keep practicing man don't mind the haters just need to sharpen those techniques..also ditch that hairstyle and tear down that slipknot poster ohh wait its 2012, you probably already did :)
make the sweeps more clear and smooth sounds like you are hitting strings that shouldn't be hit practice you're sweeps slower and than play to speed other than that good job
Having the balls = 0. Having sense =is greater than 0. Also, you are probably correct "...when you're my age your gonna be blowin people away" but until then, stay off. Lol.
hes young and hes got the balls to put it all out there. I think you're doin great dude, fuck the haters, when you're my age your gonna be blowin people away
@kidharris55 i dont have time to play shitty guitar on youtube, you wanna hear what i can do, check out my band and come to one of our shows, links in my page
@svenlk i listened to ur garbage it sucks. sounds like u shoved helen keller down the stairs with a shitty fender plugged in to metal zone petal runnin off a 1960's keyboard amp.. so correction u do play real shitty guitar on youtube.. clown
@MrPhilthy420 ooooh someones a little upset, matter of opinion on genre, i highly doubt you have the technicle skill to even play yet understand what we play, so keep playing your little as i lay dying riffs haha
You are nothing more than the other 3 million kids wanting to be sucessfull in a boring genre that reeks of cliches, and generic ideas, passed down from garage band, to garage band and the ever so childish "i wanna be heavy" thing, fuck all of you
"click on vid notice ibanez guitar Leaves" sorry but i hate ibanez every one i know who has owned on has ended up with it broken the onli well designed ones are the joe satriani ones and steve vai ones anything else is shit
@Guitarman1837 mmmmmm... i can believe that the electronics are all shit. not the guitars themselves. i have an rg220b and it plays like a dream aside from the shitty pickups.
that was good. like the verse riff. or the one after sweep.. not bein a douch just sayn u should beat the breakdown chug it in a dif pattern.. lot of same ones out there.. so we need to start bringn new ones! thumbs up man nice vid
If you hate on slipknot stop kidding yourself cuz you know when you were like 14 they were the shit, thats when i listened to them and i wouldnt hate because of that. after all, some kids like ICP, fuck that shit
At 1:00 and :53 that chord change seems to disagree with the rest of the riffs. Sounds like it's in the same type of riff as some 80's stuff. I think maybe just making one of those notes a step higher or lower might make it fit better but I don't know! Just giving a little input.
putting in the time to learn sweeping, which is hard stuff; but don't you hear how bad the sweeps sound in such low tunings? they sound bad. Stick to between E and C lowest standard if you're serious about playing, because serious musicians will take you more...well, seriously (whether that's right or wrong, it's true). Also, good lead sounds so much more badass and heavy in more regular tunings, because you get your high pitches.
You guys are expecting way to much this kid did great those were some sweet riffs now none of it really went together but it was good and he defently can play
THis is sloppy and boring..... before posting make it perfect. It sounds more like a mix of hardcore and metalcore... it's def not deathcore -_- You make shame of good music.
there's too much excess noise when your sweeping cuz some of the notes I couldn't quite here. you might need to turn the gain down, or work on you muting while you sweep. I think I remember seeing a video on sweeping from Alexi Laiho from Children of Bodom that he explains how he mutes while sweeping, check it out it might help.
your guitar isnt meant to go that low. it wouldnt sound like shit if you had it in like drop b or something a little bit higher and you still get the really dark sound
wow seriously what is up with ppl liking deathcore, for the last fucking time breakdowns are not metal n all of you look like emo faggets!!!! if you dont belive me look in the fucking mirror.... Im not saying your bad at guitar okay bro lets get that str8 ur good but lay off this stupid sorryr excuse for music and learn some real metal its true tune up to 'C'.. Drop "A" sounds like shit you have talent now do something with it instead of wasting your time on 'core' it sucks and its pathetic...
drop a is stupid. Along with deathcore. the ending riff was ok, but, tune up kid. at least drop c. Learn structure like a real musician. Not just sweeps and low power chords.
