hey bro, you know while I was listening to this song I thought this would make a hell of nice soundtrack for a romantic movie, that being said, keep up the awesome work, who knows someday you'll be signing your first contract too.
this is a beautiful song with beautiful heartfelt lyrics and you have a very good voice...please send me the finished product...though this one sounds great like it is ....i totally get it.......keep up the good work.....k
Who am i to judge, i was not mad on it, sounds a bit brian wilson ish ,get a hook .however i thought the production was good and i would keep on going as its a lot better than the crap you hear on the radio,once again ,who am i to judge
Yes thanks to sending me an e-mail I don't know who you were but I thought I would have a listen to the song. Great lyrics, I really like the song. I felt that you voice was sliding in and out of key sometimes slight hesitation to be directly on the note, you do say you wanted feedback. Yet the sum is really good and the lyrics are great, well sung
its nice and lovely song, i just had a songbird for a week so the lyric really touching ^__^
the rhythm is good, smooth, but I feel some periods just a little bit.. er like.. not really .. flow to the heart. however, its a very nice song, beautyful! 5 stars
oh do you have a midi file or the music sheet of the vocal of this song? ^_^ i want to try it on harmonica, if i can ^_^
I really liked the lyrics here, you put the words together very neatly. The whistling now and then made a nice effect, since it's about a "songbird", and it also makes the song sound more naive in a way.
The song makes me want to hold up those candlelights and wave them:)
Hi , My name is Jake . This is my second song I ever wrote . Please keep in mind that the vocal is not done yet plus it's in the wrong key for my voice. If you would like to comment , please try to focus on the lyrics , melody and music .
I Love your sound. I hope we can work together in the future . Wolfie thank you
sirwolfgang 1 year ago
Enjoyed it. Definitely great for only your second song.
1Kingdomite 1 year ago
hey bro, you know while I was listening to this song I thought this would make a hell of nice soundtrack for a romantic movie, that being said, keep up the awesome work, who knows someday you'll be signing your first contract too.
slashoasis156 1 year ago
this is really good! extremly awesome for only ur secound song :)
T0EZY 1 year ago
Actually, it's not the kind of music I use to listen, but it's really awesome, a beautiful song with a beautiful melody... good luck to continue
ouallvinc 1 year ago
i like this song!!!! aloottttt!
sk8rchicox 1 year ago
this is a beautiful song with beautiful heartfelt lyrics and you have a very good voice...please send me the finished product...though this one sounds great like it is ....i totally get it.......keep up the good work.....k
KATLINRIMER08 1 year ago
Aww....so sweet! Congrats!
Keep working, dude!
Mia ♥
MiaStoryMusic 1 year ago
good job and mahalo for the vid.
ROYALKONCEPTS808 1 year ago
I LOVE it. <3
byanahinton 1 year ago
like it keep it up and you do have a great voice. thanks for sharing this with us all
paganmoondance 1 year ago
sweet song...made me smile :)
GaaraGirl339 1 year ago
nice, keep going dude
skate1990fingerboard 1 year ago
Keep on singing it was cool!
Rulerocker 1 year ago
your lyrics are good
Singlechicka 1 year ago
good 5*
Inky261 1 year ago
this is great u hsould write some more songs u got a nice voice i would love to here some more of ur song
HidalgoLovers 1 year ago
nice:) ur voice is good!!!
LOVELOVELOVEJUSTIN... ignore this. pointless
sarahhhhhh14 1 year ago
it waz nice..
silentlokz17 1 year ago
This is not the kinda music i listen to but its got a chance i think if you worked on it a lil more , keep up the good work :)
TAZZMAN316 1 year ago
This was a very beautiful and sweet song. Thanks for sharing and definitely keep it up.
averyms 1 year ago
keep it up....:)
Stinakat 1 year ago
keep it up man.
sosodefjoel 1 year ago
Who am i to judge, i was not mad on it, sounds a bit brian wilson ish ,get a hook .however i thought the production was good and i would keep on going as its a lot better than the crap you hear on the radio,once again ,who am i to judge
barrolds 1 year ago
Congratulations!!! Beautiful words!!! Follow your dreams; you are good!!!
bibielele 1 year ago
This song is GREAT!! Really creative your doing awesome write more. Each word means so much! WOW! 5 STARS <3<3
LilDemia 1 year ago
super
You are reilly very good,
keep up the good work Good luck 4 a bright future.
My favourite.
yousafmalik2009 1 year ago
WOnderful lyrics, has a good tune. I think its beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs & best wishes...gisl
gisltome 1 year ago
you are good raw material for some great vocals.. but get some voice lessons so you can control it!
nice song, btw!!
guitrman56 1 year ago
nice song
kashiffazeem 2 years ago
i love this song..!!!
kittisangel 2 years ago
wow your really good keep up the good work !! =]
chocolatelover42 2 years ago
Good text. And nice song
mechantetcruel 2 years ago
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I really enjoyed this...
saskchic1011 2 years ago
This is a very nice song. Keep up the good work!
