Although you do begin with a great thesis, along with a good hook and necessary context, you lack proper evidence and analysis which guide your point across. Without the evidence, your statements have absolutely no foundations on which to lay themselves upon. I would consider revising your idea and adding the proper elements to make the point shine more clearly.
Are your lips soft funnyz??? i bet they r ..............do you have a girlfriend??? Hope not cause im gonna come over to your house and kiss ya!!!! (beware) XD
corporate america is telling you to sit at home and stay on the computer so they can document your life. You would have more affect by not video taping yourself. you encourage others to make videos like your own while they watch your online govt. memoried computer.
@Te4mTipsy I am sorry 'Te4mTipsy' for not being as cool as you. I will try to be on a higher level of coolness while commenting a video. Btw, have a nice day and stay cute! (:
Hahaha. You were talking about CORPORATE AMERICA ruining halloween? That's a goon one. You should come to Poland for halloween. Half the people you'll try to get candy from will call you a demon, devil, and say, that they obey catholic traditions, and not the devilish ones... HAPPY HALLOWEEN.
In Sweden we have like one day for the spirits and stuff where we go to the graveyard and light candles but also one day a week beffo that's like "american hallowen"
@oscaroscar123123 u have a day for that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when i read a book thats creeper enough i get all my friends to read it and then we have a sleepover in my closet(we end up intertwined and in pain the next day) to have all nighters while writing notes to the spirits on a hand mirror. (mirrors and closets are the gait ways to the spirits just like how eyes are the gait way to the soul so u can automatically tell what type of person they are bye their eyes)
Halloween was originally a Pagan Festival like you said, but it is a died out religion pretty much, if it was not for corperate America, I doubt that anybody would even celebrate Halloween at all, so don't blame it on them Halloween would be non-existent, blame "corperate America" for ruining Christmas, or Easter.
Funnyz for President!!! Down with the Corporate Tyrants!!! Take back Halloween from the lobbyist's & special interest groups!!! Vote Funnyz!!!.... and Yes, this was a funny video. So, :p to the complainers. :)
I wish I could go trick or treating, but I live in Luxembourg and here they don't do that, so when you go ringing people's door bells and you say: "TRICK OR TREAT" they look at you like: Wtf are they talking about? o.o
Although you do begin with a great thesis, along with a good hook and necessary context, you lack proper evidence and analysis which guide your point across. Without the evidence, your statements have absolutely no foundations on which to lay themselves upon. I would consider revising your idea and adding the proper elements to make the point shine more clearly.
DeathsAnarchy 1 month ago
That's Zelda music in the background!
AJWoody94 1 month ago 2
NOOOOOOOOOOO
Benjwurm 3 months ago
Was half of that suppost to make sense?
Curlykat39 3 months ago
song sounds scary
cupcake21202 4 months ago
You sound like you have no idea wht your saying!!
Simplebeing2435 6 months ago
wow there so fucking retarded!!!! i say NO! NO! sssSTOP IT! XD
kelleywazhere 6 months ago
Is that the friday the 13th nintendo game music in the background? :D
WhimsicalUnicorn 7 months ago
WTF?? Why everyone wants a top rated comment??? LOL :)
lunaa1920 7 months ago 3
yes
evie367 7 months ago
hmmm im going to get some tacos and this comment better be top rated
Mrcheesegame 7 months ago
You FAIL at being serious
KyleesLovable 8 months ago
love your lips
Briannaly1 8 months ago
i kant wiggle my ears
R3grEtSuCkS 8 months ago
i really like the instrumental!
bwilson330 8 months ago
Thumbs up if u think Funnyz is funny and dont like the creepy stalker comments about his lips
Treblemaker888 8 months ago 70
i wish i had a lisp.
mamba0rules 8 months ago
i just want my candy
MrCaMory 8 months ago
@MrCaMory u don't have lollies :D
smileyfaceyou 8 months ago
yes. gets them damn kids off meh lawn!
