This is absolutely fantastic! This is the kind of talent and and actual type of rhymes that need to be popular in the music industry. Not that damn pop b.s, but this!
@Helloholabonjour1 It's cloudy out. Clouds scatter light from the sun and allow more of it to hit the eyes directly. This makes the pupils small. This is why we have pupils.
@johanlab1 Eminem you dumbass -_- Eminem can rap it's just that over the years he's become really shitty. Take a look at 96 Shady doing proper shittt.
THIS is modern poetry - No need for music, stars, or production. His words and the world he describes speak all that need be said about his message. I hope to see him do well with his talent.
I will make sure that all of my non-redditer friends also see this and share it with their friends and their friends share it with their friends. Hopefully, some producer sees this.
It would be amazing to get some good audio equipment and wind shields, to record him rhyming on the beach. The 'beat' would be the wind and surf (hopefully not cracking and impact of the wind, but smoother sounding to protect the sound of his voice).
Beautiful eyes, amazing words. Please keep contact with this man. I would love to see more. Tell him to maintain his good spirit and the narwhal bacons at midnight.
This is absolutely fantastic! This is the kind of talent and and actual type of rhymes that need to be popular in the music industry. Not that damn pop b.s, but this!
Kunomozaki 3 days ago
holy shit.... we need to collab.
jdrush92yo 6 days ago
good man- that's feckin awesome
Festivalpig 1 week ago
@Festivalpig Thank you. The fact you said feck is awesome as well.
chubbywater5 1 week ago
Where is he?
meemerp 1 week ago
@meemerp Bean Hollow State beach California
chubbywater5 1 week ago
@chubbywater5 well its very pretty there.
meemerp 1 week ago
this is what happens when an intelligent person raps; it actually makes sense.
HunterB316 1 week ago
U GOT RHYMES SONN!!!
sweirdxy19 1 week ago
Observe for you education, the eyes of a heroin addict.
mlcoo17 1 week ago
@mlcoo17 You think he's pinned ?.You talking from experience?
sniffy6999999 1 week ago
You sound like Sage Francis....The old sage francis.
EpikFuture 3 weeks ago
look how small his pupils are...i think he's on heroin. pretty good though
potshed 3 weeks ago
fucking fantastic!
agilewolf 4 weeks ago
Ecstasy, he'll probably have cold sore and sleep for a week after that.
SocialSC 4 weeks ago
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IpityTheFooImMrT 4 weeks ago
HAH! HE blinked at 1:56
makani22 4 weeks ago
get out of the camra
dalejrstevengold 1 month ago
His eye pupils were smallllll......... unusually small O.o
Helloholabonjour1 2 months ago
@Helloholabonjour1 hes probly onopiates
SqwishiSqwashi 1 month ago
@Helloholabonjour1 It's cloudy out. Clouds scatter light from the sun and allow more of it to hit the eyes directly. This makes the pupils small. This is why we have pupils.
AquaticCastle 3 weeks ago 5
HE NEVER BLINKS!!! :0
xAriesx4637 2 months ago
his teeth are white!
silvermanrol 2 months ago
Do you ever blink?
khanelias 2 months ago
Hallelujah for drugs!
themaxx69 3 months ago
you california?
bawbeee 5 months ago
DOOOOPE!!
SRodriguez28 5 months ago
i could smell the sea
kuuulock 5 months ago
damn man sick af
albertosainz07 5 months ago
This has depth and the you delivered it perfectly, i like it, thanks :)
TheAlimation 6 months ago
If this was a bowl of cereals
This would be a good bowl of cereals
RuiGomes43 6 months ago
thumbs up if u want him to rap this thing ...its awesome !
yamatayamata 6 months ago
pokemon and digimon!
thanh320 6 months ago
Awesome brother, great delivery, deep content , beautiful poetry, would love to hear more... keep drivin' you will arrive
631flyman 6 months ago
Good God. That was excellent.