And you're an idiot who should go back to school and learn English. You're a suckish player are should give up now. You don't even both to use your little finger in your playing, and those riffs sounded really horrible. Also, emo hair... metal? No.
yeah, no. i think i've heard this shit, from every other deathcore band. Why not just write something that different from the generic chug, sweep, fast, chug
It does matter, because I'm tired of looking for inspiration on youtube and finding it cluttered by assholes who are so convinced they have talent that they post videos of their 'ring finger sweeping' slop. Just don't add a video until you're better and everyone will be happy. Thanks =]
keep practicing man don't mind the haters just need to sharpen those techniques..also ditch that hairstyle and tear down that slipknot poster ohh wait its 2012, you probably already did :)
darkthrone07 2 weeks ago 2
you shouldnt even be touching guitars after this failure
extremesportsandsex 3 weeks ago
@extremesportsandsex and you should?
darkthrone07 2 weeks ago
bad sweeping dude! the downward part of the sweep sounds like mud!!
aiki118 1 month ago
I lost hpoe once I saw that slipknot poster..
waytooepic 1 month ago
You know when a car crashes and it rolls over and thrashes around?
That car is your guitarplaying and it`s going down a five mile hill.
donSparda 1 month ago 2
I use to have this guitar. Made in japan right?
HAEM0RRHAGE 2 months ago
make the sweeps more clear and smooth sounds like you are hitting strings that shouldn't be hit practice you're sweeps slower and than play to speed other than that good job
gutarjunky 2 months ago
Keep it up and keep rehearsing man! Nevermind the haters !
Creation2012 2 months ago
Play some actual Death Metal, Deathcore is crap.
DarknessBlood1 2 months ago
Having the balls = 0. Having sense =is greater than 0. Also, you are probably correct "...when you're my age your gonna be blowin people away" but until then, stay off. Lol.
MsSmems 2 months ago
I think he developed tourettes during the song...right around :30
MichaelTheNinjaDean 2 months ago
sounds like bring me the horizon. not good
ScreamoRules96 2 months ago
It sounded pretty damn good but you need to work on your technique quite a bit. None the less good job.
ThroatShredder 2 months ago
dont kid yourself, thats not sweep picking......
09numbers09 2 months ago
hes young and hes got the balls to put it all out there. I think you're doin great dude, fuck the haters, when you're my age your gonna be blowin people away
blakeG2B 2 months ago
i just played your riff better than you...
STEPHENKILLSYOU 3 months ago 18
@hammersmashedtaco very messy and in need of a shower?
musicguitarlessons 3 months ago
in comparison, my sweep picking is that of jesus's beard.
HammersmashedTaco 3 months ago
STOP ruining music
svenlk 3 months ago
@svenlk where are your uploads?
kidharris55 3 months ago
@kidharris55 i dont have time to play shitty guitar on youtube, you wanna hear what i can do, check out my band and come to one of our shows, links in my page
svenlk 3 months ago
@svenlk i listened to ur garbage it sucks. sounds like u shoved helen keller down the stairs with a shitty fender plugged in to metal zone petal runnin off a 1960's keyboard amp.. so correction u do play real shitty guitar on youtube.. clown
MrPhilthy420 3 months ago
@MrPhilthy420 ooooh someones a little upset, matter of opinion on genre, i highly doubt you have the technicle skill to even play yet understand what we play, so keep playing your little as i lay dying riffs haha
svenlk 3 months ago
@kidharris55 oh ya and you should drop down a half step G# is way more br00t
svenlk 3 months ago
play slower but in time and it will sound better
kornkrazy85 3 months ago
ewww this sucks i can play more original shit than this
tyshaundavis13 3 months ago
You are nothing more than the other 3 million kids wanting to be sucessfull in a boring genre that reeks of cliches, and generic ideas, passed down from garage band, to garage band and the ever so childish "i wanna be heavy" thing, fuck all of you
thetobarmethod 3 months ago
@thetobarmethod yeah,talking about cliches...bottom line you're an idiot
cromaticas 3 months ago
yup definitely deathcore bunch of shit put together call it music profit its a shame what music is coming to
disasterwave 3 months ago
"click on vid notice ibanez guitar Leaves" sorry but i hate ibanez every one i know who has owned on has ended up with it broken the onli well designed ones are the joe satriani ones and steve vai ones anything else is shit
Guitarman1837 3 months ago
@Guitarman1837 mmmmmm... i can believe that the electronics are all shit. not the guitars themselves. i have an rg220b and it plays like a dream aside from the shitty pickups.
