i love the beat of the poem, but i think you have the talent to make a better video for it---less about the process but more about the words--the emotion. anyway i REALLY love the poem--and the emotion in the film that im talking about is what you do with your hand and eyes at the end. that was the best part because i felt the words--that's your talent with film
you can do better. find the abyss become the abyss. i took the beginning to use in my new song.
Here is a body of your very own pulled out of the mud here's your bloody bones
bloodymountain 4 years ago
goingbacktoaplaceiusetobe,youhelpme
kafka023 4 years ago
How does it feel to go back to that place my friend?
MagicShadeMask 4 years ago
Another brilliant poem! One of yours I hadn't got round to viewing yet, thank you for adding it! :D
samsarajade 4 years ago
Thank you for watching and responding! :)
MagicShadeMask 4 years ago
Although I have seen this before, I do love it! its a great poem, I hold on to your everyword
Brothersun86 4 years ago
well spoken! felt
cooksterz 4 years ago
i love the beat of the poem, but i think you have the talent to make a better video for it---less about the process but more about the words--the emotion. anyway i REALLY love the poem--and the emotion in the film that im talking about is what you do with your hand and eyes at the end. that was the best part because i felt the words--that's your talent with film
folkrockergrrrl 4 years ago
sounds like the way i feel sometimes...very good
stealurface1976 4 years ago
Thank you my friend, I know this is extremely late but better late than never. :)
MagicShadeMask 4 years ago
hey only 5 months..lol
stealurface1976 4 years ago
hahaha
MagicShadeMask 4 years ago