AWWWW....GEEEEEEEEE...........Whilikers! I am so disappointed. I can't wait to tell the judges at the five film festivals that I have won with this what lousy taste they have. Maybe I can give them you e-mail and let them tell you in person that they are really, really sorry they made such a grave mistake. I mean....they are only professional writers, producers, directors and actors and I am certain they could not possibly live up tp YOUR standards
I love it, because the bad acting reminds me of hilarious DRTV infomercials. It insults the viewer's intelligence an awful lot though. Don't quit yer dayjob... unless it involves writing. In which case, quit your dayjob.
rather enjoyable acting and whatnot, although isn't it kind of misguiding to people? I mean about strangers and whatnot? Although I guess whatever makes money.
Thank you so much for your comments likethecats, I also enjoyed your site so much I subscribed to it. What you said was probably the best comment I have gotten and I have had many who liked it.
suspensful and foreboding, creepy judge with ill fitting baggy coat, what does he have under it or the guy in the work coveralls, is he the guy that can gain your trust. which of those guys was it gonna be. And a documentary is like writing a 10 minute speech, facts and you must entertain, tough. d-mn good.
Let me tell you...documentaries are the hardest films to make and to get into festivals, because it can't be a simple telling of facts, it has to be entertaining also. With a short film or even a feature length, you have no facts you have to adhere to, so you can concentrate on the entertainment factor. I truly wish you the best and know how hard it is with a documentary. My entire cost for the short, a SAG signatory, was UNDER $400. All the best to you and the film.
Dear tweetme....if by "GAY" you mean we had fun,,,that is true. If you are using the modern day meaning of that word, then I think either my ex or my present wife and my children might dispute that.
TY so much Radioactive fo the great review. I have won two film fest with this short and am now turning it into a full length feature with a very different ending. Just hope I can sell the script to a good production company.
zmoss83....Oh my....what shall I do? When such a noted mtion picture critic as yourself does not like something, I guess I will just have tho throw the whole thing out (sure I will...lol)I mean just because it won two international film festivals and a producer has commisssioned me to make it into a full length feature...what do they know? Ahhhhh me...guess I will just have to burn it and begin again, (And if you believe that, have a great condo to sell you in Toadsuck, Ark.)
Thank you so much evilstephen....doubt that you are too eveiul when you can make comments like that. The short is being turned into a full length feature. It has now won two film fests and I hope it will stand a few more. I would not call it "amazing" , but I TRULY thank you for doing so.
@okiewriter1 Congratulations! We have a full length documentary-see the Trailer called Rebel Scum, hasn't even got into one Film Festival. This is something they put Thousands into making,company called WORLDSTORM. A lot of thousands. Have to admit I'm a bit jealous, but this is good, You deserve it!
TY so very much saling and paul....not often I get two favorable comments in a row. Highly appreciated and if I knew where you two were, would send a TY card,.,,,LOL
TY smurasian....I am in the top 50 at Cannes and if I were to win there, I would make it into a full length movie. Already have the storyboards done for two hour film....this short would be the last 10 min of the full length film. A win at Cannes guarantees you distribution and money. Get me some more "likes" please...need them.
TY smurasian....I am in the top 50 at Cannes and if I were to win there, I would make it into a full length movie. Already have the storyboards done for two hour film....this short would be the last 10 min of the full length film. A win at Cannes guarantees you distribution and money for feature film. Get me some more "likes" please...need them.
Thank you so much clambert50. I hope you took the extra 30 seconds it takes to press the like button. I have been invited to ne a "Partner" by YouTube and they will actually sell spots around my movie and I get a share of the income. Can sure use it too.....lol. I just need about 10 more likes as a person whom does not like me got 9 of his frieds to "Dislaike" it all at the same time. Need to offset that so if you liked it...pleas click on the "LIKE" button and get me some money flowing in.
smurasian-TY for the good notice, now I need people to "LIKE" the video, an old enemy got friends to go there and dislike it even if they didn't. I am up for "Partership" with YouTube and I need about 10 more likes before they will consider it, With over 1,500 views in three weeks you would think people would take the time just to press the "Like" or "Dislike" keys, but they haven't.
