Good track.., sorry I didn't realize there was two versions :) I'll give you an honest opinion on something too. The lyrics are good.., but the vocal track needs work. I don't want to offend you.., but the vocal track is possibly off due to the range you're singing in. I suggest experimenting with different key signatures to see if you can get the vocals and keys to snap together. The core of the song however is very good.
no offence taken,,im not the worlds greatest singer,,i know that!. I have an ear for music where it doesnt take me too long to work things out on piano,,but to get my vocals to do what i want them to do is a different ball game,,i did change key of the song but for some reason it just didnt sound right, perhaps i got too used to listening to the original key thanks for the input,,,really means alot
Turned on Dont Call It Wasted Time, started the coffee pot, made a french bean omelette, while I listened to our Peep, Sir Paulirotti, singing his beautiful song. Thx from JK across the pond.
That's our Sir Paulie; his soul sings about love's tragic tale. But this story has a happy ending, and, you can see from the expression on his face that the Lady in his life is one fortunate gal. I salute you, Sir!
Good track.., sorry I didn't realize there was two versions :) I'll give you an honest opinion on something too. The lyrics are good.., but the vocal track needs work. I don't want to offend you.., but the vocal track is possibly off due to the range you're singing in. I suggest experimenting with different key signatures to see if you can get the vocals and keys to snap together. The core of the song however is very good.
squeakD 2 years ago
no offence taken,,im not the worlds greatest singer,,i know that!. I have an ear for music where it doesnt take me too long to work things out on piano,,but to get my vocals to do what i want them to do is a different ball game,,i did change key of the song but for some reason it just didnt sound right, perhaps i got too used to listening to the original key thanks for the input,,,really means alot
pfmerc10 2 years ago
Really good song,nice lyrics
kel2corkey 3 years ago
hi babe nice to hear u finally sing your song, ace ace ace xtx
tastycat33 3 years ago
This is brill, you don't need the people on the 3rd floor msate. you need an agent. more please.
rington1 4 years ago
Sir, if this doesn't get number one, we'll divebomb the Parliament Buildings.
(just kidding, youtube.)
odobett 4 years ago
Agree. You drive the plane, I get the bombs.
(Still just kidding.)
HannaMGA 4 years ago
Turned on Dont Call It Wasted Time, started the coffee pot, made a french bean omelette, while I listened to our Peep, Sir Paulirotti, singing his beautiful song. Thx from JK across the pond.
jkws 4 years ago
You have a look of hard man Vinny Jones
Maybe that's why your keyboards are smokin so much - cool playing - not heard that one before.
cjwaywell 4 years ago
i wrote it my self,,thats why no body has heard it before,,lmao
pfmerc10 4 years ago
That's our Sir Paulie; his soul sings about love's tragic tale. But this story has a happy ending, and, you can see from the expression on his face that the Lady in his life is one fortunate gal. I salute you, Sir!
jkws 4 years ago
Great, I love it. 5 stars, I sub as well!
Keep at it!!
Check out my acoustic version of ayo technology if you get chance, i would love you to rate or comment
Peace
JonB1972 4 years ago