@4evrFazed , please give me your intepritations of that verse, what you think it means etc ( last line mostly )
just want some feedback before i put it in a song
ps. gotta rap this fast over it so if your reading along and cant quite find the flow it goes to dw, just help me out with the last line tell me what you think it means :)
@eminemforlifenoshit thanks man, means alot, i like getting feed back from any cunt who would check out this instrumental, the scene in my city wouldnt understand that man
Rhyme Disciples!!! Everyone Stay tuned for our new and improved track of this song, its about vietnam. This track is non profit so no stealing is involved, stay tuned for our shit later today!!!!
I'm a 13 year old rapper trying to get my voice heard so could you please check out my channel and tell me what you think. Remember to subscribe if you like what you hear :) & honest feedback please.
The only person i trust is my own reflection this is why its hard to show affection lost in love you're killing yourself with an odd obsession hope you learned a lesson and wake up to this vile world we livin in i been spinnin grins seeing double like binging twins fuck god im goin to hell for all my given sins cuz in the end ill win, death comes eternal darkness thats why im always spark this swisher as my day daminisher fatality finish her (mary jane is her)
the stories never told unfoldin dirty moldy dusty scrolls / revealin the bold decomposin words of old, truth sold out / while asleep a tooth pulled out highest bidder for ya liver / floatin down hades river, paddle in hand the battle at hand / war rattles the land various plans can u handle it man? / scams propagated wall street elated the truth highly debated / peoples egos and money deflated, direness never overstated / one day elite defeated till then defy death till we meet it
like a scene from saw, i was sore from being maimed in battle,
i'll sink ya like the titanic im outta this world with metaphors but this worlds not yours this is my planet,
put a scar on ya face im harsher than maise regardless of age fuck it im a tarnish this page, i bring carnage to raves worker harder than slaves for somethin like a grand a month man thats hardly a wage,fuck it..
oh this is brilliant i just searched this beat and you uploaded it today amazing man thanks btw i mixed one of your beats on my fright night mix you might want to check it out peace.
@DjBoyInTheBubble Not my beats...Produced by Think and made famous by Rhyme Asylum...I just took the time to loop and upload it...Appreciate the feedback though...I'll check that out now...
@DanLoutmouth
your lyrics r devilish,
hes not a guy you wana medel wiv,
im not preachin but the devil take ur second kid,
i wonder wat the weapon is'
losing limbs like a lepar is,
so be carefull wat u wish,
is it worthit for a petty scrpit
forresterL11 3 weeks ago
the solitry confindment,
got me moving mindless,
diesel, chees, ami'
t.c.h is a delight truss.
remove the ache'
frrom my head-ache'
put a eighth' in my cake'
straight' let it bake'
ring a friend,
tel em to participate...
forresterL11 3 weeks ago
This beat is sick .. really has that asylum feel to it ...
LAZrailkapinda 1 month ago
clutching the blade of jason with instructions from satan,
obeying evil orders so i cannot become forsaken/
fornicating under the command of hades, insanely
my perimeters like jupiter theres no way on earth you could invade me/
Share my cell in hell with Dr. shipman,
peforming unneccessary surgery on him to absorb the wisdom/
i go to ground zero and look to the skies of heaven,
and then get dragged back down to hell by zombies from 9-11/
DanLoutmouth 1 month ago
i sleep adjacent to a demon haunted basement
where freddy and jason bury dead bodies beneath the pavement
on the doors a posted notice i noticed the house is vacant
the 6 of june, 2006 is what its dated
4evrFazed 2 months ago
@4evrFazed , please give me your intepritations of that verse, what you think it means etc ( last line mostly )
just want some feedback before i put it in a song
ps. gotta rap this fast over it so if your reading along and cant quite find the flow it goes to dw, just help me out with the last line tell me what you think it means :)
4evrFazed 2 months ago
@4evrFazed good verse alright the last line is numerology 6-6-6
eminemforlifenoshit 3 weeks ago
@eminemforlifenoshit thanks man, means alot, i like getting feed back from any cunt who would check out this instrumental, the scene in my city wouldnt understand that man
4evrFazed 2 weeks ago
@4evrFazed yeah i feel yeah bro your time will come though keep it up mate
eminemforlifenoshit 2 weeks ago
I'm a zealous maven self powered like generators
real McCoy vs. emulators air em out like ventilators
raps tenant raider mind sharper than seven serrated razors
splitting atoms, serving ground zero late with the severance papers
rap maverick, spitting savage, shock value eleven tazers
menace maker, Dennis Mitchell on acid and pent-up anger
the pennant taker, the last immortal, I'll end your makers
gain their power like highlander severed heads, decor the saber
jj237 2 months ago
@jj237 it's half of my verse i recorded on this scizzahs beat called brain basher but i thought it still fit over this one lol
jj237 2 months ago
Rhyme Disciples!!! Everyone Stay tuned for our new and improved track of this song, its about vietnam. This track is non profit so no stealing is involved, stay tuned for our shit later today!!!!