666jet 3 months ago
What pickups you have ??
Ivellios91 4 months ago
that sounded horrible :S
stringslayer97 4 months ago
tabs plss!!
g3n3sis89 4 months ago
that was good. like the verse riff. or the one after sweep.. not bein a douch just sayn u should beat the breakdown chug it in a dif pattern.. lot of same ones out there.. so we need to start bringn new ones! thumbs up man nice vid
Michaelx2011 4 months ago
pratice man, and you can be as good as you want to!
skeleton0578 5 months ago
OH MY GOD BEST SWEEPS EVAR.
blackshadowbass 5 months ago
WOW! cool :D Love it :P
DaNaiiDuB 5 months ago
If you hate on slipknot stop kidding yourself cuz you know when you were like 14 they were the shit, thats when i listened to them and i wouldnt hate because of that. after all, some kids like ICP, fuck that shit
HaoleJames 5 months ago
@HaoleJames i liked both :(
DirtyPoopers 4 months ago
At 1:00 and :53 that chord change seems to disagree with the rest of the riffs. Sounds like it's in the same type of riff as some 80's stuff. I think maybe just making one of those notes a step higher or lower might make it fit better but I don't know! Just giving a little input.
madmax18840 5 months ago
Ibanex s series, with a floyd, prefect for your genere
EpicFork 5 months ago
@EpicFork good try. its an rg320 with an edge pro II
deathcore1239 5 months ago
dude keep practicing :D very nice riffs!
AlvaroAEM 6 months ago
I remember my first time playing a guitar.... LOL
proguitargamer 6 months ago
You need to play slow to play fast..
ArtificialFlavaFTB2 6 months ago 29
@ArtificialFlavaFTB2 one of the first things my teacher told me when i first started my lessons years ago. You're a very wise player . Cheers man
SymbolicX5461 3 months ago
and they don't sound bad because of tour playing, I hope that's not what it seemed like; I mean bad due to the tuning, solely.
BER2ERKER 6 months ago
dude it's cool that you play nicely, and are
putting in the time to learn sweeping, which is hard stuff; but don't you hear how bad the sweeps sound in such low tunings? they sound bad. Stick to between E and C lowest standard if you're serious about playing, because serious musicians will take you more...well, seriously (whether that's right or wrong, it's true). Also, good lead sounds so much more badass and heavy in more regular tunings, because you get your high pitches.
BER2ERKER 6 months ago
You guys are expecting way to much this kid did great those were some sweet riffs now none of it really went together but it was good and he defently can play
DARKSIDERS7771 6 months ago
Whats wrong with Slipknot? Anyway fuck em. Nice video man.
xBehemoth92x 7 months ago
SLOW DOWN and practice your sweeps... Either your low end tone sucks camel nuts hardcore, you didn't even do sweeps right.
DescentFromHeaven 7 months ago
THis is sloppy and boring..... before posting make it perfect. It sounds more like a mix of hardcore and metalcore... it's def not deathcore -_- You make shame of good music.
DecrepitSoul89 7 months ago
This isn't deathcore
TazorShoTz 7 months ago
lol
Teebonesky 8 months ago
The first riff sounds quite Beneath The Massacre influenced.
Bloodynatas 8 months ago
sick riff bro keep on what u do your better then i am just sayin lol
archblaze1500 9 months ago
lol to the comment before, nice playing man wish i was that good when i was your age.
SylentCommando 9 months ago
The beginning is from Sea Of Treachery - Skin Deep : p Note by note : p
MedusasFallHC 9 months ago
i liked it. work the sweeps and use your pinky haha but other than that, it was pretty heavy
deathcore1239 9 months ago
The beginning sounded black metal-ish, and I like black metal, but I can't say I liked the rest.