4536b 8 months ago
@gossad 24
xfization 8 months ago
sometimes i feel the need to scream. (aaaaaaah)
i eat glass when im depressed. (it hurts)
sometimes cheese brings out the best in people.
coke is my husband.
the world will end when funnyz's random videos end.
this random comment is for you zach. thumbs up! xxx
CarrieMacOfficial 8 months ago 4
This has been flagged as spam show
really want to kiss you right now how awkward hahaha
JellyBeanFarts1 8 months ago
@funnyz do you have an xbox? :P
11dubbin11 9 months ago
Are your lips soft funnyz??? i bet they r ..............do you have a girlfriend??? Hope not cause im gonna come over to your house and kiss ya!!!! (beware) XD
Frida43454 9 months ago
wow.
nuff said.
annnnnddddd. my birthday is on Halloween!!!!!
so, i kinda get teased a lottt, but i dont care.
MaRaeCambron 9 months ago
wow.
nuff said.
MaRaeCambron 9 months ago
@funnyz, I thought this was suppose to be a comical video?
I saw a lot of childish behavior, and a terrible attempt to act serous; as if you have learned anything from your government/history classes.
ImCampingHard 10 months ago
your lips look plush
lucaandtray4ever 10 months ago
puck Corporate America then
goku2245 10 months ago
This is akward but i love yur EYES theyre so prretty
ElsieAguilar79 10 months ago
Do you have botox in your lips ?
Zwapify 10 months ago
how old are you? cause i would definitely tap that :) but im fourteen :(
bookfreak44 11 months ago 2
awkward i am scared! jk:)
beccaismydog 11 months ago
is this a prank video?
mslego9 11 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
dont take the piss
LunarDragonWolfess 11 months ago
douchebaggin
daydaymay12345 11 months ago
M BIRTHDAY IS HALOWEEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!
SnowBerey 11 months ago
your not clever or charismatic enough sorry dude your stupid face overpowers everything
TheSexchicken 11 months ago
He has a big bottom lip
DoubleASanchez 11 months ago
I LOVED HIS HAIR ON THIS VID :DDDD <3333
zellyblackrox14 1 year ago
ZELDA!!!!!!!!!
JustCrashedIntoAPole 1 year ago 3
name of the song at the background?
xxR0bin 1 year ago
I only came to this vid cuz Ronald McDonald was on the picture lol
lavabite8size 1 year ago
@deedfffrrygtrfdweghy
RockmanYoshi 10 months ago
i think u shoudle call the a team
SolarTheGreat 1 year ago
he made this on my b day
SushiAndPaco 1 year ago
How many of those words are in a dictionary?
Nicoliction 1 year ago
How many of those words are in a dictionary?
Nicoliction 1 year ago
You, are my hero.
BurningStars94 1 year ago
How would u like to suck my balls
Grandmas kisses u faggot
Buzzsaw0990 1 year ago
your lips look soft...... (:
i want to kiss them.
and it pisses me off that the most liked comment is grammatically incorrect.... ocd is kicking in... ehhhh.
lorena93CHESTER 1 year ago 87
@lorena93CHESTER Hahaha. Incorrect grammar "pisses you off", and yet you don't use any capitalization or type in full sentences...? :P
manateesareawesome 7 months ago 4
@manateesareawesome nou gtfo
lorena93CHESTER 7 months ago
@lorena93CHESTER haha they do look soft lol
alexiskern00 7 months ago
@lorena93CHESTER ok...
Fist2803 1 month ago
Music in background makes me sad. :(
julian102104 1 year ago
corporate america is telling you to sit at home and stay on the computer so they can document your life. You would have more affect by not video taping yourself. you encourage others to make videos like your own while they watch your online govt. memoried computer.
bikinguy14 1 year ago
Ha I love you
SweatshirtsKickButt 1 year ago
Dude, how you talk is the shizz.
carlyforniakid 1 year ago
@carlyforniakid who still say's shizz!? wtf
Te4mTipsy 1 year ago
@Te4mTipsy I am sorry 'Te4mTipsy' for not being as cool as you. I will try to be on a higher level of coolness while commenting a video. Btw, have a nice day and stay cute! (:
carlyforniakid 1 year ago
Y0u're s0 hipster, Zach.
cloudsovercacti29 1 year ago
<-------------- Subscribbe :) <3
CokeWithaCherry 1 year ago
WHAT IS THIS SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
adamleclaireskate 1 year ago
it's a joke you RITARDS.
xoiluvmusicox 1 year ago
hell yeah LP4 BY RATATAT
yoitslilliful 1 year ago
No, i will not let coperate america ruin my halloween :D
Happy Halloween!:)
JustGabbyFromJersey 1 year ago
I rather not learn fictional styles of celebration.. I rather buy candy and hand it out to people wearing mask.
