I like the chorus.. Lyrics go nice with the beat ... But I couldnt hear anything else and I had to listen hella closely and still couldnt hear.. You need to remake this video with a better mic and stuff and go hardd with it..
i like the melody the chorus and ya spittin, you do know you can when your ready go studio lay your rhymes down and play around with the midi files dont change the melody its really good just adjust the volume on it or play around with other instruments, you should really go studio and lay these down properly you will be amazed obviously make sure you have a sound engineer hes the guy that does anythink you want done to a track he can even make you a track to spit on- i say stick 2 ur own style
lmao!!!!!!omfg...wow this is even worst!!!!!..wow bitch you too garbage...who is going too hate on you....lol...get some real gun sounds too...fucken bitch ass nigga...you so fucken garbage...
fuck u i checked out ur "song"... whack as fuck..now i know why u hate....neone reading this give this guy a hit on his vid and decide for urself (warning: it will be a waste of ur time, so don't say i didnt warn u)
sounds good but if u master the voice by placing some reverbs and lilttle bit of compressor and perhaps EQ-it would sound much better. I like the baseline
1. Try what I said in my tutorial and add snares in the patterns before the chorus
2. And put a compressor on the beat when your mixing it w/ your voice so that the beat
doesn't overtake the song. lol
3. I'm not sure if that's a mess up at 2:17 BUT GET RID OF THAT.
4. Overall, you have a good idea and flow, but your beat is way too simple. try adding in some bells, real low in the background. Try and just add stuff that sounds cool so the beat sounds full.
You need to work on your delivery and your audio mixing skills. You might also need a better mic. Put some swagger on ya, if you rappin, you gotta think you're the shit, and believe it. That's what makes everyone else believe it.
I like the chorus.. Lyrics go nice with the beat ... But I couldnt hear anything else and I had to listen hella closely and still couldnt hear.. You need to remake this video with a better mic and stuff and go hardd with it..
HipHopBaybee17 1 year ago
Lol.... Dog.............. wtf
HommyMuzik 2 years ago
u kno u like it :p
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
i like the melody the chorus and ya spittin, you do know you can when your ready go studio lay your rhymes down and play around with the midi files dont change the melody its really good just adjust the volume on it or play around with other instruments, you should really go studio and lay these down properly you will be amazed obviously make sure you have a sound engineer hes the guy that does anythink you want done to a track he can even make you a track to spit on- i say stick 2 ur own style
twilightteevee 2 years ago
wow thanks a lot...probably the best and most useful comment...appreciate that!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
I dont like it, i cant even hear you. and KSE said he/she didn't like it, u shouldn't have argued with them.
E018s 2 years ago
why are they ur boyfriend?
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
lmao!!!!!!omfg...wow this is even worst!!!!!..wow bitch you too garbage...who is going too hate on you....lol...get some real gun sounds too...fucken bitch ass nigga...you so fucken garbage...
HALITOSIS2k 2 years ago
lol aren't u hatin on me? stupid.
fuck u i checked out ur "song"... whack as fuck..now i know why u hate....neone reading this give this guy a hit on his vid and decide for urself (warning: it will be a waste of ur time, so don't say i didnt warn u)
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nigga i come too fuck shit too laugh....every day,...you fucked up pussy by trying too go against me...ya career is over....
HALITOSIS2k 2 years ago
stop tryin so hard...instead of watchin my "career" maybe u should watch ur own...it needs attention
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
not impressed..
bad sounds, bad beat..
not feeling anything!
1/5
KSEMortensen 2 years ago
u obviously missed the point...
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
obviously you dont like me being honest..
i dont like it, so dont try and blame me for making it sound bad.. i made a honest comment.. live with it or disable it
KSEMortensen 2 years ago
first of all: you can't "make it sound bad"
i thought thats what u said i did...and honestly i will never delete ur comments...it just makes u look bad :(
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
yes you used poor sounds, its not creative at all. im not feeling anything. it really annoys me.
So you did make it sound bad..
so im a bad person for trying to tell you the truth here ? honesty is rare nowadays.. dont cry about it when you get it!
KSEMortensen 2 years ago
this shit tight cuz did you do this independent i think you used fl studio cause it sounds familiars
AaronRCoelho 2 years ago
thanks for the love man... and yes it is, do u make tracks too????
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Lame... Could be better... 2/5
netboy32 2 years ago
hahhaaa UR VIDEOS ARE LAME!!!!
couldn't be worse!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
It didnt mean it bad!
netboy32 2 years ago
tight track man i like the slow tempo keep it up 5*
kamiichinin 2 years ago
man this is sick ...keep it up bro
djwalidd 2 years ago
yo can you send the flp...
DaRealYoungJ 2 years ago
why not mp3?
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
please reply and tell me how you did the video :d
layered :D what prg u used?
DjNiko29 2 years ago
its kind of a trademark...
:p
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
the bass drums a killa and isn't that a organ????
DaRealYoungJ 2 years ago
air chorus if i remember rite...
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Are you trying not to be Laud or something? you sound like your just talking
goldteeth702 2 years ago
don't know what laud means...
iono mang just didnt wanna scream at people and wanted to be clear with what i say u know...
i know its kinda a throwback to when u knew what people were sayin...
thanks for watching though and commenting
peaceeeeee
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
one word for this
TIGHT
check out my new instrumental
Fruity Loop Instrumental - Notorious
8CheckmyBeats8 2 years ago
Really good!
I like it so downtempo and that "silent" (as in not screamin into the mic) vocal.
5/5!