SatanIsSextingMe 6 months ago 16
he's a much better rapper than most of nowadays so called artists. he's got a interesting voice also.
apot4you 6 months ago
thiss shiit cold!!!
joeross114 6 months ago
yes
TheBlueguy13 6 months ago
word.
cgsmitherine3 6 months ago
god that was beautiful
cicciobenzina2010 6 months ago
THUMBS UP IF U THINK HE SHOULD BE A RAPPER
mrlemonstick 6 months ago
yo! that went in! good job
RedNY4Lyfe 6 months ago
awesome keep it up :D
0DjAsh0 6 months ago
dude this is awesome keep it up :D
0DjAsh0 6 months ago
Sick !
bySorzah 6 months ago
He's got the crazy eyes.
gregarious24 6 months ago
i wish this guy will teach M&M to rap
johanlab1 6 months ago
@johanlab1 m&m your so dumb! it Eminem not "m an m"
JuniorUnknown 6 months ago
@johanlab1 Eminem you dumbass -_- Eminem can rap it's just that over the years he's become really shitty. Take a look at 96 Shady doing proper shittt.
TheLoveyMush 6 months ago
get some music and this is gonna be a hit song my friend
PokeMasterBlaster123 6 months ago
Hey Man! This is awesome! I liked and favourited, I also pressed replay :D
djdum434 6 months ago
Great lyrics, keep it up
pedram412 6 months ago
wow. i thought this was gonna suck, but i was wrong. nice job!!!!
christoefurobin 6 months ago
Amazing.. I've never identified with a poet more :)
Thank you
XXXoXXoXXXX 6 months ago
THIS is modern poetry - No need for music, stars, or production. His words and the world he describes speak all that need be said about his message. I hope to see him do well with his talent.
kuroshikyo1 6 months ago 3
Where is he from?? Someone direct him to RSE...
the7thcolumnarmy 6 months ago
My god. This guy's gotta make an album with Black Star. Flawless rhymes.
Gaputin 6 months ago
Nice jar reference....
Jozsus 6 months ago
55 people are douchebags
SerMcBallzAlot 6 months ago
This sounds like an eminem song
WestfallChicken 6 months ago
Eminem just got jealous.
darkshado223 6 months ago 5
better than100% of all rappers
TheCrocoduck 6 months ago 10
This is wonderful.
Sparkzxx 6 months ago
Awesome fella! Use your gift!
racha8787 6 months ago
Now thats what I call "GOT LYRICS"
ROCTV101 6 months ago
Some deep shit, dude... Makes you think
mustafasyed1171 6 months ago
keep on pushing that knowledge dude!
MrPostnobills 6 months ago
Pretty rad, NWA or Public Enemy need to get back together and recruit this man though they might not like him since he's got a beard.
SgtSpankey 6 months ago
"feelin' like a universe stuffed in a star" This was one of my favourite lines in the whole poem.
I felt like I was inside his head as I read the poetry. It is utterly fantastic. I felt like I was listening to a prophet or a philosopher.
Also, he has one of the most riveting pairs of eyes I have ever seen.
JustThatGirI 6 months ago
A man of truth is a sad, and lonely man. and you are...
deathysmile 6 months ago
I really hope you put out an album. I'd buy it. Hell I'd buy 10!
BSitaliano 6 months ago
why are his pupils so small... i am confus.
AlphaKat1984 6 months ago
Great stuff man! It'd be great if you could post more.
Cheers.
Hayabusa217 6 months ago
This really touched my soul. =)
kiakitara 6 months ago
The Jedi Mind Tricks mix is amazing.
hamchammy 6 months ago
better than 99% of rappers
Sturminator10 6 months ago
Keep on pushing and spitting those words, man. Amazing.
aybabtu1313 6 months ago
Marshal Mathers ain't got shit on you.