1waitandbleed1 1 year ago
you look like a psycho
lulabearlove 1 year ago
I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR POSTINGS....THX RC
RONNNRONNN 1 year ago
AHAHAHAHAHAHa
krazedkidfilms 1 year ago
wow :O
ariiiianna 1 year ago
Luv ur laugh haha come see my vidzz!
makakoned 1 year ago
You are soo funny! Haha... yeaaa that's all I had to say
giggleninjas 1 year ago
you fail at being serious.
FWIDIFICATION 1 year ago 119
wow that was hilarious-_-
Devastationzzz 1 year ago
I don't live in America so I'm totally fine with it :D lol
but many holidays n stuff here where I live aren't being celebrated too, though, but the country didn't ruin it, the so called 'kids' did it...
LilSkottie 1 year ago
So is valentines day, Easter, St. Patties day, and any other holiday we celebrate in corporate america.
Who gives a shit about halloween or christmas, free stuff FTW.
PenisAtTheDisc0 1 year ago 4
it wasn't that good
doughysmith 1 year ago
Hahaha. You were talking about CORPORATE AMERICA ruining halloween? That's a goon one. You should come to Poland for halloween. Half the people you'll try to get candy from will call you a demon, devil, and say, that they obey catholic traditions, and not the devilish ones... HAPPY HALLOWEEN.
MimisSpaceShip 1 year ago
BOO!
BLEGAN 1 year ago
@BLEGAN scary boo... not bad boo. like.. BOO! AHH!! not BOO HISS!!!
BLEGAN 1 year ago
Ha! :p Nice attempt to stay serious throughout this. :) ~ I hope you had a good Halloween.
maintoc 1 year ago
Aww your voice isn't cracking =[
XxMissAnnoyedxX 1 year ago
you said dic-tatorship HAHA
BTW is that stubble forming on your upper lip? You tha man..Z
alabassbone 1 year ago
i like cloose ups of your face, it attracts me
supergirl6958 1 year ago
halloween is just a day where you can go to peoples houses, ask for candy and not get arrested.
misslautner99 1 year ago 2
Zelda Music?
JosiahWheeler 1 year ago
@JosiahWheeler go to zreomusic dotcom / listen for zelda orchestrations
alabassbone 1 year ago
I just have my monkey do all the tricker treating for me. Yes it is very well trained.
dieselburner 1 year ago
Nice editing and writing , V
FilmTV101 1 year ago
BALANCE
lightscanturnpurple 1 year ago
Yikes - he's speaking goobledegook! He's been posessed!
ProFriend 1 year ago
Make sure they didn't Spike the Hershey Bars! xD
Jonas2Cute3 1 year ago
I like the music, comes from Friday the 13th on NES.
silenceofthehills 1 year ago
I just got back from trick or treating
^_^
amazingproductions82 1 year ago 2
do u still go out? for halloween, that is
SKATEMASTERS3 1 year ago
ratatat is the best
MrGrandmaProductions 1 year ago
haha i like how you use big words.
madamberry 1 year ago
onision jr.
iThinkiForgotMyName 1 year ago
CALIFORNIA ON CATS!!!!
ImGonnaYouYourTube 1 year ago
@ImGonnaYouYourTube wtf
KoMighty 1 year ago
I love you XD
AwesomerThenU3056 1 year ago
i have back pain.
itssally100 1 year ago 2
WOOOHOOO RATATTATTT
KalmanWeinsteinMusic 1 year ago
i highly enjoy your face
amandaapapp 1 year ago
your skin is so soft
fairfaxsurfshoprider 1 year ago
yes. that is my favorite holiday.
better than xmas.
this year.
fml.
im staying home.
im not even giving out candy.
just gunna site here.
and do nothing.
MileysBigestFan1423 1 year ago
Yes, lets bring back sex, death and rock and roll..
JimW925 1 year ago
happy halloween zach!! :D
lexilulu0212 1 year ago
That's right, its not about baby Jesus any more like it used to be.