RhymeDisciples 3 months ago
I Bring harm To' anyone melt your Tin Armor- you call your skeleton and Binge On The bones like if they were Chicken Fingers
I tell suicide patients Listen Quitter you want to kill yourself Cling the Big Sword don't use a little knife for the Wrist be a Winner!
My thought process is a Quick as ten Cheetahs who have superpowers and do laps around the world In a few Minutes
The King of all Genius my brain the motherboard, unpredictable like the ups and downs of Oprah's Torso!
Selling Opium Cargo
Childrenguild 3 months ago
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KriminalWarfare 3 months ago
TUFF !
hatemenow1986 4 months ago
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the stories never told unfoldin dirty moldy dusty scrolls / revealin the bold decomposin words of old, truth sold out / while asleep a tooth pulled out highest bidder for ya liver / floatin down hades river, paddle in hand the battle at hand / war rattles the land various plans can u handle it man? / scams propagated wall street elated the truth highly debated / peoples egos and money deflated, direness never overstated / one day elite defeated till then defy death till we meet it
elusiveone2007 4 months ago
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elusiveone2007 4 months ago
may you send me the download for this? i wanna use it for a nonprofit demo
annunakisound 5 months ago
Woke up in a room with a fucked up headache
It's dark and cold what's going on I don't get it
lights went on all of a sudden I'm being interrogated
The first question was like what do you know about us
I questioned where am I , who the fuck are you cowards
The man responded like You're abducted
you're being held hostage as a terrorist property of the US government
LAZrailkapinda 5 months ago
@LAZrailkapinda thats pretty sick dude. its a little story, but im baked so i get the message better
tisilwm 5 months ago
I started wilding out acting like a nutcase
I've been told that I'm in a prisoners base
Then I Realized my hands are cuffed
I started shakin' coughed up blood almost chocked
Looked up had a glimps of 2 men talking bout the end being near
Revolution rised it's here
LAZrailkapinda 5 months ago
sick gaming music =o
puTTe0304 6 months ago
i support abortion plus iv only cynical thoughts,
i put a swarm of wasp's in the still attached umbilical cord,
im a hideous person possesed wit hideous thoughts
an u can fuck lyrical daggers iv got lyrical swords
DanLoutmouth 6 months ago
when i came too i was chained and shackled,
like a scene from saw, i was sore from being maimed in battle,
i'll sink ya like the titanic im outta this world with metaphors but this worlds not yours this is my planet,
put a scar on ya face im harsher than maise regardless of age fuck it im a tarnish this page, i bring carnage to raves worker harder than slaves for somethin like a grand a month man thats hardly a wage,fuck it..
DanLoutmouth 6 months ago
of Raw"
She got an abortion, diminished a little life,
afterwards thinkin what she done, she causin strife.
A devil was created, permeated, in her tummy,
it's crawlin out, i can hear it shout, mummy?
take a butcher knife and sever its breathin,
a new devil was created its beneath him, beneath me. a demon.
this is the end, vault of the underworld, i got the key, to bend,
the answer to the riddle of our purpose, our plee.
pullin our people down underneath the surface. can't you see?
ipodtouchistheshit 7 months ago
OFFICIAL Instrumental Version uploaded by Producer Think...Check it out in the Video Responses!!!...
mrmidnightnight 10 months ago
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Instrumental now up on my page! Enjoy!
ThinkFE 10 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Official Instrumental up on my page now!
ThinkFE 10 months ago
clean and dirty in one
Ezzzion 11 months ago
heyy awsomee loopp man you think u can loop poison penmanship by possessed of ra?
POSER5150 1 year ago
@POSER5150 Can't be done man...Soz...
mrmidnightnight 1 year ago
@mrmidnightnight all good man!
POSER5150 1 year ago
pretty good loop man, been tryna find this beat forever..its perfect for what i wanna use it for..much props to you man..
UniversalCypher 1 year ago
Yeahh mann .. Fire ..
capital029 1 year ago
oh this is brilliant i just searched this beat and you uploaded it today amazing man thanks btw i mixed one of your beats on my fright night mix you might want to check it out peace.
DjBoyInTheBubble 1 year ago
@DjBoyInTheBubble Not my beats...Produced by Think and made famous by Rhyme Asylum...I just took the time to loop and upload it...Appreciate the feedback though...I'll check that out now...
mrmidnightnight 1 year ago