NovakaneOfContempt 6 months ago
wow. he's good.
steveniscool333 6 months ago
Bump.
johndoe7033 6 months ago
This guy is awesome. I can't stop listening to this at work
AlexisMarieMonroe 6 months ago
This is great. If you put this as a beat it would make a great song. The pure skill in this is amazing.
zfatjesus 6 months ago
Amazing. Inspirational, to say the least.
springmint25 6 months ago
This is pure beauty. I admire your drive.
AmbitiousInvader 6 months ago
initiate
remix
protocol
MKUltra3 6 months ago
That was pretty intense. Thanks for sharing that with us.
Pihef 6 months ago
very nice.
ImMakingThisForShits 6 months ago
This is impressive as hell!
sloth263 6 months ago
Chills
kiao1208 6 months ago
I didn't listen, but i did hit F5 like 20 times for you.
Owntkthx 6 months ago
very impressive
afgr173 6 months ago
cool eyes
WalterPesce 6 months ago
sup bro
Fr0ntl1nez 6 months ago
His eyes are burning into my soul.
pizz0wn3d 6 months ago
He's amazing! His eyes pierced right into my soul!
xxsundown 6 months ago
niiiiiiiiice.....
shawcamera 6 months ago
wow Thanks for recording this :)
ladangelo202 6 months ago
Obviously, great!
FEEDER87 6 months ago
Fuckin smart
MissSquiles 6 months ago
You should upload the mashup.
simonisawesome12 6 months ago
That's brilliant It's people like these that should be living the high life for contributing to the world. Damn capitalism.
Ikeeplosingmyaccount 6 months ago 2
Sick flow, intricate wordplay, great presentation. I hope this takes you places, man.
TheGleesus 6 months ago 2
holy sheeeiiiiit
izbm666 6 months ago
Radicool
RioMadMan 6 months ago
adwadsdasd
RioMadMan 6 months ago
Great writing you're really talented I hope a talent agent discovers you, you deserve it
MrEleveneven 6 months ago
Amazing. This is quality stuff right here.
Corruption8 6 months ago
Reddit sent me here too!! Love this
cfw34683 6 months ago
Very beautiful.
Sharing with every person i know
aburntrose 6 months ago
fucking brilliant! reddit loves you!
jessdavids526 6 months ago
REDDDDDDDDDDDDITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!
AudibleR 6 months ago
The Reddit horn has sounded....Redditors WATCH!
AdrastosFhang 6 months ago
This is amazing.
ibatattack 6 months ago
/ Reddit sent me here
ibatattack 6 months ago
This guy deserve to be produced by Dre
XtoYmakes 6 months ago
Play this the same time as Dre Dre - Still Dre instrumental.
Realize this guy is better than most rap out there.
denfilade 6 months ago
fucking excellent.
RossingtonMichael 6 months ago
I will make sure that all of my non-redditer friends also see this and share it with their friends and their friends share it with their friends. Hopefully, some producer sees this.
risingxforce 6 months ago
oh my, he really spits
XtoYmakes 6 months ago
Incredible man...simply incredible
ATLwalters 6 months ago
This is amazing. I really hope you can find success.
polkapiggy 6 months ago
absurdly good.
morganfreemanJR 6 months ago
thats pretty neato
MrRumor 6 months ago
awesome poem man, and thank reddit, its gettin the word out!!!!
pizz246 6 months ago
I'd ask him to collaborate but he'll make me look bad...
KayRMusic 6 months ago
great
bubbtack3 6 months ago
this is good :D!
GlenInnesGangsta 6 months ago
His poems reminds me of the ones from "the poet" in Oz.
raensaeck 6 months ago
shades of Allen Ginsberg"Howl", cool stuff.
jayvicbe 6 months ago
Reddit brought me here. This is why I love Reddit, and you. You are amazing.
Bearblaster9000 6 months ago
This man is amazing.