1337a1rS0fT3r 10 months ago
god it sounds like my grandma got hit by a car
bobbiss1234 10 months ago
nice job i liked it
SabbathFan132 10 months ago
FAIL
GetDownKrezy1 10 months ago
nice bro! just try using your pinkie... But if you can do without, no problem to me ;)
laurenskid 11 months ago
drop A sounds heavier than B
ima try this
masterded101 1 year ago
You wouldn't go another semitone lower ;)
Edit32 1 year ago
lol i thought i was playing mario at tapping part still cool tapping.Better than me ofcourse :D
Svensky 1 year ago
there's too much excess noise when your sweeping cuz some of the notes I couldn't quite here. you might need to turn the gain down, or work on you muting while you sweep. I think I remember seeing a video on sweeping from Alexi Laiho from Children of Bodom that he explains how he mutes while sweeping, check it out it might help.
partyboychip 1 year ago
hahaha NOOOOOB fuck off
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esc0bar680 1 year ago
This sounds more like metalcore rather than deathcore.
RaiZuka92 1 year ago
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RaiZuka92 1 year ago
your guitar isnt meant to go that low. it wouldnt sound like shit if you had it in like drop b or something a little bit higher and you still get the really dark sound
alpengeist19 1 year ago
@alpengeist19 I agree. (to video poster) maybe save up for a 7 string guitar and you can just drop the b to an a
baconbag 1 year ago
you suck dude, u really need some practice..
xenariz 1 year ago
it wasnt bad i think drop b is the lowest ill ever go...
06a09 1 year ago
if i could dislike this 1000 times, i would.. but i cant be bothered..
a7xRocksXX95XX 1 year ago
wow seriously what is up with ppl liking deathcore, for the last fucking time breakdowns are not metal n all of you look like emo faggets!!!! if you dont belive me look in the fucking mirror.... Im not saying your bad at guitar okay bro lets get that str8 ur good but lay off this stupid sorryr excuse for music and learn some real metal its true tune up to 'C'.. Drop "A" sounds like shit you have talent now do something with it instead of wasting your time on 'core' it sucks and its pathetic...
MLGSky 1 year ago
what is wrong with a slipknot poster
ReTr093 1 year ago
@ReTr093 nothing at all
MLGSky 1 year ago
I loved the emo hair. Fits with the riffs.
mtsn 1 year ago
@mtsn i hate emos and sry put core gives emos a bad name
MLGSky 1 year ago
dude this was shit
why the fuck would u upload it without polishing it up
powerdbycomedy 1 year ago
@powerdbycomedy get over it his probably better than you
MLGSky 1 year ago
@MLGSky nope i am much better
and youre retarded for assuming
powerdbycomedy 1 year ago
it wasnt that bad lay off of him
tacoface89 1 year ago
drop a is stupid. Along with deathcore. the ending riff was ok, but, tune up kid. at least drop c. Learn structure like a real musician. Not just sweeps and low power chords.
metalpunk654 1 year ago
@metalpunk654 Open your mind a bit. drop C is shite.
Whitechapel6660 1 year ago
@Whitechapel6660 Drop A is ridiculous.
metalpunk654 1 year ago
@Whitechapel6660 your fucking retarted
MLGSky 1 year ago
@metalpunk654 i agree with everything
MLGSky 1 year ago
Drop A = Pussy
MackEatsShorts 1 year ago
@MackEatsShorts yep
MLGSky 1 year ago
dang! people just love to hate lol fuck it bro keep up the good work!
amercer99 1 year ago
And you're an idiot who should go back to school and learn English. You're a suckish player are should give up now. You don't even both to use your little finger in your playing, and those riffs sounded really horrible. Also, emo hair... metal? No.
Hellfire7896321 2 years ago
stfu this guy is awesome
deathcoredemon 1 year ago
Pretty good.
liquidguitar420 2 years ago
this is funny, because ive heard heavier shit written by bands who use 6 string guitars, and tune to c or standard.
groulxma 2 years ago
Lol, this idiot has a slipknot poster.
