Rap- Whole World

[Mrfeebz]

how long you been writing lyrics?

[jethier1]

@Mrfeebz for a couple years maybe five

[abasanti]

your message is ok i guess, but you you need to definitely work on your vocals.

[4Musicviasearch]

LOL, do you use this as therapy or a way to heal yourself after a rough time, i hope but man keep this shit to yourself, or step back fuck your poetry and just listen. It's dead man. It's funny if anything

[djdanieljohn]

dude this ones your best, best multiples very solid lyrically,but if its written, then theres no excuse for your flo being too raw/vocal (happens to the best of white rappers) you need to match your flo with your personality a little differently at times...try perhaps adding lines from your day that aren't sung or rapped, but spoken, if not to break up the lyrical sound a little

chnge this, rearrange it, dont be affraid its just a braintwich!!

[TheToonChick]

NICE

[yoshie1001]

Hey bro. Look you have good lyrics but it might pay off to get a bit of voice training. Thats not an insult tho. Anybody can do it and it will make you sound way better. Just helpin cause ima rapper.

[ddeezz1]

not bad

[smmbpt1989]

Nice stuff.  The hook's probably gonna get stuck in my head. Love the flow. Keep it up.

[LilHomie52]

I luv this one.

[eastsidestory44]

nice... i just listened to a few of ur joints... but this one seem to have the most substance... mayb not the best display of your lyrical ability but yea.. i just decided to stop here and comment.... your pretty good bro... keep doin what you do... you def got a nice flow, overall you sound pretty unique...

peace and one love

[Sakers]

dude im loving them beats, keep it up ill keep watchin

[Whiskie11]

NICE ONE BRO

[spleenhead123]

u actually sound professional u gotta get a job as a rapper  respec bro

[howtoLIVEyourLIFE]

yeah bro i agree with Livezchange, you defniitely have alot of potential. i have alot of experience with christian rappers, and i especially love just straight up peaceful rap. you def got somethin, kid.

especially those lyrics man... thats like a slap in the face, in a good way, you know what i mean? keep spittin words, i'll keep listening :]

-peace- ERIKA

[Fido2016]

i watch this now an then when im havin a fucked up day!!!! sickness!!! 10/10*

[basketballhero06]

nice a rate a 5 star

[kassidybodom]

wow u dont like the truth no reply just deletin my comment, whack bro.

[jethier1]

no its just that you are an idiot and talk shit because all your videos are two stars and your one of those kids that thinks your better than everyone and are pissed because no one besides your self thinks your good, I was trying to help you from getting more haters but fuck it, ill help you get hated on sense thats what you want, you should make friends not enemies and maybe people will listen to your shit

[mctoope2]

awsome

[PaGxZaH]

you neveer gonna get any better

[jethier1]

no one even listen to your shit and if they do they give it one star, so let me ask, who really sucks??? you shouldnt be cocky when you suck, just give it up

[mekr0]

Keep it up,but fuck all those people saying you should get a job as a rapper,that's bullshit..keep it underground str8 love..fuck the industry..this is hipHop..now thats a smart text with great flow..fuck you haters..Big Up

[jethier1]

Thanks mekr0 for the comment, I am glad that you enjoy what I am doing.

[jtthompson1]

its funny how you call him the hater when u have comments on almost all his videos talking shit. You are the one who will never get better, ur only skill is hating on people that actually enjoy doing what they do, unlike some fake ass gansta that kills people with knifes like you claim you and your boys from the streets do, fucking poser, you suck and always will

[Livezchange]

You got some potential

I like what your trying to go for

practice is important I'm still trying to get better myself

check it out

[BOHAGON7]

everything about you is original. the flow is just so nice and steady. same as the guy under me im trying to do the same thing and get stuck any tips

[jethier1]

keep practicing and try to expand ur vocab

[Frogzardz]

if u dont mind me asking... what inspires you on all your songs? cuz im trying to start raping and sometimes i end up going into the same line or similar words that mean the same again and i was wanting to know maybe a few tips

[jose2131558]

he said that the song inspired him becasue everybody was fighting or something.

[xxmirsoxx]

NICE THATS ALL I GOT TO SAY

[peniscream32]

cute

[FJCProductions]

its good.

[scottburns90]

kassidybodom is right. this kid has got wild lyrics but his flow and tone are horrible. im the same way tho so id love to battle you bro

[jethier1]

im trying to get better because I think the same thing

[DirtMic]

is cool cool just fixa some mix mix ut upp to big shit like me not frome computer.

[chancemonkey]

This Guy has great BEat and lyrics and great everything Keep upo the good work hpefulyl u get big kid!

