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  • This is absolutely fantastic! This is the kind of talent and and actual type of rhymes that need to be popular in the music industry. Not that damn pop b.s, but this!

  • holy shit.... we need to collab. 

  • good man- that's feckin awesome

  • @Festivalpig Thank you. The fact you said feck is awesome as well.

  • Where is he?

  • @meemerp Bean Hollow State beach California

  • @chubbywater5 well its very pretty there.

  • this is what happens when an intelligent person raps; it actually makes sense.

  • U GOT RHYMES SONN!!!

  • Observe for you education, the eyes of a heroin addict.

  • @mlcoo17 You think he's pinned ?.You talking from experience?

  • You sound like Sage Francis....The old sage francis.

  • look how small his pupils are...i think he's on heroin. pretty good though

  • fucking fantastic!

    

  • Ecstasy, he'll probably have cold sore and sleep for a week after that.

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  • HAH!  HE blinked at 1:56

  • get out of the camra

  • His eye pupils were smallllll......... unusually small O.o

  • @Helloholabonjour1 hes probly onopiates

  • @Helloholabonjour1 It's cloudy out. Clouds scatter light from the sun and allow more of it to hit the eyes directly. This makes the pupils small. This is why we have pupils. 

  • HE NEVER BLINKS!!! :0

  • his teeth are white!

    

  • Do you ever blink?

  • Hallelujah for drugs!

  • you california?

  • DOOOOPE!!

  • i could smell the sea

  • damn man sick af

  • This has depth and the you delivered it perfectly, i like it, thanks :)

  • If this was a bowl of cereals

    This would be a good bowl of cereals

  • thumbs up if u want him to rap this thing ...its awesome !

  • pokemon and digimon! 

  • Awesome brother, great delivery, deep content , beautiful poetry, would love to hear more... keep drivin' you will arrive

  • Good God. That was excellent.

  • he's a much better rapper than most of nowadays so called artists. he's got a interesting voice also.

  • thiss shiit cold!!!

  • yes

  • word.

  • god that was beautiful

  • THUMBS UP IF U THINK HE SHOULD BE A RAPPER

  • yo! that went in! good job

  • awesome keep it up :D

  • dude this is awesome keep it up :D

  • Sick !

  • He's got the crazy eyes.

  • i wish this guy will teach M&M to rap

  • @johanlab1 m&m your so dumb! it Eminem not "m an m"

  • @johanlab1 Eminem you dumbass -_- Eminem can rap it's just that over the years he's become really shitty. Take a look at 96 Shady doing proper shittt.

  • get some music and this is gonna be a hit song my friend

  • Hey Man! This is awesome! I liked and favourited, I also pressed replay :D

  • Great lyrics, keep it up

  • wow. i thought this was gonna suck, but i was wrong. nice job!!!!

  • Amazing.. I've never identified with a poet more :)

    Thank you

  • THIS is modern poetry - No need for music, stars, or production. His words and the world he describes speak all that need be said about his message. I hope to see him do well with his talent.

  • Where is he from?? Someone direct him to RSE...

  • My god. This guy's gotta make an album with Black Star. Flawless rhymes.

  • Nice jar reference....

  • 55 people are douchebags

  • This sounds like an eminem song

  • Eminem just got jealous.

  • better than100% of all rappers

  • This is wonderful.

  • Awesome fella! Use your gift!

  • Now thats what I call "GOT LYRICS"

  • Some deep shit, dude... Makes you think

  • keep on pushing that knowledge dude!

  • Pretty rad, NWA or Public Enemy need to get back together and recruit this man though they might not like him since he's got a beard.

  • "feelin' like a universe stuffed in a star" This was one of my favourite lines in the whole poem.

    I felt like I was inside his head as I read the poetry. It is utterly fantastic. I felt like I was listening to a prophet or a philosopher.

    Also, he has one of the most riveting pairs of eyes I have ever seen.

  • A man of truth is a sad, and lonely man. and you are...

  • I really hope you put out an album. I'd buy it. Hell I'd buy 10!

  • why are his pupils so small... i am confus.

  • Great stuff man! It'd be great if you could post more.

    Cheers.

  • This really touched my soul. =)

  • The Jedi Mind Tricks mix is amazing.

  • better than 99% of rappers

  • Keep on pushing and spitting those words, man. Amazing.

  • Marshal Mathers ain't got shit on you.

  • wow. he's good.

  • Bump.

  • This guy is awesome. I can't stop listening to this at work

  • This is great. If you put this as a beat it would make a great song. The pure skill in this is amazing.

  • Amazing. Inspirational, to say the least.

  • This is pure beauty. I admire your drive.

