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  • I like the chorus.. Lyrics go nice with the beat ... But I couldnt hear anything else and I had to listen hella closely and still couldnt hear.. You need to remake this video with a better mic and stuff and go hardd with it..

  • Lol.... Dog.............. wtf

  • u kno u like it :p

  • i like the melody the chorus and ya spittin, you do know you can when your ready go studio lay your rhymes down and play around with the midi files dont change the melody its really good just adjust the volume on it or play around with other instruments, you should really go studio and lay these down properly you will be amazed obviously make sure you have a sound engineer hes the guy that does anythink you want done to a track he can even make you a track to spit on- i say stick 2 ur own style

  • wow thanks a lot...probably the best and most useful comment...appreciate that!

  • I dont like it, i cant even hear you. and KSE said he/she didn't like it, u shouldn't have argued with them.

  • why are they ur boyfriend?

  • lmao!!!!!!omfg...wow this is even worst!!!!!..wow bitch you too garbage...who is going too hate on you....lol...get some real gun sounds too...fucken bitch ass nigga...you so fucken garbage...

  • lol aren't u hatin on me? stupid.

    fuck u i checked out ur "song"... whack as fuck..now i know why u hate....neone reading this give this guy a hit on his vid and decide for urself (warning: it will be a waste of ur time, so don't say i didnt warn u)

  • nigga i come too fuck shit too laugh....every day,...you fucked up pussy by trying too go against me...ya career is over....

  • stop tryin so hard...instead of watchin my "career" maybe u should watch ur own...it needs attention

  • not impressed..

    bad sounds, bad beat..

    not feeling anything!

    1/5

  • u obviously missed the point...

  • obviously you dont like me being honest..

    i dont like it, so dont try and blame me for making it sound bad.. i made a honest comment.. live with it or disable it

  • first of all: you can't "make it sound bad"

    i thought thats what u said i did...and honestly i will never delete ur comments...it just makes u look bad :(

  • yes you used poor sounds, its not creative at all. im not feeling anything. it really annoys me.

    So you did make it sound bad..

    so im a bad person for trying to tell you the truth here ? honesty is rare nowadays.. dont cry about it when you get it!

  • this shit tight cuz did you do this independent i think you used fl studio cause it sounds familiars

  • thanks for the love man... and yes it is, do u make tracks too????

  • Lame... Could be better... 2/5

  • hahhaaa UR VIDEOS ARE LAME!!!!

    couldn't be worse!

  • It didnt mean it bad!

  • tight track man i like the slow tempo keep it up 5*

  • man this is sick ...keep it up bro

  • yo can you send the flp...

  • why not mp3?

  • please reply and tell me how you did the video :d

    layered :D what prg u used?

  • its kind of a trademark...

    :p

  • the bass drums a killa and isn't that a organ????

  • air chorus if i remember rite...

  • Are you trying not to be Laud or something? you sound like your just talking

  • don't know what laud means...

    iono mang just didnt wanna scream at people and wanted to be clear with what i say u know...

    i know its kinda a throwback to when u knew what people were sayin...

    thanks for watching though and commenting

    peaceeeeee

  • one word for this

    TIGHT

    check out my new instrumental

    Fruity Loop Instrumental - Notorious

  • Really good!

    I like it so downtempo and that "silent" (as in not screamin into the mic) vocal.

    5/5!

  • i like this shit the beat raw

  • tight

    keep it up

  • overall it's coo it's does need a lil work tho but keep grindin . also check me out return ya opinion

  • overall it's it's coozie it jus need a lil work keep girnd tho

  • chea...

    love the drum kits...

    wat chu use to make that bro???

  • yea the beginning is good,but some sounds are a little bit weird...but its ok!

  • Niceeeee !!!!

  • nice man ;) keep doing ur thing

    peace

  • Not bad mate...that sounds nice =)

    u only need more Bpm =P

    Keep going the good work..

  • not my kind of music. nothing personal.