[jethier1]

appriciate it man

[amritpalsingh96]

yo i love all ur work ur nice when it comes to the raping world

[jethier1]

thanks

[linkinpark536]

Yo No disrespect but dogg u look like u jus go finish smokin some weed dogg u look like u high as hell......but ture shit

[SonSeelye]

lyrics are dope kid!!!

[jethier1]

thanks sonseelye

[rutlandxps]

mate u rlly  should consider makin a mixtape and tryin 2 gt signed coz u gt some gd rhymes and alot of potential hope u do well if u do try it

[xalaros2727]

WOW!!!!

[rickmista1213]

dude ure pretty good....me and a couple of friends rap n shit to...i hate hater bro ...my whole school hates on us just cause were the shit and there jelouse...but rappin is fun i think and they just dont understand....pe@ce bro

[miglegtr]

coolness

[paras1486]

good rap im a big fan of rap but its nice to c something not involving money,sex,drugs!

[plasticbarbieface]

Yea man, I'm so in love in this so I got this as a mp3 file now haha (A)

[jethier1]

Im glad you enjoy it, I enjoyed writing it

[plasticbarbieface]

Yes! I think you should do more of thoose becuse you are really god of what you are doing! 5/5 star no matter what!

[plasticbarbieface]

MAAAN! I LOVE IT!!!! :D

[jethier1]

thanks, I like hearing that

[ksworddemon]

love the song its tight and damn ur fine:)

[jethier1]

Thanks

[HappyBunny001]

yo I like this one a lot...i dunno if i missed it when you dropped it?

[jethier1]

I put this one one right before I started school, its a lot different from my other stuff, but when you have a feeling and a thought you got to write it down.

[SCOTTnBREN]

sweet man.

[nebblu]

props

[when2L]

yo this is awsome, if you like doing this kinda stuff check out our group Absurd Intellect, we do kinda the same shit. We just kinda have fun with it and you can probably relate your music to ours.

really cool song by the way!

[jethier1]

ill definitely check you guys out.  Thanks for the positive feedback!

[Gizado]

very good bro ;)

[jethier1]

thanks man!

[jon7mac]

you could really improve this track with better swagger man...not a diss, just a suggestion

[jethier1]

I agree, I was kinda in a rush to just make it, so I didnt give it my all!

[LilAngelAssley]

hey nice rap :) i like what its about nice job :)

[jethier1]

thanks man!

[barziani]

nice man;) keep it up !!

[VallaMC]

Nice song!

[pureballa5]

Hey thanks for the love man. You got nice rhymes, keep at it cousin. Your just rappin for the love of it and thats what its all about.

[Critical234]

i got cruck beats for you man pm me for some

[ChrisSammon]

That was sick!!...you fuckin hippi. lol I'm just fuckin around dude. Post some more shit.

[DerrekNel]

ayo, your shits good but you should stop rocking back and forth it makes it go from quiet to loud really fast and it makes you sound off beat..

[sexychicca2006]

very nice

[FistingYouEnt]

nice!

enjoy all your raps

[melissaandzach9]

i love listing to your raps:]

[jethier1]

thanks, I like hearing that

[Fido2011]

i love this man.... the beat is mellow an relaxing!!! added 2 favorites for sure!!!

:-)

[Fido2011]

sick ish man!!!! keep it up!!!

fido

[lilredwilliam]

kick ass bro

[deflight]

its tight but u gotta switch up ur delivery and its not nessecary to rhyme 3 or more syllables evry time. it sometimes feels forced and jumbled, if you put more importance and emphasis in your lyrics and lines, it would be a lot betta...

[FearlessItalian3]

This is by far my favorite one! Haha make it into a ringtone somehow for me and then call me all the time but don't expect me to pick up but don't take offense cause its a compliment cause i just wanna hear your shit

[jethier1]

thanks dustin,  so how has you summer been going?

[FiLTHyRiCHards]

You keep coming out with genuinely good songs, I've said it before and i'll say it again i like your style keep this up man.

PEACE

[NARJNE]

WOW!!!! Thats all I can say!!! Keep up the good work and keep the raps comming!!!

[wsblilbuddha0o]

ive listened to alot of your raps dog you got fucking nice lyrics dude ur sick.

[DaProlifik1reaLyrics]

nice lyrics, good message

[HwthrnHghtsGrl]

i wish everbody raped like u ♥

[HwthrnHghtsGrl]

awesome song!!

[XoXSpencieeXoX]

Nice beat

i can relate to it.

nice work hun <3

[jethier1]

thanks