It would be amazing to get some good audio equipment and wind shields, to record him rhyming on the beach. The 'beat' would be the wind and surf (hopefully not cracking and impact of the wind, but smoother sounding to protect the sound of his voice).
ttraider82 6 months ago
Awesome stuff!
Lafkak 6 months ago
this gives me chills
passiveprotest 6 months ago
This is amazing!
cfern034 6 months ago
Amazing rhythm and flow, and the thoughts/ideas/references are excellent. True talent!
trepancm 6 months ago
my god this brought a tear to my eye righteous man... changed my day.
frawshtie 6 months ago
That was surprisingly great. Awesome job man, looking forward to hearing more!
Winnarly 6 months ago
Great.
MultiverseTheory 6 months ago
This man should be paid shitloads for what he writes. someone get him in a studio.
watson123445566 6 months ago
Amazing.
SketchTeens 6 months ago
Awesome man!! :-)
arnaud360 6 months ago
Let this guy know that he's a genius of rhyme and poetry next time you see him.
furthur503 6 months ago
Interesting mate. Cool work.
Akselmusic21 6 months ago
Please never give up!
jaksonhunt 6 months ago
This guy is better than any rapper living today.
axemurderamb 6 months ago
This was pure awesome.
HellzBunny93 6 months ago
This guy is great, get him famous reddit :3
DrewtheGuitarGod 6 months ago
Fantastic!
lmackenzie89 6 months ago
People of the internet. You know it and I know it. This guy deserves to be a musician. Support if can and we will hear from him again.
cyfer911 6 months ago
This was fucking dope as hell....Why is this guy not writing songs?
dpineapple20 6 months ago
This is truly and utterly magnificent.
AvelineMiette 6 months ago
Respect, I sure hope your writing this stuff down! Keep fighting the good fight.
Furryscott 6 months ago
The new homeless beautiful voice guy
CanadianTechHelps 6 months ago
Magnificent rhymes ............. and you have beautiful eyes.
MsOldGregg 6 months ago
Stunning!
MrNoFro 6 months ago
Better than 90% of the stuff out there, this guy deserves to get published.
Plecebo1996 6 months ago
Dude. His eyes are awesome.
DeadshotDivinity 6 months ago
flow and depth
killcancersteve 6 months ago
Timeless
pspgeturown 6 months ago
EMINLESS
pixelr0 6 months ago
this guy's a real fucking poet man keep it up!
dylanCongTu 6 months ago
Great!
kaakoo 6 months ago
this guy deserves wayyyyy lot more attention!!
dylanCongTu 6 months ago
Awesome!
riazhack 6 months ago
He has talent, he deserves recognition beyond what youtube itself can give him.
KrazyKnuth 6 months ago
this guy deserves attentions from public.
btw Reddit rules!
dylanCongTu 6 months ago
Wow, that flows really damn well. Holy shit.
2dawolf 6 months ago
This guy rocks. Go to a poetry slam or something.
iestynlloyd 6 months ago
A lot of talent here. Hope he keeps this up. He is the man.
PjSmith71390 6 months ago
Tell him to continue his work, I enjoy it much
ultrablue18 6 months ago
Beautiful eyes, amazing words. Please keep contact with this man. I would love to see more. Tell him to maintain his good spirit and the narwhal bacons at midnight.
RockyRaccoon118 6 months ago
Hero
PeteTheGael 6 months ago
please put this on music! way better than contemporary rap
LuigiIrace 6 months ago
You're awesome! keep doing what you're doing! great job :)
-A Redditor
merlin4710 6 months ago
This dude would kill in some open mic poetry jams.
ltjboy03 6 months ago 4
" scrambled my mind--dextromethorphan hydrobromide"
<3333333
xxxvertigoxxx 6 months ago
Wow, this guy is actually good!
Hrazorness 6 months ago
I want this guy to be rich in a month, let's make it happen.
FKGproductions 6 months ago 27
Take care now, the reddit bump squad arrived, and they want you famous.
Strichmaennl 6 months ago 246