Your drawings are great. Will appeal the students. You could change the narrator's voice to be not muffled. Young kids ill find it hard to understand what is being said. Make both the narrator's and the young kid voice happier. Too serious.
a very nice and creative video..i like your drawing very much.simple but interesting and creative!!btw,you may improve on the audio at the beginning as it quite unclear..overall,nice!!
Good attempt, nice video though! The video is very interesting as you have some characters with different voice which show that the characters are interacting. However, it will be better if you use brighter color as it will catch pupils attention and also the audio are made clearer. All in all, keep it up the good work!
It is a very nice video. Situation that happens between Ali and Abu are very meaningful as both of them were talking about their lesson in school. Besides that, there characters also are very interesting although it is simple. However, the voice projection of the narrator are not very clear in the beginning, but it the end, it sounds more better. Well done!!!
I like the idea of your drawings! Very original indeed.. maybe you'll like to change the voice of the narrator so that it sounds..friendlier? hahaha... this sounds like transformers to me.. :P
simple but interesting i would say towards the video. well, there's still lacking in the video which most obvious is the audio. basically, the audio is not clear enough to listen. since this video is for young to watch, the audio should be clear for them to listen.overall, well done to you
Hi there. It's a nice vedio where the character in the video recall what he has learned in the class about shapes and its characteristics.However, the characters themselves are little bit blur(the colour looks the same like the brick wall),correct me if i am wrong.and one more thing,i relised an error which you said "the triangle has 4 sides, instead of 3.
Overall...nice watching your video, simple and straught to yhe point.
in the beginning, the sound was quite blur but towards the end, it was getting better and better. i like the idea that you draw the pictures on your own and each of the scene shown was really clear--the pcitures goes according with the storyline. and the input part was clear too. keep up the good work
I got startled upon listening the intro. probably it sound fake. I love the idea that you drew and make a story for the pupils and teaches the pupils about shapes. Some of the pictures are blurred and can be of better quality. Keep it up=D
Your drawings are great. Will appeal the students. You could change the narrator's voice to be not muffled. Young kids ill find it hard to understand what is being said. Make both the narrator's and the young kid voice happier. Too serious.
eduvidum 2 years ago
i really like your drawing. it is simple but really useful for the kids. make improvement on the audio ya! =)
mia5007 2 years ago
a very nice and creative video..i like your drawing very much.simple but interesting and creative!!btw,you may improve on the audio at the beginning as it quite unclear..overall,nice!!
-cecomel-
TheTESLian 2 years ago
nice drawing and storyline. However, I think it will be better if you have some words to enhance the video more. Overall, good job!
pipapilipa 2 years ago
good video for me. Can see your effort on doing this video. the ideas is simple, but it is suitable to teach the child about shapes. good ideas.
notakakidimuka: change the audio a bit. :)
MrRadunk 2 years ago
Good attempt, nice video though! The video is very interesting as you have some characters with different voice which show that the characters are interacting. However, it will be better if you use brighter color as it will catch pupils attention and also the audio are made clearer. All in all, keep it up the good work!
ExcellLeo7 2 years ago
It is a very nice video. Situation that happens between Ali and Abu are very meaningful as both of them were talking about their lesson in school. Besides that, there characters also are very interesting although it is simple. However, the voice projection of the narrator are not very clear in the beginning, but it the end, it sounds more better. Well done!!!
Shawndos22 2 years ago
I like the idea of your drawings! Very original indeed.. maybe you'll like to change the voice of the narrator so that it sounds..friendlier? hahaha... this sounds like transformers to me.. :P
siangshian 2 years ago
sometimes the voices of the characters are not really clear and the enunciation is not clear
slovakOO 2 years ago
simple but interesting i would say towards the video. well, there's still lacking in the video which most obvious is the audio. basically, the audio is not clear enough to listen. since this video is for young to watch, the audio should be clear for them to listen.overall, well done to you
acikg13 2 years ago
Wow! A very creative video, especially the simple but very interesting drawings!
Watch out for the quality of the audio though, in some parts it was quite hard to catch what the characters were saying 'cos the voice was blurred.
Besides the slight mistake, this video's very informational for young learners learning shapes.
Good job! =)
tabbybear87 2 years ago
Hi there. It's a nice vedio where the character in the video recall what he has learned in the class about shapes and its characteristics.However, the characters themselves are little bit blur(the colour looks the same like the brick wall),correct me if i am wrong.and one more thing,i relised an error which you said "the triangle has 4 sides, instead of 3.
Overall...nice watching your video, simple and straught to yhe point.
NAEmnzr 2 years ago
in the beginning, the sound was quite blur but towards the end, it was getting better and better. i like the idea that you draw the pictures on your own and each of the scene shown was really clear--the pcitures goes according with the storyline. and the input part was clear too. keep up the good work
tecerili 2 years ago
I got startled upon listening the intro. probably it sound fake. I love the idea that you drew and make a story for the pupils and teaches the pupils about shapes. Some of the pictures are blurred and can be of better quality. Keep it up=D
karinwaikiki 2 years ago