  • sounds good but if u master the voice by placing some reverbs and lilttle bit of compressor and perhaps EQ-it would sound much better. I like the baseline

  • this junt nice my guy....keep it up

  • oh snap man. nice track for reals..

    1. Try what I said in my tutorial and add snares in the patterns before the chorus

    2. And put a compressor on the beat when your mixing it w/ your voice so that the beat

    doesn't overtake the song. lol

    3. I'm not sure if that's a mess up at 2:17 BUT GET RID OF THAT.

    4. Overall, you have a good idea and flow, but your beat is way too simple. try adding in some bells, real low in the background. Try and just add stuff that sounds cool so the beat sounds full.

  • yayo thanks man appreciate the comment..ya seen ur vid so i appreciate the techy stuff advice foreal...i feel u...keep doin ur thang mang still

    yo 2:17 are "i cut my brain, raindrops of ink" :P

  • Nice beat. But as i said in the comment on your raindrops song, i can't say if it's good or bad, because i'm not listening to hip hop :P

  • nice man,but it would be nicer if you would master the track...anyway..keep the good work

  • true enough thanks for peepin it mang!!

  • like it, especialy the pads u used and the flows cool as well, thx 4 ur comment, greetz from germany

  • THANKS!!!!!

    for commenting and checkin it out!

    appreciate that mang

  • ayoo thx for the comment

    this is a hot track ...i like it

    do you use fl??

  • respects mang...

    ...yup

    i c u too mang keep doin ur thang

  • nice track 5* from me bro

  • WORDUP mangggggg what up! thanks yo!

  • is tight but its a lil choppy (speaking of the chorus part) listen 2 sum of my beats

  • respects mang yayo i seent a couple pretty nice stuff u got goin there mangggg

  • thanks mang im blushin :p really tho appreciate that yo really really really tho!!!!!

    peaceeeeeee

  • I really like the beat. Is that like a choir in the background or is it a pad?

  • chorus? choir.

    thanks man and thanks for listenin

  • sick beat and lyrics

  • thanks lbp appreciate that

  • sound good...but i wouldn't say pro

  • i like it . beat is on some chill shxt. you made it?

  • yayo i did...thanks mang for listening and shit sho nuffff

    peaceeeeeeeee

  • nice

  • Give weezy his flow back. :)

    You need to work on your delivery and your audio mixing skills. You might also need a better mic. Put some swagger on ya, if you rappin, you gotta think you're the shit, and believe it. That's what makes everyone else believe it.

  • not bad this is crazy man but i think the beat need mor melodies but nice rap keep it up

  • respects on peepin the lyrics mang...appreciate that and the comment too mang peaceeee

  • nice kick like it two thumbs up

  • thanks man appreciate the feedback and positive comment

  • Like it! Very "ghost" like melody.

  • nuff respect mang appreciate that

  • Yo this shits dope! and good lyrics keep doing it. expecting more =]

  • thanks man thanks for listening mang...u coooouldddd sub if u wanted :P

    thanks again yo

  • good shit keep it up my dude

  • thanks man appreciate that

  • nice wit the lyrics....but ur beats seem 2 plain..... 4/5.....yo best song so far

  • thanks mang respect yo opinion

  • nice job fam. If me and my girl ever hit up the dot, I'll have to get at you in the studio, see what we could create

  • seeennnnnn mang holla at meeeeee...urs could meet mine :P

  • nice dude : )

  • respect manggggggg

  • Nice! I like it :-)

  • thanks yo!

  • yeah man this is good bro;) i like it

  • thanks man appreciate that

  • Nice yo nice lyrics n flow mayne keep it up. cant wait till we getta collab man da sauga boiis

  • nuff respects mang yo u know thats fo sho...i c u young k i c ya mang...SAUGASHIT!!!!

  • NOT BAD THERE U GO!!!

  • thank ya thank ya

  • yesss... 5/5

  • respects mang :D

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