

I don't really like my reading either x.x I'm debating removing the video actually. I liked my visuals but hated my reading.

[unsolvedmysteryguy]

i actually really like your reading

[thevampirelock]

@unsolvedmysteryguy Thank you

[akitayama300]

1:26 love the pic

[ashbashbang815]

this was great(: i had to memorize this poem for ap englicshand i am inlove withthis poem(:

[Myakachan]

This was really nice, and I love the fact you used "Like You" by Evanescence, as not only does it fit, but I just plain love the song. My only problem was the fact you recited (read?) the poem very fast. As my old Drama teacher would say "SLOW DOWN". I thought the imagery was lovely, and quite fitting, and I thought you read the poem just fine, except you said it so fast you're words ran together slightly. All in all though, I loved it, and I'm sorry you only got an A- on it. Good job though.

[tacochance]

i love this, it's beautiful, the song goes along perfectly to it. I love the pics you put along with it, and the intro.

[thevampirelock]

thank you

[Evanescencechik08]

I luv that u put Like you in the back ground

[thevampirelock]

thank you

[Wowvidcridict]

This is a great poem u read it without utter pasion. The point is that they love each other. Read it like u mean it. Thank you.

[KodotaiInk]

@Wowvidcridict She did a good job, so meh.

[mademoiselleisa]

that was amazing :)

[thevampirelock]

Thank you.

[inamichelle]

the poem is beautiful, but you rcited it without feelings... you just read it aloud, without giving intonations. but the projections are pretty good. if i were your teacher, i'd give you a b-..satisfactory.. that would be the faor grde..

[waysworth]

I have been a teacher, and you get an A from me too. It's clear you not only understand the poem, but feel it as well.

Not to mention, I just plain enjoyed it.

[thevampirelock]

Thank you =) I wish I got a solid A on that project and not an A-. My teacher was a stickler. Oh well.

[Chobits1947]

=) woot! if i was a teacher i'd give u an A for your project. Annabel Lee is also one of my favorites from Edgar Allen Poe

[hillarythegreat]

Wonderfully amazing. That is alos my favorite poem by Poe adn you did a AWESOME job. :]

[sassyredinNJ]

This is a great job!  I'm impressed . . .

[thevampirelock]

Thank you, I like positive feedback

[thevampirelock]

Thank  you ^-^

[FantasmaLuna666]

Great! It's my favorite poem too and I love Evanescence! Although, this song always reminded me of Wuthering Heights, it fit surprisingly! Great vid!