X8t4tic 2 years ago
i like this shit the beat raw
someone10123 2 years ago
tight
keep it up
emirbeats 2 years ago
overall it's coo it's does need a lil work tho but keep grindin . also check me out return ya opinion
rjrock2 2 years ago
overall it's it's coozie it jus need a lil work keep girnd tho
rjrock2 2 years ago
chea...
love the drum kits...
wat chu use to make that bro???
DaRealYoungJ 2 years ago
yea the beginning is good,but some sounds are a little bit weird...but its ok!
djsketso 2 years ago
Niceeeee !!!!
SlowpawDaBeatMaker 2 years ago
nice man ;) keep doing ur thing
peace
OfficialKKFchannel 2 years ago
Not bad mate...that sounds nice =)
u only need more Bpm =P
Keep going the good work..
fabioruben007 2 years ago
not my kind of music. nothing personal.
DrMattDestruction 2 years ago
sounds good but if u master the voice by placing some reverbs and lilttle bit of compressor and perhaps EQ-it would sound much better. I like the baseline
FalseSignal 2 years ago
this junt nice my guy....keep it up
DaRedZone6 2 years ago
oh snap man. nice track for reals..
1. Try what I said in my tutorial and add snares in the patterns before the chorus
2. And put a compressor on the beat when your mixing it w/ your voice so that the beat
doesn't overtake the song. lol
3. I'm not sure if that's a mess up at 2:17 BUT GET RID OF THAT.
4. Overall, you have a good idea and flow, but your beat is way too simple. try adding in some bells, real low in the background. Try and just add stuff that sounds cool so the beat sounds full.
superslikuzi 2 years ago
yayo thanks man appreciate the comment..ya seen ur vid so i appreciate the techy stuff advice foreal...i feel u...keep doin ur thang mang still
yo 2:17 are "i cut my brain, raindrops of ink" :P
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Nice beat. But as i said in the comment on your raindrops song, i can't say if it's good or bad, because i'm not listening to hip hop :P
Superkyllingibsen 2 years ago
nice man,but it would be nicer if you would master the track...anyway..keep the good work
oradearapp 2 years ago
true enough thanks for peepin it mang!!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
like it, especialy the pads u used and the flows cool as well, thx 4 ur comment, greetz from germany
justdabestdotcom 2 years ago
THANKS!!!!!
for commenting and checkin it out!
appreciate that mang
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
ayoo thx for the comment
this is a hot track ...i like it
do you use fl??
443446860 2 years ago
respects mang...
...yup
i c u too mang keep doin ur thang
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice track 5* from me bro
brownboy9569 2 years ago
WORDUP mangggggg what up! thanks yo!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
is tight but its a lil choppy (speaking of the chorus part) listen 2 sum of my beats
checkyoblak 2 years ago
respects mang yayo i seent a couple pretty nice stuff u got goin there mangggg
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
thanks mang im blushin :p really tho appreciate that yo really really really tho!!!!!
peaceeeeeee
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
I really like the beat. Is that like a choir in the background or is it a pad?
blaze2690 2 years ago
chorus? choir.
thanks man and thanks for listenin
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
sick beat and lyrics
LBProductions511 2 years ago
thanks lbp appreciate that
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
sound good...but i wouldn't say pro
chadlue89 2 years ago
i like it . beat is on some chill shxt. you made it?
JaeMostOriginalTV 2 years ago
yayo i did...thanks mang for listening and shit sho nuffff
peaceeeeeeeee
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice
NCOProductions 2 years ago
Give weezy his flow back. :)
You need to work on your delivery and your audio mixing skills. You might also need a better mic. Put some swagger on ya, if you rappin, you gotta think you're the shit, and believe it. That's what makes everyone else believe it.
PharaohDox 2 years ago
not bad this is crazy man but i think the beat need mor melodies but nice rap keep it up
kamiichinin 2 years ago
respects on peepin the lyrics mang...appreciate that and the comment too mang peaceeee
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice kick like it two thumbs up
gr88tmusic 2 years ago
thanks man appreciate the feedback and positive comment
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Like it! Very "ghost" like melody.
iGregspeedi 2 years ago
nuff respect mang appreciate that
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Yo this shits dope! and good lyrics keep doing it. expecting more =]
kdnh93 2 years ago
thanks man thanks for listening mang...u coooouldddd sub if u wanted :P
thanks again yo
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
good shit keep it up my dude
phi215420 2 years ago
thanks man appreciate that
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice wit the lyrics....but ur beats seem 2 plain..... 4/5.....yo best song so far
ExquisiteBeatz 2 years ago
thanks mang respect yo opinion
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice job fam. If me and my girl ever hit up the dot, I'll have to get at you in the studio, see what we could create
WhiteBoyOnTheTrack 2 years ago
seeennnnnn mang holla at meeeeee...urs could meet mine :P
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
nice dude : )
etaler 2 years ago
respect manggggggg
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Nice! I like it :-)
jjgnumb3 2 years ago
thanks yo!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
yeah man this is good bro;) i like it
SurenAvetisov 2 years ago
thanks man appreciate that
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
Nice yo nice lyrics n flow mayne keep it up. cant wait till we getta collab man da sauga boiis
00Young00Kay00 2 years ago
nuff respects mang yo u know thats fo sho...i c u young k i c ya mang...SAUGASHIT!!!!
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
NOT BAD THERE U GO!!!
OnImpulseBamBam 2 years ago
thank ya thank ya
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago
yesss... 5/5
DjKillerS2008 2 years ago
respects mang :D
DJSIMPLYP 2 years ago