the dance, charlotte martin

[ittshannah]

Leap and turns are EXTREMELY common in lyrical dances... I am also a dancer :)

[JacobsTeamBaby]

Me and my friend next year will probably do contemporary jazz with this song :D

[doublees7]

Did you guys cut part of the song out ??? 

[SuperBAbYgIrl54321]

IH PERFORMED THIS IS 4TH GRADE !!!

it was very difficult but ih got a standing ovationn [;

[cdm0014]

greattt job

[sunshineee0987]

@doublees7 oooh yes go for it

if you do can you video it and put it up?

id be intigued to see your version :)

id give you a better copy of videoing if i had one but i dont haha sorryyyy

[doublees7]

@sunshineee0987 okay thanks I will see what i can do

[doublees7]

@doublees7 why was my comment removed

[sunshineee0987]

@doublees7 i dont know

i just saw that then

i thought you must have?

glitch in the system? haha not sureee

[sunshineee0987]

well this was done at the end of year tennn, so both 16

:)

[MsDebbielicious]

good try

[bigbm80]

how old are the 2 girls in this dance the one looks really young the one with the pony tail

[KatyMarie525]

It sounded like it hurt half of the time with the constant falling but it was amazing

[Tanglespeck]

good intentions but that floorwork was just awful. way too much wierd rolling around on the ground....

[gdubb24sc]

i loved it i think this is the best version i love it wit two ppl also the one wit the ppl in the mirror wit the all black on wit boys & girls dancin

[maddisonbeck25]

I'm going to do a dance to this song where a little girl, me, loves her parents but they hate her and wish she was never born as you see in the lyrics: Weary and worn

Little monster is born

Tell me lies and I'll justify them.

They harrass her and abuse her and in the end she dies because they kill her.

If its good enough I will post it on youtube!

Hopefully its as good as others to this song.

Check it out if I put it on.

[Errareldz]

I have the clone !!!

This blonde is as identical as I

I from Poland

[sunshineee0987]

@Errareldz hahaha ohh thats mad :)

[LissaRenae96]

its at 2:00 lol

[LissaRenae96]

dont drop so hard at 2:2 ish byut its really good:] im used to getting that comment from my choreographer becuz if you hit a competition stage they deduct major points for knee drops and such that they can hear.

[sunshineee0987]

@LissaRenae96 good thing they werent competing then hahahaha

but thankss :)

[21BiscuitStreet]

i love it especially near the end theres some real cool moves...is this in australia?

[sunshineee0987]

yep :)

[Thebeastboulain]

Wow I loved this dance, you are both amazing and seem to have so much passion for it!!!!!

Plus the song is amazing this is beautiful keep up the amazing work and you could both go far :')

[aphroditexXxdiva]

is this at a dance school?

[erinnxrumsey]

i like it.

[xXTeiJayXx]

that drop was fabulous

[colorsmakeyousmile]

my studio doesnt allow it online im respectful, this dance is good

[sunshineee0987]

nothing like good first impressions, you seem like a heaps nice person. -.-

[Lalachich01]

i love it!!! i love this song tooo!!! they did awesome

[dancefreeklovetosing]

wow really inspiring!

[hotstuff180]

2:31-3:01 my fave part

[therealgabsteph]

wow you guys are really good! ur perfectly in time and all your moves are exacuted amazingly! i wish i were that good!

[taurusfixed20]

you guys are really good. The moves matched the song perfectly.

[lilshorty0823]

very nice choregraphy

[LexLexDancerGal]

i like this alot (:

and i understand the dances story complely , and the tricks are a nice touch .

lol keep dancingg !

[thiinkpiink2112]

omg this dance was EXCELLENT!

I LOVED it!

And, to all those haters, you probably dont dance but you know you should try it cause lyrical dance is actually really energetic and fun and its supposed to be lots of leaps and turns. Research it before dissing :)

[PSDdancer13]

2:34, my favourite part :P

[Bootzie2]

My favorite part was 2:34 to lol

[BlarneyBabe101]

this is REALLY amazing. like wow!!! soo talented. how long have you guys been dancing??! great control and form. i love the roll by the dark-haired one at the end, and the blondish one's leaps are great. excellent video!! :D xoxo

[dancerrr28]

yeah you dont need to be doing so many leaps and turns but if your not going to the choreography should be much better im a dancer and not all my dances have a trillion turns in it and stuff but the choreography is better than this.. this is just boring doesnt show if you guys can really dance or not

[dancerchiclpm]

its a lyrical dance.....leaps and turns are in lyrical dances a lot........ I also am a dancer.

[J3SS3G0NZA1EZ]

:) ..... wat i've been wantting to see in this

song for a long time now :) a story behind it!!

i hate people just doing a DANCE with spins and

leaps... :) thnx dude

[dancerrr28]

i liked the choreography towards the end HATED the beginning needs more leaps and turns

[sunshineee0987]

more leaps and turns? your a daner, arnt you?

how clche do you want to get. its about building up towards the end, buliding suspension and interest. you are only seeing the obvious. its like reading between the lines. only looking between the movements.

[dancerchiclpm]

up there you just said that it had to many leaps and turns..... make up your mind.

[dancerrr28]

how many times are they going to do that move where they do the attitudes over and overr ! VERY SLOPPY bad dancers, terrible choreography boornigggggggggggggggg !

[sunshineee0987]

ok, so where they do the same sequence of moves which they have already done, thats their motif.

the dance has a story behind it,

they are chilhood friends who have drifted apart, they both are at a train station in which they recognise each other, and retrack on all the memores they had when they were younger this is shown by each time they do their motif, they run to the back of the 'stage' as they hear a train coming, but then it ges past as it is not their train.

[sunshineee0987]

they then pull back to signify this, then they turn around to continue communicating with each other. this particular performance was in front of the year 8 dance class at our school, they had shown it to the year 9s aswell and they still performed well this time, but it was the only one time that they stuffed up a few times. they got 30/30 and they are amazing talented girls (:

[sunshineee0987]

now watch it again and tell me if you can see the story coming through. oh also at the end, sams train comes and she gets on and jacqui is left behind and again their childhood friendship is lost. it was very emotional and very heartwarming (:

[dancerchiclpm]

your a bitch, i saw your other comments and it said that they had to many leaps and turns and then your next comment said they didn't have enough leaps and turns and now your saying that it is very sloppy.... your a dancer arnt you? you should know that dancers don't hate on each other. ID LIKE TO SEE SOME VIDEOS OF YOU DANCING!

[sunshineee0987]

hahahahahahahhaha your excellent and i looove you.

hahahahaaah!

(:

[webelonghere]

great job

[webelonghere]

gret job

[shortgirl1995]

this is amzing choreography. good choice of song, it is one of my favorites!

[kmarisms41]

not very good:(

[TrashyxxxCouture]

wow. very talented girls, and the choreography is great. i love all the counter balancing and how all their separate movements feed into each other.