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  • Hi Michael. It's clear you want comments, and I've taught video, so: I see why it took so long. You do a great job of incorporating all the tricks. At about 2:20 your girl does something with a box. Bad angle. Can't tell what she's doing. Flimsy story, but good editing. I am not a fan of Blair Witch, but now that you got all the techniques down, you can do more interesting stories. I love Saltaire--would love to see Saltaire become a character like Bruges in IN BRUGES.

  • Hey - thanks 4 commenting - I am very happy 2 get constructive critisism. I know the story is not great and yes, I paid more attention to incorporating tricks. It was hard with 100 pound budget and only 1 actress. Saltaire is a nice location 4 film making but I dont live there anymore (quite windy=difficult 2 film).

    Aire is a river. The box is a ticket machine for the train. I would like people to not take this film serious but to look at the effects and the artwork, which was my main focus.

  • I think you did a terrific job of incorporating animation and various effects. If that was your main focus, you deserve top marks for it. Budget always is important, but you did some very difficult things very well. Be very proud. Ignore the comments from people who don't understand the difficulties.

  • You tried to make this scary but its not at all

  • Das Video haut einen echt vom Hocker

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