Birthday Beatings(Indie Martial Arts Comedy)

[john1302161200]

its better not to tell anyone when is your birthday

[DJJJINSTL]

not bad i like do more

[godfist1]

1:59 to 2:00 Bruce Lee moment

[beauxmoo]

fun and light hearted romp of violent goodness... bravo

[godfist1]

cool

[djon82]

That last punch was my favorite.. I kept rewinding it... hilarious.. CLASSIC!

[kageyami11]

Exaggerate your punches and kicks more. Good idea though. ;) I might end up stealing.

[TheFlashpoint75]

you guys are getting better cant wait for you guys to get to the level of jabronie films and rising tiger keep it up looking foward to your next upload

[dardrex777]

At the beginning I think a sfx should have been needed

badass fall at 1:01

Overall with cinematography you should look at these basic mistakes to correct. Especially rule of thirds... keep a person's eyes in the top third of the screen. Avoid headroom. You can fix it in post with letterbox cropping. You also cross the 180 line alot and it was a little distracting.

Overall there was improvement in areas like comic pacing, dialogue, some editing, and some movement.