You also need to add a little of happy emotion in the eyes at the end. Hes free, its a wonderful moment. I get the feeling that he's still thinking its a bad thing. This is me being nit picky though. All in all its an amazing piece, I sort of envy your ability to put this together so quickly. I sort of dropped 3D animation all together because I realized I have no foundation skills and have been working on that.
ok, I like how he's looking around while he is thinking. but. who is he talking to? There is no focus of the eyes at the end. There should be, like he is narrowing onto someone. The eyes look like they are off in floaty land the entire time. You may have to cheat a little, like in reality the eyes are crossed horribly, but it looks good from he camera angle that you choose. I still think you need to widen the eyes when he says "and Now!" Its like a spark of happiness.
Looks a bit like Ebenezer Scrooge from " A Christmas Carol"
Humbug !
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But it's amazing. Like all your works XD
DowerLi 2 years ago
nice. but the facial hair looks strange...lol.
xeshnok 2 years ago
You also need to add a little of happy emotion in the eyes at the end. Hes free, its a wonderful moment. I get the feeling that he's still thinking its a bad thing. This is me being nit picky though. All in all its an amazing piece, I sort of envy your ability to put this together so quickly. I sort of dropped 3D animation all together because I realized I have no foundation skills and have been working on that.
Buddyb309 2 years ago 2
ok, I like how he's looking around while he is thinking. but. who is he talking to? There is no focus of the eyes at the end. There should be, like he is narrowing onto someone. The eyes look like they are off in floaty land the entire time. You may have to cheat a little, like in reality the eyes are crossed horribly, but it looks good from he camera angle that you choose. I still think you need to widen the eyes when he says "and Now!" Its like a spark of happiness.
Buddyb309 2 years ago
awesome you rock!
elpyrodraco 2 years ago