@red8five ...Thank you red8.....You liked it and so did judges at two film fests and appparantly a lot of other people because i has had almost 1,400 hits in two weeks
I hope this was supposed to be a comedy. If so, it's one of the funniest things I've ever seen. But I have a feeling it was intended to be serious. That makes it one of the most unintentionally hilarious things EVER.
@ChallengeBrobst ...I am so glad you got a chuckle out of it, being the tremendously touted film critic that you are It is too bad that the judges at two film fests did not come around to your obviously intellectual way of thinking ,,,they awarded it first place in Short Drama and not comedy
@MrStonedJosh . I guess being stoned makes you claivoyant....too bad the fest judges that liked it so much did not see it your way and it has about 1,300 hits in 2 weeks....these people must not have see through it and become bored either
Ummmmmmmm. What. The. Fish.
ChallengeBrobst 2 months ago
AWWWW....GEEEEEEEEE...........Whilikers! I am so disappointed. I can't wait to tell the judges at the five film festivals that I have won with this what lousy taste they have. Maybe I can give them you e-mail and let them tell you in person that they are really, really sorry they made such a grave mistake. I mean....they are only professional writers, producers, directors and actors and I am certain they could not possibly live up tp YOUR standards
okiewriter1 4 months ago
I love it, because the bad acting reminds me of hilarious DRTV infomercials. It insults the viewer's intelligence an awful lot though. Don't quit yer dayjob... unless it involves writing. In which case, quit your dayjob.
RedDaVincy 5 months ago
I wish my uncle was like that!
mrpockets730 5 months ago
rather enjoyable acting and whatnot, although isn't it kind of misguiding to people? I mean about strangers and whatnot? Although I guess whatever makes money.
Moorsie900 6 months ago
Got this converted into full length screenplay Looking for more money right now so I can hire Kathy Bates to play the lead role
okiewriter 6 months ago
Thank you so much for your comments likethecats, I also enjoyed your site so much I subscribed to it. What you said was probably the best comment I have gotten and I have had many who liked it.
okiewriter 7 months ago
suspensful and foreboding, creepy judge with ill fitting baggy coat, what does he have under it or the guy in the work coveralls, is he the guy that can gain your trust. which of those guys was it gonna be. And a documentary is like writing a 10 minute speech, facts and you must entertain, tough. d-mn good.
likethecats 7 months ago
Let me tell you...documentaries are the hardest films to make and to get into festivals, because it can't be a simple telling of facts, it has to be entertaining also. With a short film or even a feature length, you have no facts you have to adhere to, so you can concentrate on the entertainment factor. I truly wish you the best and know how hard it is with a documentary. My entire cost for the short, a SAG signatory, was UNDER $400. All the best to you and the film.
okiewriter 7 months ago
Dear tweetme....if by "GAY" you mean we had fun,,,that is true. If you are using the modern day meaning of that word, then I think either my ex or my present wife and my children might dispute that.
okiewriter 7 months ago
Gay !!
tweeetme 7 months ago
TY so much Radioactive fo the great review. I have won two film fest with this short and am now turning it into a full length feature with a very different ending. Just hope I can sell the script to a good production company.
okiewriter 7 months ago
I AM THE 6000 VIEWER! WOOT!
This is very epic, i love it.
*Thumbs up - Fav*
RadioactiveBlutonium 7 months ago 2
Have no idea got it off a CD of non-copyrighted songs from a service.called "Footage Firm".
okiewriter1 8 months ago
whats the name of that song played in the beginning?
gibbs0115 8 months ago
zmoss83....Oh my....what shall I do? When such a noted mtion picture critic as yourself does not like something, I guess I will just have tho throw the whole thing out (sure I will...lol)I mean just because it won two international film festivals and a producer has commisssioned me to make it into a full length feature...what do they know? Ahhhhh me...guess I will just have to burn it and begin again, (And if you believe that, have a great condo to sell you in Toadsuck, Ark.)
