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  • I Love your sound. I hope we can work together in the future . Wolfie thank you

  • Enjoyed it. Definitely great for only your second song.

  • hey bro, you know while I was listening to this song I thought this would make a hell of nice soundtrack for a romantic movie, that being said, keep up the awesome work, who knows someday you'll be signing your first contract too.

  • this is really good! extremly awesome for only ur secound song :)

  • Actually, it's not the kind of music I use to listen, but it's really awesome, a beautiful song with a beautiful melody... good luck to continue

  • i like this song!!!! aloottttt!

  • this is a beautiful song with beautiful heartfelt lyrics and you have a very good voice...please send me the finished product...though this one sounds great like it is ....i totally get it.......keep up the good work.....k

  • Aww....so sweet! Congrats!

    Keep working, dude!

     Mia ♥

  • good job and mahalo for the vid.

  • I LOVE it. <3

  • like it keep it up and you do have a great voice. thanks for sharing this with us all

  • sweet song...made me smile :)

  • nice, keep going dude

  • Keep on singing it was cool!

  • your lyrics are good

  • good 5*

  • this is great u hsould write some more songs u got a nice voice i would love to here some more of ur song

  • nice:) ur voice is good!!!

    LOVELOVELOVEJUSTIN... ignore this. pointless

  • it waz nice..

  • This is not the kinda music i listen to but its got a chance i think if you worked on it a lil more , keep up the good work :)

  • This was a very beautiful and sweet song. Thanks for sharing and definitely keep it up.

  • keep it up....:)

  • keep it up man.

  • Who am i to judge, i was not mad on it, sounds a bit brian wilson ish ,get a hook .however i thought the production was good and i  would keep on going as its a lot better than the crap you hear on the radio,once again ,who am i to judge

  • Congratulations!!! Beautiful words!!! Follow your dreams; you are good!!!

  • This song is GREAT!! Really creative your doing awesome write more. Each word means so much! WOW! 5 STARS <3<3

  • super

    You are reilly very good,

    keep up the good work Good luck 4 a bright future.

    My favourite.

  • WOnderful lyrics, has a good tune. I think its beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs & best wishes...gisl

  • you are good raw material for some great vocals.. but get some voice lessons so you can control it!

    nice song, btw!!

  • nice song

  • i love this song..!!!

  • wow your really good keep up the good work !! =]

  • Good text. And nice song

  • This is a very nice song. Keep up the good work!

  • Keep up your good work!

    Nice lyrics

  • woow really  really great

    i love it♥

  • very very nice...ofcourse you should keep writing!!

  • very beautiful ..it would be a crime if you would stop writing ...pleasant voice :D

    keep up the good work ;)

  • like it (:

  • Hi! Lyrically and very beautifully the song and execution, a pleasant voice has liked ♪ ♪♫ ♫♪ ♪♫

  • it's really good. keep it up =)

  • i luvve this video i think it is like one of my fav songs hahaha!!!!

  • amazing :) keep on writing!!!!

  • love it dude just please keep writin i love ur voice 2 1million stars

  • love it 100 ************************stars

  • Beautiful lovely sweet song Beautifully executid, I like it very much wish you luck 4 future.

  • What a nice song. I liked the story behind the song. Thanks for sharing I really enjoyed this

  • nice vid

  • soooo sweet!

    i just want to jump through the computer and give you a hug!!!

  • Really nice :-)

  • Really nice work 5* Sounds like 80's too.

  • That´s a really great song...!!! :)

  • Nice song. I really enjoined.

  • i liked it.. nice

  • I liked it! *****

  • This one is MUCH better!

    LIKE IT!

  • Great! You are a charming songbird with strong wings. Fly high!

  • Nice song, really good 5*****

  • Jacob,this is a very nice song...lyrics are solid and the performance is good...I look forward to hearing a finished production ***** tom

  • great song :D i love it

  • wow, this is really depressing, but nicely written!

  • Lovely song, lovely voice!

  • awesome tune dude! could please check DAVID JAMES MARTINEZ too?! he's a singer/songwriter like yourself

  • Yes thanks to sending me an e-mail I don't know who you were but I thought I would have a listen to the song. Great lyrics, I really like the song. I felt that you voice was sliding in and out of key sometimes slight hesitation to be directly on the note, you do say you wanted feedback. Yet the sum is really good and the lyrics are great, well sung

  • That was awesome :)

    The lyrics are awesome.

    I like your voice :) So.. heart-warming xD

    I don't know, just great :D

  • woooo...

    its nice and lovely song, i just had a songbird for a week so the lyric really touching ^__^

    the rhythm is good, smooth, but I feel some periods just a little bit.. er like.. not really .. flow to the heart. however, its a very nice song, beautyful! 5 stars

    oh do you have a midi file or the music sheet of the vocal of this song? ^_^ i want to try it on harmonica, if i can ^_^

    have a nice day

  • really really great lyrics

    i would LOVE to do a cover with ur permission!

    heres the thing, i cant whistle lol

    could you possibly put up a "karaoke" version???

    like the music whistling and the lyrics?? it would be awsome!

  • You definitely have talent bro, keep up the good work!

  • Awesome song. I love the whisteling. Very whimsical.

  • Great lyrics, very nice song, 5 stars!

  • I really liked the lyrics here, you put the words together very neatly. The whistling now and then made a nice effect, since it's about a "songbird", and it also makes the song sound more naive in a way.

    The song makes me want to hold up those candlelights and wave them:)

    Keep it up:)

  • hey I like your songs:) you should try making videos so it has the total picture, i.m.o.

  • Good play !!

  • Hi , My name is Jake . This is my second song I ever wrote . Please keep in mind that the vocal is not done yet plus it's in the wrong key for my voice. If you would like to comment , please try to focus on the lyrics , melody and music .

    thanks

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