  • initiate

    remix

    protocol

  • That was pretty intense. Thanks for sharing that with us.

  • very nice.

  • This is impressive as hell!

  • Chills

  • I didn't listen, but i did hit F5 like 20 times for you.

  • very impressive

  • cool eyes

  • sup bro

  • His eyes are burning into my soul.

  • He's amazing! His eyes pierced right into my soul!

  • niiiiiiiiice.....

  • wow Thanks for recording this :)

  • Obviously, great!

  • Fuckin smart

  • You should upload the mashup.

  • That's brilliant It's people like these that should be living the high life for contributing to the world. Damn capitalism.

  • Sick flow, intricate wordplay, great presentation. I hope this takes you places, man.

  • holy sheeeiiiiit

  • Radicool

  • adwadsdasd

  • Great writing you're really talented I hope a talent agent discovers you, you deserve it

  • Amazing. This is quality stuff right here.

  • Reddit sent me here too!! Love this

  • Very beautiful.

    Sharing with every person i know

  • fucking brilliant! reddit loves you!

  • REDDDDDDDDDDDDITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!­!!!!!!!

  • The Reddit horn has sounded....Redditors WATCH!

  • This is amazing.

  • / Reddit sent me here

  • This guy deserve to be produced by Dre

  • Play this the same time as Dre Dre - Still Dre instrumental.

    Realize this guy is better than most rap out there.

  • fucking excellent.

  • I will make sure that all of my non-redditer friends also see this and share it with their friends and their friends share it with their friends. Hopefully, some producer sees this.

  • oh my, he really spits

  • Incredible man...simply incredible

  • This is amazing. I really hope you can find success.

  • absurdly good.

  • thats pretty neato

  • awesome poem man, and thank reddit, its gettin the word out!!!!

  • I'd ask him to collaborate but he'll make me look bad...

  • great

  • this is good :D!

  • His poems reminds me of the ones from "the poet" in Oz.

  • shades of Allen Ginsberg"Howl", cool stuff.

  • Reddit brought me here. This is why I love Reddit, and you. You are amazing.

  • This man is amazing.

    It would be amazing to get some good audio equipment and wind shields, to record him rhyming on the beach. The 'beat' would be the wind and surf (hopefully not cracking and impact of the wind, but smoother sounding to protect the sound of his voice).

  • Awesome stuff!

  • this gives me chills

  • This is amazing!

  • Amazing rhythm and flow, and the thoughts/ideas/references are excellent. True talent!

  • my god this brought a tear to my eye righteous man... changed my day.

  • That was surprisingly great. Awesome job man, looking forward to hearing more!

  • Great.

  • This man should be paid shitloads for what he writes. someone get him in a studio.

  • Amazing.

  • Awesome man!! :-)

  • Let this guy know that he's a genius of rhyme and poetry next time you see him.

  • Interesting mate. Cool work.

  • Please never give up!

  • This guy is better than any rapper living today.

  • This was pure awesome.

  • This guy is great, get him famous reddit :3

  • Fantastic!

  • People of the internet. You know it and I know it. This guy deserves to be a musician. Support if can and we will hear from him again. 

  • This was fucking dope as hell....Why is this guy not writing songs?

  • This is truly and utterly magnificent.

  • Respect, I sure hope your writing this stuff down! Keep fighting the good fight.

  • The new homeless beautiful voice guy

  • Magnificent rhymes ............. and you have beautiful eyes.

  • Stunning!

  • Better than 90% of the stuff out there, this guy deserves to get published.

  • Dude. His eyes are awesome.

  • flow and depth

  • Timeless

  • EMINLESS

  • this guy's a real fucking poet man keep it up!

  • Great!

  • this guy deserves wayyyyy lot more attention!!

  • Awesome!

    

  • He has talent, he deserves recognition beyond what youtube itself can give him.

  • this guy deserves attentions from public.

    btw Reddit rules!

  • Wow, that flows really damn well. Holy shit.

  • This guy rocks. Go to a poetry slam or something.

  • A lot of talent here. Hope he keeps this up. He is the man.

  • Tell him to continue his work, I enjoy it much

  • Beautiful eyes, amazing words. Please keep contact with this man. I would love to see more. Tell him to maintain his good spirit and the narwhal bacons at midnight.

  • Hero

  • please put this on music! way better than contemporary rap

  • You're awesome! keep doing what you're doing! great job :)

    -A Redditor

  • This dude would kill in some open mic poetry jams.

  • " scrambled my mind--dextromethorphan hydrobromide"

    <3333333

  • Wow, this guy is actually good!

  • I want this guy to be rich in a month, let's make it happen.

  • Take care now, the reddit bump squad arrived, and they want you famous.