@TheJlee2006 just depends on the style. fluidity sometimes isnt needed when your doing full out jazz, or hard hitting movement. theres a time when you can use fluidity if you choose to. your a smart dancer when you know where to be fluid and where to be sharp.
hi! im just saying but i dont think u really chose d right song for those moves. plus i think that there isnt much variation in ur choreography. If i were u id put less spins & piruoteese & go for something more hard, sharp & dynamic if u want to choose such music. gd luck =]
@Ejmii1 I hate when people think you have to place certain moves to a certain song. people are inspired by different songs in different ways. this is the way i interpreted the choreography for this song, cause it moved me that way. thats why artistry is beautiful.
@Francisco2007 ok ok i know. but still, if u wanna people to see d cheo 500 times and still feel as if they r watching it for d first time, it has to be more varitaed. just saying mate. =]
@Francisco2007 You'll get it! Just keep auditioning. That one girl did it what, four times? And made it into the top 20. They're bound to love you(: Obviously you have many other fans just by this video as well(:
i think the choice of the music is not the best, if you dance santogold you'll find a way or black and gold by sam sparro or even russian roulette by rihanna it´s better choices but the you know what is best for you.you range of motions has ti be best , because i think is a litle bit weak, the rest seems good! Good luck
sorry for the english, i´m portuguese. I´m just saying that your range of motions is not so strong as the rest of your competition will be. If you want to be in top 20 has to be better than that. Everything has to be perfect, but the only thing i see you have to improve is you range of motions and beware as your emotion will be transmitted to the audience.
@Francisco2007 Hey dude, he is placing constructive criticism. Don't take it as if he is laughing at you, you did pretty well... but the song choice wasn't the best to really convey those dance moves. Black and Gold was a good suggestion actually *love that song* but yeh... your dance is kinda sexy! ^_^ are you practicing to audition for top tier dance schools? or are you already in one?
i wanna learn comtemporary
CrazyCamera1 1 year ago
You should deff try out again because your amazing and if you make it that far just know i would vote for you!
Xolilbric8oX 1 year ago
@Xolilbric8oX well hopefully it'll happen1!!! :D
Francisco2007 1 year ago
Hey Francisco!!!
This looks soooo good!!
Watching SYTYCD tho, the only critique is that Mia Michaels will tell you to have more fluidity in your movements, if your going for contemperary.
Other than that, YOU HAVE SERIOUS POTENTIAL!!!
who knows, i might see you there at auditions lol!!
TheJlee2006 1 year ago
@TheJlee2006 just depends on the style. fluidity sometimes isnt needed when your doing full out jazz, or hard hitting movement. theres a time when you can use fluidity if you choose to. your a smart dancer when you know where to be fluid and where to be sharp.
Francisco2007 1 year ago
hi! im just saying but i dont think u really chose d right song for those moves. plus i think that there isnt much variation in ur choreography. If i were u id put less spins & piruoteese & go for something more hard, sharp & dynamic if u want to choose such music. gd luck =]
Ejmii1 1 year ago
@Ejmii1 I hate when people think you have to place certain moves to a certain song. people are inspired by different songs in different ways. this is the way i interpreted the choreography for this song, cause it moved me that way. thats why artistry is beautiful.
Francisco2007 1 year ago
@Francisco2007 ok ok i know. but still, if u wanna people to see d cheo 500 times and still feel as if they r watching it for d first time, it has to be more varitaed. just saying mate. =]
Ejmii1 1 year ago
I'm glad you didn't make it this season! Not in a rude way lol. But I didn't watch this season because it bored me... I want to see you on it!!!!!
babygyrlkatara 1 year ago
@babygyrlkatara hopefully sometime soon!!!!
Francisco2007 1 year ago
Definitely a fan. Hope you make it to Vegas! You're great! (:
penguinlover13 1 year ago
@penguinlover13 didnt make it to vegas unfortunately!! but oh well!!! thanks for the love
Francisco2007 1 year ago
@Francisco2007 You'll get it! Just keep auditioning. That one girl did it what, four times? And made it into the top 20. They're bound to love you(: Obviously you have many other fans just by this video as well(:
penguinlover13 1 year ago
@penguinlover13 hopefully!!! I think im going there with the wrong style...I think im gonna audition like..jazzfunk/hip hop next time.
Francisco2007 1 year ago
i think the choice of the music is not the best, if you dance santogold you'll find a way or black and gold by sam sparro or even russian roulette by rihanna it´s better choices but the you know what is best for you.you range of motions has ti be best , because i think is a litle bit weak, the rest seems good! Good luck
portfaz18 1 year ago
whats a little bit weak?
Francisco2007 1 year ago
sorry for the english, i´m portuguese. I´m just saying that your range of motions is not so strong as the rest of your competition will be. If you want to be in top 20 has to be better than that. Everything has to be perfect, but the only thing i see you have to improve is you range of motions and beware as your emotion will be transmitted to the audience.
portfaz18 1 year ago
range of motions meaning?? :)
Francisco2007 1 year ago
@Francisco2007 Hey dude, he is placing constructive criticism. Don't take it as if he is laughing at you, you did pretty well... but the song choice wasn't the best to really convey those dance moves. Black and Gold was a good suggestion actually *love that song* but yeh... your dance is kinda sexy! ^_^ are you practicing to audition for top tier dance schools? or are you already in one?
sadguyfoundout1 1 year ago