U did an awsome job mate! Love the close-up shots, brilliant orientation and video capture....the design concept was the most intriguing aspect of this piece of work. its amazing how you convey a simple action into an a fascinating transformation. Well done!!
It all goes very well together, the music could be louder and the voice of less volume to make it more...emotional but otherwise, very good work, well done :)
Thank you, but the music is intentionally quiet, it's just a backing track that's simply there to compliment and empower the poem and the imagery. Any louder and it would distract from the words of the poem, which are the main focus of the video. Thanks for the constructive criticism though.
Wow...I am so proud of you Dan. :) This is really amazing. The three of you really made a great piece. Great music, poem, and of course video. It all fits so well. GREAT JOB!!!
this guy has been a good friend of mine for years. a great guy & great reading & song writer & a great friend
jefferyalbergo 1 year ago
is this this the same martyn from sky about to rain
straitdavidm 1 year ago
U did an awsome job mate! Love the close-up shots, brilliant orientation and video capture....the design concept was the most intriguing aspect of this piece of work. its amazing how you convey a simple action into an a fascinating transformation. Well done!!
beproudofwhoyouare 1 year ago 3
beautiful
RebelRoxx 1 year ago
martyn so great a read
jefferyalbergo 1 year ago 5
It all goes very well together, the music could be louder and the voice of less volume to make it more...emotional but otherwise, very good work, well done :)
Princesspeach2007 1 year ago
@Princesspeach2007
Thank you, but the music is intentionally quiet, it's just a backing track that's simply there to compliment and empower the poem and the imagery. Any louder and it would distract from the words of the poem, which are the main focus of the video. Thanks for the constructive criticism though.
wolves198907 1 year ago 9
Very cool--thumbs up and faved! (and subbed!)
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago 6
Wow...I am so proud of you Dan. :) This is really amazing. The three of you really made a great piece. Great music, poem, and of course video. It all fits so well. GREAT JOB!!!
whitewolf725 1 year ago 3