Good storyline, modeling, lighting and rendering, but animation could be better. Characters are overanimated and too slow. You have talent, but you need to polish it. Check Pixar movies, some movements take just 1 or 2 frames. The best way, is to act by yourself, and check how much take some expressions. But keep trying - i believe you go better.
hahahahaha police kkkkkkkkkkkkkk
deds821 3 months ago
おお！なんと
mocopuni 4 months ago
This was inspiring! Keep animating...
VTVStudios 7 months ago
cool animation .............plus motion ......what software did u use to model the characters ?
1X4SX24X21HM 7 months ago
Great
slappinghappy 7 months ago
And the moral to the story: Mr. Muscle Bound bullying 90 lbs, weakling regrets his actions in the end. Ha! Serves him right!
cinemantid75 8 months ago
Great animation, but why not just have dialogue instead of grunting pantomime?
thediscopimpernell 9 months ago
wah wah wwaaaaaaahhh
THEgreatCORNHOLIO245 9 months ago
man i wish to be like youuuuuuuuuuuuu :(
mrgiloz 9 months ago
This is rlly good! But I agree with wayborn1, the trees look like ice-cream XD
EchoFeather13 1 year ago
LOL the trees look like ICE CREAM
wayborn1 1 year ago
This is incredibly professional animation, excellent work!
stevensonbak 1 year ago 3
great animation, not that funny. too predictable
3Deditor 1 year ago
Haha,,
GoodMovie (:
Janna3101 2 years ago
animation is awesome, your staging and editing are really nice!
gabrielle64 2 years ago 5
amazing short. Really nice work.
philybee 2 years ago
Now THAT was funny, amazing animation!
SavageArms357 3 years ago
Amazing animation models and story, i love these sort of quirky animations, just like the Pixar short films. Im learning in blender.
Plus brilliant lip sync!
jacobscamell 3 years ago
OH SNAP!!! someone is going to jail ...NICE JOB..did you use Vray for lighting?
Cognetto 3 years ago
Good storyline, modeling, lighting and rendering, but animation could be better. Characters are overanimated and too slow. You have talent, but you need to polish it. Check Pixar movies, some movements take just 1 or 2 frames. The best way, is to act by yourself, and check how much take some expressions. But keep trying - i believe you go better.
ReinOwader 3 years ago
That was fantastic. Great animation, and great ending!
5 stars from me! =D
kingku 3 years ago
Brilliant! Genious!
jfunf 3 years ago
GrrrrrrEat!
stopato 3 years ago
2 words:
Heck Yes.
:-P
theQiwiMan 3 years ago
haha, awesome
SlowDaddie 3 years ago
nice work
sasukePortugal 3 years ago
Great Job. Nice StoryBoarding. Good themes. Very nice animation.
AVTPro 3 years ago