My sixth grade class really loved the video however, we would like to make one suggestion. On the credits we noticed that learned was misspelled and should be corrected. Learnt is not correct grammar. Hope this suggestion helps.
I'm an English teacher and really would love to use this for a class, but there are typos here and there. For instance, "lets" at the beginning should be "let's."
Also, "However" is a transitional phrase that should have a comma after it.
@eaawright Thanks for letting me know! I made this video when I was in grade nine, so there might be need of touch-ups. I will definitely be re-viewing my work. I never thought I would receive so much attention for this.
You can expect the video to be cleared of any errors within the next few days.
This is fabulous! I teach middle school gifted language arts and can't wait to show this to my students. Thanks for making such a terrific teaching tool!
This is a great video. I als
rmm28658 3 days ago in playlist Favorite videos
This is a great video. I als
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Learnt = Learned (learnt is not a word). Perhaps you want to correct this error for future viewers.Good job, otherwise.
shawnhettinga 2 weeks ago
Fantastic! Thanks a lot!
The examples were really helpful!!
cilversky99 3 weeks ago
what is the second piano song
96663ful 3 weeks ago
@96663ful The acoustic version of "Open Your Eyes" by Your Favorite Enemies.
riverofcolours 2 weeks ago
@riverofcolours thankyou so much
96663ful 2 weeks ago
My sixth grade class really loved the video however, we would like to make one suggestion. On the credits we noticed that learned was misspelled and should be corrected. Learnt is not correct grammar. Hope this suggestion helps.
nttkngit 1 month ago
@nttkngit Thanks so much for your feedback. Alterations will hopefully be made soon.
riverofcolours 2 weeks ago
thanks nice v
haya2629 1 month ago
My English teacher used this in our class too!! I think it's a great video, well done!
rockymountainrandom 4 months ago
My English teacher used this in our class too!! It's great!
rockymountainrandom 4 months ago
I'm an English teacher and really would love to use this for a class, but there are typos here and there. For instance, "lets" at the beginning should be "let's."
Also, "However" is a transitional phrase that should have a comma after it.
eaawright 4 months ago
@eaawright Thanks for letting me know! I made this video when I was in grade nine, so there might be need of touch-ups. I will definitely be re-viewing my work. I never thought I would receive so much attention for this.
You can expect the video to be cleared of any errors within the next few days.
riverofcolours 3 months ago
@riverofcolours Oh wow, very impressive for a 9th grader! I appreciate your response and look forward to using this! Thank you again.
eaawright 3 months ago
How could someone dislike this
shiney94 5 months ago
were 3rdyear highschool :D
ChattsieCamille 5 months ago
yeaa .my English teacher used this too !xD
ChattsieCamille 5 months ago
My english teacher used your video in our English class!!!! IT WAS AWESOME AND YOUR SONGS TOOO!!!! Credits to you!!!!! xD
paulene612 6 months ago
this would be a great help in my class for further understanding of literary device..
jhentope 7 months ago
thankyousomuch <3 this helped.
pastoftomorrow 10 months ago
Thanks for this. You did an amazing job. I'm using this with my 5th graders.
kmartin90 11 months ago
what song is it atthe very beginning?
keishakristen 1 year ago
@keishakristen "This Week the Trend" by Relient k
riverofcolours 1 year ago
Question: why did you say that Bambi's mom died?
snowballjtx 1 year ago
@snowballjtx you're so right. she obviously went off to the races ;) (L)
riverofcolours 1 year ago
I showed this to my seventh graders today and they LOVED it...except the cliffhanger at the end of the Lion King. :)
Great job.
aacampbell36 1 year ago
I shared this with my seventh graders today and they loved it. Although they were quite angry with the cliffhanger ending of Lion King. :)
Great job.
aacampbell36 1 year ago
I agree, I'll be showing this to my 7th grade GATE classes!!
DebbieGoodgirl 1 year ago
This is fabulous! I teach middle school gifted language arts and can't wait to show this to my students. Thanks for making such a terrific teaching tool!
hollyturtleface 1 year ago
@hollyturtleface Glad to be of help! What grade are you presenting this to?
riverofcolours 1 year ago
I LOVE THIS HUN!
you did an awesome, awesome job :D
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Tempestclaw 2 years ago