Hellfire7896321 2 years ago
How is he an idiot? and whats wrong with slipknot?
haropro2 2 years ago
its not a fucking slipknot poster its a poster of metal god it has 15 different bands wow ur an asshole.
robslann 2 years ago 44
@robslann Its these kinds of people that go on youtube looking for an argument, nice job by the way
AlexJBragg 1 year ago
@robslann Slipknot suck, and are hardly a metal god band. I bet there are other shitty bands on there, too.
Hellfire7896321 1 year ago
Can someone get rid of this dick. Robslann? Your little bit sloppy with the sweep. But you did good my friend. I give you a thumbs up!
SexyFoxBoy91 6 months ago
@Hellfire7896321
so?
MrABCore 1 year ago
@Hellfire7896321 Sup with Slipknot? and what's wrong if this guy like's them? I guess people who play 'Deathcore' Can't like Slipknot?
I'f im not mistaken Slipknot play some stuff in Drop A anyways? if not A then certainly drop B...
BCI9279 1 year ago
@BCI9279 It's just the entire metal genre. It's full of hate.
baconbag 1 year ago
@Hellfire7896321 fuck off you cocksuckin fuck.slipknot is fuckin beast
alektorophobia1000 9 months ago
@Hellfire7896321 so ..
dirtoff99 5 months ago
yeah, no. i think i've heard this shit, from every other deathcore band. Why not just write something that different from the generic chug, sweep, fast, chug
bootstrapbill666 2 years ago
Sloppy but I still like what I hear man, good job! practise practise practise!! Hahaha!
Mush0Art 2 years ago
your sweeping really is sloppy, you just hear some growl, followed by some pigsqueals
practise your sweeps on a clean channel, and then you can go use disto,
keep playin', you'll get there
kareljuwet 2 years ago 22
thank you for being nice, and my sweeps are cleaner now i got 6 string sweeps down to
robslann 2 years ago 11
You are fucking stupid for tuning that low without a 7 string. It's just plain ignorance.
Btw, your playing sucks.
ThrashDeth17 2 years ago
wow, you are a dumbass if you think you can sweep without your pinky
omfgitsjordan 2 years ago
does it really fuckin matter how i fuckin sweep bitch? get a life and stop sending hate comments
robslann 2 years ago
It does matter, because I'm tired of looking for inspiration on youtube and finding it cluttered by assholes who are so convinced they have talent that they post videos of their 'ring finger sweeping' slop. Just don't add a video until you're better and everyone will be happy. Thanks =]
omfgitsjordan 2 years ago
i did post this video thiking i wasn an inspiration or bosting that im good so fuck off ur sucha dick dude get a life
robslann 2 years ago
omfg use your pinkie
BamPew 2 years ago
man ur in a band are u dreaming
dbgl33 2 years ago
lrn2havetalent plz thx
ihailnone 2 years ago
Its been a year and you are still not using your pinky.
RaysReviews 2 years ago
Come to my house and say that to my face. 48423 davison continental north estates.
coreyffd 2 years ago
Sorry i couldnt read ur comment properly
there were wayyy to many of ur dildos in the way!
RAZEforMAMMOTH 2 years ago
Do yourself a favor and put down the guitar and stick to being a fag
coreyffd 2 years ago
Do yourself a favor coreyffd and take the dildo out of ur ass!
DickMaster Coreyffd!
RAZEforMAMMOTH 2 years ago
i can hear the structure its pretty badass add some drums!! that would be sick
diaryofthedead 2 years ago
die soon thanks pal
ihailnone 2 years ago
ur a real CUNT ehh!
WoW Fag!
RAZEforMAMMOTH 2 years ago
what the fuck is wrong with your sentence structure?
ihailnone 2 years ago
I find my sentence structure quite awesome actually...
you sir, must grow a pair...
of testicles obviously hahahaha
RAZEforMAMMOTH 2 years ago 3
SWE3T
BAYCITYAIRSOFT 2 years ago