@Louise..I reckon you have potentially a really great song there. Hearing it with 'fresh' ears, I think the things that need attention are; the 3rd line of the Chorus and the Bridge/3rd verse at 02:09 - I feel these bits are a bit 'vague' and need strengthening up a bit. The song is definately worth a bit more time and effort IMO : )
Thank you for your feedback, I'm going to check it out. What do you mean by vague though? Lyrically, musically? How should I strengthen those parts IYO?
@Lousie - ok, I would put another word or two in that 3rd line of the chorus rather than the long 'Chaaaannge' , cos you already done the longish 'chaaange' in the 1st line of the chorus. Ithink this will tighten it up a bit and make it stronger. I think the thing with the bridge IMO is that it needs to be more upbeat with no stops - cos you lose the 'flow' of the song - the song is brilliant up to this point and it ends brilliant - this is what Iwould do : )
fantastic video
AnteStSport 1 year ago
Really nice song - we love it !
REMOODS
remoods 1 year ago
thank you!
LouiseGloor 1 year ago
love this...just seems to float on by...and take you with it :)...great stuff!
BBGumbo 1 year ago
nice of you to say! thanks!
LouiseGloor 1 year ago
great song..a+
nicohatsoff 2 years ago
thank you :)
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
thanks!
LouiseGloor 1 year ago
Very nice! Another great one from the great one! ;-)
MrsHawksley 2 years ago
You're so silly! But than you none the less LOL
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
very awesome*******
mktmic7 2 years ago
thanks mktmic7!
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
Lovely chord movement and a nice chorus.
"Don't worry love, it's only rain" - great line.
Oswlek 2 years ago
Thanks! I can't wait to get my voice back to put more intensity into it. Oh and I flubbed that one nice line lol that's why I repeated it :S
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
Oh my god... you wrote so NICE song.... :) My soul is crying....it´s sooooo perfect!!!
thomasgrew 2 years ago
Thank you Thomas :)
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
@Louise..I reckon you have potentially a really great song there. Hearing it with 'fresh' ears, I think the things that need attention are; the 3rd line of the Chorus and the Bridge/3rd verse at 02:09 - I feel these bits are a bit 'vague' and need strengthening up a bit. The song is definately worth a bit more time and effort IMO : )
MrChubbleyWarner 2 years ago
Thank you for your feedback, I'm going to check it out. What do you mean by vague though? Lyrically, musically? How should I strengthen those parts IYO?
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
@Lousie - ok, I would put another word or two in that 3rd line of the chorus rather than the long 'Chaaaannge' , cos you already done the longish 'chaaange' in the 1st line of the chorus. Ithink this will tighten it up a bit and make it stronger. I think the thing with the bridge IMO is that it needs to be more upbeat with no stops - cos you lose the 'flow' of the song - the song is brilliant up to this point and it ends brilliant - this is what Iwould do : )
MrChubbleyWarner 2 years ago
You make beautiful music Louise! Your voice is lovely
pauldpru 2 years ago
Thanks Paul! Nice of you to say :)
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
Thank you...that was so cool
DEEZMAN666 2 years ago
You're welcome, hope that helped :)
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
haha where are you?! unique approach but seeing you sing is part of the show!!!
SwingAdam 2 years ago
Yeah I know lol I'm not much of a performer though. And a swollen face isn't always camera friendly :(
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
@SwingAdam She is 90 degress to the left :D She put the camera where you put your sheetmusic :P
SoerenHammer 2 years ago
lol
LouiseGloor 2 years ago