Mate, take the camera off the tripod and get closer, only frame what you want the audience to concentrate on, if you move too far away you lose the intensity, try to experiment. Watch how donnie yen films his stuff especially in flash point, the camera is right up close with the fighters. Having said that don't lose the framing make sure everything is nicely composed within the frame and doesn't look all over the place.
I haven't noticed a sloppy moment in the fight. The punching distance wasn't always perfect, I guess. But the pace is fast enough to camouflage it...so to say.
I'd still say you could put a bit more time into the humor moments. The concept is always funny, but you give up the correct timing by interrupting your lines or by replying/reacting too late.
But I think you have the skill/talent, probably just lack the time to fine-tune all dialog.
You do these guys are actual scottish citizens...The one that had the gun is last name is mr noble he is a teahcer at my school ROFL
TheEliteSlayer33 1 year ago
Wheres your old videos LINK pls
TheKINGFEDOR 1 year ago
quality!!!!
smoochbroch 1 year ago
why you remove all your kung fu videos
mecenarie12345 2 years ago
Not very Christian is it? Mixed messages.
TameCougar 2 years ago
dumbest thing ever
VTOperations 2 years ago
i had my comment removed becuase i said LOL
Samuraispiritmaster1 2 years ago
ace
michael5290 2 years ago
graeme noble ftw!
mrbubbles2250 2 years ago
Mate, take the camera off the tripod and get closer, only frame what you want the audience to concentrate on, if you move too far away you lose the intensity, try to experiment. Watch how donnie yen films his stuff especially in flash point, the camera is right up close with the fighters. Having said that don't lose the framing make sure everything is nicely composed within the frame and doesn't look all over the place.
YuanWenQing 2 years ago
You kinda remind me that Jeff Falcon guy... Another good one ,man!!! Greetings from Brasil!
animaniaco 2 years ago
Frickin luved it boys!!! As always our team are ace!! haha not that im biased or anything lol!
Aiysha17 2 years ago
awesome well done man!! x myk
Indigogoes 2 years ago
sound effect is cool ! great work
vatoubarzing 2 years ago
Puffer jacket? Is there a major crime wave in Scotland to get these? Enjoyable as ever.
Ozirah54 2 years ago
Puffa Jackets are quite popular over in cold Scotland!
gdn35 2 years ago
By the way...
Brilliant camera angles, editing AND audio (especially the punching sounds).
And a suggestion. Wouldn't random (distant) punching/fight sounds be good between 2:00 and 2:15?
Kijinn 2 years ago
Yeah I probably should've done that. Thanks for the tip, and the comment!
gdn35 2 years ago
Really good choreography.
Very dynamic.
I haven't noticed a sloppy moment in the fight. The punching distance wasn't always perfect, I guess. But the pace is fast enough to camouflage it...so to say.
I'd still say you could put a bit more time into the humor moments. The concept is always funny, but you give up the correct timing by interrupting your lines or by replying/reacting too late.
But I think you have the skill/talent, probably just lack the time to fine-tune all dialog.
Good vid!
Kijinn 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment! Yeah we didn't spend too long on the dialogue, something to work on for our next film!
gdn35 2 years ago
Nice video guys. Very good British accents although you probably get that living in Britain lol. Keep them coming.
shadeartstudios 2 years ago
Yeah proper Scottish accents!
gdn35 2 years ago
Good work, Graeme.
ChivalRuse 2 years ago
Thanks!
gdn35 2 years ago