Philinspaces 1 year ago
In Sweden we have like one day for the spirits and stuff where we go to the graveyard and light candles but also one day a week beffo that's like "american hallowen"
oscaroscar123123 1 year ago
@oscaroscar123123 u have a day for that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when i read a book thats creeper enough i get all my friends to read it and then we have a sleepover in my closet(we end up intertwined and in pain the next day) to have all nighters while writing notes to the spirits on a hand mirror. (mirrors and closets are the gait ways to the spirits just like how eyes are the gait way to the soul so u can automatically tell what type of person they are bye their eyes)
prymmprymm 8 months ago
@prymmprymm really is that true??? you can tell peoples personality by there eyes? hmm thtts interesting tell me more pleaseeeee
quaker261 7 months ago
That sounds like musci from Zelda! lol :)
444rr 1 year ago
And I thought you were going to have some scream thing at the end.
moviesunrated 1 year ago
huuuuuuuuuuuuuuh ? lol
melmelmelmelmel12695 1 year ago
Halloween was originally a Pagan Festival like you said, but it is a died out religion pretty much, if it was not for corperate America, I doubt that anybody would even celebrate Halloween at all, so don't blame it on them Halloween would be non-existent, blame "corperate America" for ruining Christmas, or Easter.
MINI-RANT OVER.
AliJoe94 1 year ago
Heck No!!!
stuckymiddle12 1 year ago
big words hurt head D:
ZacharyZips 1 year ago 2
like this if u noticed there is no 1:22
bandblue09 1 year ago 101
@bandblue09 You can actually skip to 1:22 using the mouse, but thumbs up! : )
koolen2 10 months ago
WTF?
footballsk8r 1 year ago
i wanna become a vlogger like you any suggestions?
brittney11hunt11 1 year ago
@brittney11hunt11 yeah buy a video camera
footballsk8r 1 year ago
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brittney11hunt11 1 year ago
happy halloween!
theworldisnotmine 1 year ago
true dat!
tictac113cp 1 year ago
Hey I'm Zach and I have a LISSSSP!
ipodtouch20 1 year ago
happy halloween! :D
tskater94 1 year ago
:D im impressed! funnyz is smart! (:
itsmichellecullen 1 year ago
RATATAT= my love.
magsmuffin4 1 year ago
Funnyz for President!!! Down with the Corporate Tyrants!!! Take back Halloween from the lobbyist's & special interest groups!!! Vote Funnyz!!!.... and Yes, this was a funny video. So, :p to the complainers. :)
JayX94X 1 year ago 2
nothing against you but i hate lisps
THESUPERSKULLY 1 year ago
lol, nice vid :)
lovely hair at 1:07 , lmao.
bellaboo785 1 year ago
HAHAHA :D
BlameChrisTV 1 year ago
Snicker.
stillbellykai 1 year ago
your videos suck now. sorry. I liked it better when you just joked around and did stupid stuff. oh well im still staying subbed.
Thebrownelementsk8er 1 year ago
@Thebrownelementsk8er His videos are GREAT!
BlameChrisTV 1 year ago
@BlameChrisTV youve never seen his old old stuff from 4 years which he deleted . That sutff was really stupid but realllyyy funny.
Thebrownelementsk8er 1 year ago
haha you could't make a serious face that was funny
monchiblonchi 1 year ago
Love your laugh
Musicluver587 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
im sorry but this isnt funny and its stupid
ohsnapitsmegly 1 year ago
@ohsnapitsmegly it's funny!
BlameChrisTV 1 year ago
im sorry but this isnt funny and stupid
ohsnapitsmegly 1 year ago
lool :D
kokodash5 1 year ago
omg you laugh is so cute!!!!!!
disneyfreakXD112 1 year ago 69
Are you using big words on purpose? lol
JustJaida 1 year ago
I wish I could go trick or treating, but I live in Luxembourg and here they don't do that, so when you go ringing people's door bells and you say: "TRICK OR TREAT" they look at you like: Wtf are they talking about? o.o
MrsPokerfacex0 1 year ago
First
skate4king 1 year ago
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
polkadottedpants 1 year ago
It's nothing more than a day for kids to get free candy
5starDeadman 1 year ago 75
@5starDeadman whats wrong with that? lol:)
Funnyishful 1 year ago
hA!
blahblah14000 1 year ago
@blahblah14000 ooooooooo
JungleJord 1 year ago
@JungleJord lol
blahblah14000 1 year ago