okiewriter1 8 months ago 2
honestly,,, that was shit...
zmoss83 8 months ago
Thank you so much evilstephen....doubt that you are too eveiul when you can make comments like that. The short is being turned into a full length feature. It has now won two film fests and I hope it will stand a few more. I would not call it "amazing" , but I TRULY thank you for doing so.
okiewriter 9 months ago
Truly amazing, perfect acting, not to flashy, and a great twist.
evilstephen902 9 months ago
Won the Bare Bones International Film Festival with this short and am in the process of rewriting it into a 90 min. feature
okiewriter1 9 months ago
@okiewriter1 Congratulations! We have a full length documentary-see the Trailer called Rebel Scum, hasn't even got into one Film Festival. This is something they put Thousands into making,company called WORLDSTORM. A lot of thousands. Have to admit I'm a bit jealous, but this is good, You deserve it!
scumgod13 7 months ago
TY so very much saling and paul....not often I get two favorable comments in a row. Highly appreciated and if I knew where you two were, would send a TY card,.,,,LOL
okiewriter1 11 months ago
quietly but startingly BRILLIANT.
sailingtohome 11 months ago
Congratulations on a film both well done AND suspense-filled. Loved it.
paulstoneish1 11 months ago
TY smurasian....I am in the top 50 at Cannes and if I were to win there, I would make it into a full length movie. Already have the storyboards done for two hour film....this short would be the last 10 min of the full length film. A win at Cannes guarantees you distribution and money. Get me some more "likes" please...need them.
okiewriter1 11 months ago
TY smurasian....I am in the top 50 at Cannes and if I were to win there, I would make it into a full length movie. Already have the storyboards done for two hour film....this short would be the last 10 min of the full length film. A win at Cannes guarantees you distribution and money for feature film. Get me some more "likes" please...need them.
okiewriter1 11 months ago
best of luck at the film fests. this deserves a big thumbs up
smurasian 11 months ago 2
Thank you so much clambert50. I hope you took the extra 30 seconds it takes to press the like button. I have been invited to ne a "Partner" by YouTube and they will actually sell spots around my movie and I get a share of the income. Can sure use it too.....lol. I just need about 10 more likes as a person whom does not like me got 9 of his frieds to "Dislaike" it all at the same time. Need to offset that so if you liked it...pleas click on the "LIKE" button and get me some money flowing in.
okiewriter1 11 months ago
very very well done. just terriffic
clambert50 11 months ago 2
smurasian-TY for the good notice, now I need people to "LIKE" the video, an old enemy got friends to go there and dislike it even if they didn't. I am up for "Partership" with YouTube and I need about 10 more likes before they will consider it, With over 1,500 views in three weeks you would think people would take the time just to press the "Like" or "Dislike" keys, but they haven't.
okiewriter1 11 months ago
excellent!
smurasian 11 months ago 2
I like it! Who ever thought this was a comedy must be serial killer himself...
red8five 11 months ago 3
@red8five ...Thank you red8.....You liked it and so did judges at two film fests and appparantly a lot of other people because i has had almost 1,400 hits in two weeks
okiewriter1 11 months ago 2
I hope this was supposed to be a comedy. If so, it's one of the funniest things I've ever seen. But I have a feeling it was intended to be serious. That makes it one of the most unintentionally hilarious things EVER.
ChallengeBrobst 11 months ago
@ChallengeBrobst ...I am so glad you got a chuckle out of it, being the tremendously touted film critic that you are It is too bad that the judges at two film fests did not come around to your obviously intellectual way of thinking ,,,they awarded it first place in Short Drama and not comedy
okiewriter1 11 months ago 3
this was way too predictable.......
MrStonedJosh 11 months ago
@MrStonedJosh ...Just saw your profile.....maybe being stoned isn't so bad if you can predict alll the is going to happen
okiewriter1 11 months ago 3
@MrStonedJosh . I guess being stoned makes you claivoyant....too bad the fest judges that liked it so much did not see it your way and it has about 1,300 hits in 2 weeks....these people must not have see through it and become bored either
okiewriter1 11 months ago 2