Emphaysez 2 years ago
Keep up your good work!
Nice lyrics
mlporart 2 years ago
woow really really great
i love it♥
LittleMsFoxy 2 years ago
very very nice...ofcourse you should keep writing!!
nikhsam 2 years ago
very beautiful ..it would be a crime if you would stop writing ...pleasant voice :D
keep up the good work ;)
Sigy5 2 years ago
like it (:
JessicaFeatLara 2 years ago
Hi! Lyrically and very beautifully the song and execution, a pleasant voice has liked ♪ ♪♫ ♫♪ ♪♫
sansan8100 2 years ago
it's really good. keep it up =)
MyOnlyExeption 2 years ago
i luvve this video i think it is like one of my fav songs hahaha!!!!
TheUltimateBieberfan 2 years ago
amazing :) keep on writing!!!!
momo300rocks75 2 years ago
love it dude just please keep writin i love ur voice 2 1million stars
TheMileyfan25 2 years ago
love it 100 ************************stars
kiidzrock14 2 years ago
Beautiful lovely sweet song Beautifully executid, I like it very much wish you luck 4 future.
yousafmalik2009 2 years ago
What a nice song. I liked the story behind the song. Thanks for sharing I really enjoyed this
GilmoreGirlFan18 2 years ago
nice vid
kashiffazeem 2 years ago
soooo sweet!
i just want to jump through the computer and give you a hug!!!
Charlavander 2 years ago
Really nice :-)
nrlovela 2 years ago
Really nice work 5* Sounds like 80's too.
DraxGr 2 years ago
That´s a really great song...!!! :)
Warbende 2 years ago
Nice song. I really enjoined.
skarinko 2 years ago
i liked it.. nice
MzLeahBaby 2 years ago
I liked it! *****
savtasaba 2 years ago
This one is MUCH better!
LIKE IT!
FaithfullGenP1997 2 years ago
Great! You are a charming songbird with strong wings. Fly high!
tiegang2002 2 years ago
Nice song, really good 5*****
musicroman 2 years ago
Jacob,this is a very nice song...lyrics are solid and the performance is good...I look forward to hearing a finished production ***** tom
tps607 2 years ago
great song :D i love it
jennifer8339 2 years ago
wow, this is really depressing, but nicely written!
take50productions 2 years ago
Lovely song, lovely voice!
PhillipLWilcher 2 years ago
awesome tune dude! could please check DAVID JAMES MARTINEZ too?! he's a singer/songwriter like yourself
Wanderingrooster 2 years ago
Yes thanks to sending me an e-mail I don't know who you were but I thought I would have a listen to the song. Great lyrics, I really like the song. I felt that you voice was sliding in and out of key sometimes slight hesitation to be directly on the note, you do say you wanted feedback. Yet the sum is really good and the lyrics are great, well sung
blisssanctuary 2 years ago
That was awesome :)
The lyrics are awesome.
I like your voice :) So.. heart-warming xD
I don't know, just great :D
LikeSTokio 2 years ago
woooo...
its nice and lovely song, i just had a songbird for a week so the lyric really touching ^__^
the rhythm is good, smooth, but I feel some periods just a little bit.. er like.. not really .. flow to the heart. however, its a very nice song, beautyful! 5 stars
oh do you have a midi file or the music sheet of the vocal of this song? ^_^ i want to try it on harmonica, if i can ^_^
have a nice day
MrDjharmonica 2 years ago
really really great lyrics
i would LOVE to do a cover with ur permission!
heres the thing, i cant whistle lol
could you possibly put up a "karaoke" version???
like the music whistling and the lyrics?? it would be awsome!
36sweetooth 2 years ago
You definitely have talent bro, keep up the good work!
slashoasis156 2 years ago
Awesome song. I love the whisteling. Very whimsical.
midnightblue2009 2 years ago
Great lyrics, very nice song, 5 stars!
KennyWrites 2 years ago
I really liked the lyrics here, you put the words together very neatly. The whistling now and then made a nice effect, since it's about a "songbird", and it also makes the song sound more naive in a way.
The song makes me want to hold up those candlelights and wave them:)
Keep it up:)
GGxChannel 2 years ago 2
hey I like your songs:) you should try making videos so it has the total picture, i.m.o.
BiancaRosalie 2 years ago
Good play !!
words1maker 2 years ago
Hi , My name is Jake . This is my second song I ever wrote . Please keep in mind that the vocal is not done yet plus it's in the wrong key for my voice. If you would like to comment , please try to focus on the lyrics , melody and music .
thanks
4copyrightonly 2 years ago