see Johhnys life had never been what you'd call average, as a kid hed sit alone, vegemite sandwiches, blood dripping down from last nights bandages, daddy had a temper and johnny couldnt handle him, daddy took to him with sticks, no spoilt kids, he yelled at him, Johnny lay there taking beatings, but hes just so mad at him, Johnny's just a little boy, theres no way he can abandon him, every day the beatings come, but johnny learns to handle them
Johnny man sits smokin, lost his friends long before, it doesnt really matter as he dont remember any more, he chased them all away, he doesnt give a fuck no more, who needs, friends he says, never had them long before...
Hey man. This is real nice, but i recommend making songs shorter, like an average song. Like around 3 mins. This song would be nice for different rappers/singers to sing too, like for a remix, but nice dude.
@LoboGolden100 hey thanks man, I did think about making it shorter, which would be an easy thing to do, but I originally wrote my own lyrics and they took up heaps of space. But yea it could be easily improved upon by someone with more skill then me, I just do these for fun :) Thanks for commenting tho, if you would like to try rapping over it id be happy to supply you a downloadable version
see Johhnys life had never been what you'd call average, as a kid hed sit alone, vegemite sandwiches, blood dripping down from last nights bandages, daddy had a temper and johnny couldnt handle him, daddy took to him with sticks, no spoilt kids, he yelled at him, Johnny lay there taking beatings, but hes just so mad at him, Johnny's just a little boy, theres no way he can abandon him, every day the beatings come, but johnny learns to handle them
soudenm84 3 months ago
Johnny man sits smokin, lost his friends long before, it doesnt really matter as he dont remember any more, he chased them all away, he doesnt give a fuck no more, who needs, friends he says, never had them long before...
soudenm84 3 months ago
Hey man. This is real nice, but i recommend making songs shorter, like an average song. Like around 3 mins. This song would be nice for different rappers/singers to sing too, like for a remix, but nice dude.
LoboGolden100 8 months ago
@LoboGolden100 hey thanks man, I did think about making it shorter, which would be an easy thing to do, but I originally wrote my own lyrics and they took up heaps of space. But yea it could be easily improved upon by someone with more skill then me, I just do these for fun :) Thanks for commenting tho, if you would like to try rapping over it id be happy to supply you a downloadable version
soudenm84 8 months ago
@soudenm84 Awesome man! Thanks!
LoboGolden100 8 months ago