Justin my bro this song is cool! It has that great 60's pop feel,it reminded me of the Monkees,the album Aquarious Capricorn and Jones when they started to expand a bit. This could be a hit song,it has that sound! I love the chords,the way you're playing them,love that part where the chords go down in steps. Very catchy, I love the cool interesting lyrics too. You sing great my buddy! Are those your kids? They are so adorable and precious! Awesome song vid! :)) Big thimbs up!
This is one of your originals I like the most! love the way acoustic sounds, the chords and the back voice,even the chorus reminds me a little AMERICA...
Love the tuning on the guitar as well as the performance, nice ascending runs. Also great lyrical content. killer harmonics towards the end as well. hmmmm tuned to an open chord? barring the bottom three strings? Keep it up!
@skyhost Sorry for taking so long to respond, you are correct that it is open and that the high strings are open. The only thing you were (slightly) off on is which strings are fretted. It is the 6th, 4th and 3rd. ;-)
Im not goiong to repeat what everyone esle already has, Im just gonna say, way kewl. and might I add that I also would like to repeat what everyone else has said.lol
Love the chords and the lyrics in this tune, great melody and a awesome hook.
Justin, this video is so precious not only because of it's originality but also for the lovely family photos that accompanies this video. you have a beautiful family. thank you so much for the response. will be featuring it soon.
Wonderful song Justin and I believe it's OK to borrow lines, especially from children books. Thanks for sharing your wonderful world with us - I can see you're very blessed as well. Wishing you and family much peace and happiness in the years to follow. Thanks for being an inspiration and always sharing good words, they truly mean a great deal to me. Mark
Cool song. Can't beat a guy who loves his family. I was surfing away and I came upon this. Nice feel good vid. Subbing! Checking out your other stuff too. Andy
Loved this, and the lyrics,..the kind every songwriter wishes they could,.........:-) I been there--the apple orchard moments are so golden and time passes so quickly...my little handfuls now towering above me...they were in my arms, only yesterday....the cruel side of life, we cannot slow it down......precious songs, precious pics, precious family......Laurie
I adore this Justin, I adore your beautiful family too...and I see that my previous comment is gone :-( Love your vocal harmonies and the rhythm of the guitar...Very catchy...Really dig the fingerstyle part at 2:36...
Listened to several of your tunes this a.m. including The Note, Hurt, Ordinary Life, trying to channel some inspiration. Your prolific output is astounding! Thanks again for commenting on my 1st original. Just put up my 1st original with lyrics and even though I may never have the quantity or quality of your output you are an inspiration. Thanks, Josh
Got a really epic feel to this tune- like the way it crescendoes towards the end of phrases... the break down then straight back in is great! 5 stars!
You are quite an awesome fellow, Justin. A great artist and great role model to boot. Now don't come back on me now, just go with it...haha. I love this song, sincerely. -Ron
very nice! liked the harmonies a lot in this one. 2:30 - 2:50 was a great little break (that I had to repeat about 5 or 6 times!) :D great photos as well!
Hallo Justin, I am just listening to your song for the second time. I love it very much. And I love the pictures you used for the vid. You have a very nice family. You are one of my favorite songwriters. Friendly greetings!
Wow! . .what a morning! I've just listened to a brilliant track by rhopen, and the next one I come to is a brilliant track by Justin! I got shades of CS&N on the double upstroke of the guitar - don't know the other references. hehe :p Super song, mate! 5*****
GREAT Tune Justin!! You have a lovely family:) jackie
karaokewoman4life 1 year ago
Justin my bro this song is cool! It has that great 60's pop feel,it reminded me of the Monkees,the album Aquarious Capricorn and Jones when they started to expand a bit. This could be a hit song,it has that sound! I love the chords,the way you're playing them,love that part where the chords go down in steps. Very catchy, I love the cool interesting lyrics too. You sing great my buddy! Are those your kids? They are so adorable and precious! Awesome song vid! :)) Big thimbs up!
cbrb40 1 year ago
Justin! Love the chord progression is this one :) looking at your uploads, i've got some catching up to do! Thumbs up!
wongowonga 1 year ago
This is such a great song. One of my favs.
TheMourningKitchen 1 year ago
@TheMourningKitchen Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it, seeing as your songwriting is certainly some of the best on youtube.
Oswlek 1 year ago
This is one of your originals I like the most! love the way acoustic sounds, the chords and the back voice,even the chorus reminds me a little AMERICA...
RCROSSH 1 year ago
Love your singing for a start Justin. Love your music and lyrics to add to it. I'll be back for more for sure :o)
jabbamp 2 years ago
Nice song...great pictures...hope you get the life line
CharmedQuarkZ99 2 years ago
Very cute and adorable video!!! Excellent song!! Great Tune and wonderful Vocals and Lyrics!! 1000 stars!!
Hollie
Hollistergirl0731 2 years ago
ohww^^so nice pictures^^and this song is wonderful^^i feel my family in my heart^^
big 5*****5 stars for the wonderful sweety family
horizont20001 2 years ago
Love the tuning on the guitar as well as the performance, nice ascending runs. Also great lyrical content. killer harmonics towards the end as well. hmmmm tuned to an open chord? barring the bottom three strings? Keep it up!
skyhost 2 years ago
@skyhost Sorry for taking so long to respond, you are correct that it is open and that the high strings are open. The only thing you were (slightly) off on is which strings are fretted. It is the 6th, 4th and 3rd. ;-)
Oswlek 1 year ago
Very beautiful performance to go along with the beautiful pictures. Thank you for throwing us this lifeline! Many stars for this music.
ImOfTheWoods 2 years ago
Im not goiong to repeat what everyone esle already has, Im just gonna say, way kewl. and might I add that I also would like to repeat what everyone else has said.lol
Love the chords and the lyrics in this tune, great melody and a awesome hook.
AcousticPhases 2 years ago
Justin, this video is so precious not only because of it's originality but also for the lovely family photos that accompanies this video. you have a beautiful family. thank you so much for the response. will be featuring it soon.
endless starz
mommarox2 2 years ago
Justin...this one really hit me. Beautiful photos...Beautiful Faces
Hope You get Your LifeLine too.
2:26 -just melts
1:17, 3:10 -Great pictures!
reliablebow 2 years ago
I really like this alternative sounding chord progressions and your harmony singing is brilliant! excellent songwriting, Justin!
zappatero7 2 years ago
Very very good. (5*) Sherry
Thanks to Maysey1 for the share..
sherrywine1941 2 years ago
Wonderful song Justin and I believe it's OK to borrow lines, especially from children books. Thanks for sharing your wonderful world with us - I can see you're very blessed as well. Wishing you and family much peace and happiness in the years to follow. Thanks for being an inspiration and always sharing good words, they truly mean a great deal to me. Mark
Maysey1 2 years ago
wow such a great song....beautiful words, great singing and great playing....but I have to give the final kudos to the pics....really super job!!!
guitarrx3girl 2 years ago
So far, this is my favorite song. Great pictures!! I can't wait to watch your other videos. Scott
OuelletteGTR 2 years ago
Cool song. Can't beat a guy who loves his family. I was surfing away and I came upon this. Nice feel good vid. Subbing! Checking out your other stuff too. Andy
Toracube 2 years ago
Loved this, and the lyrics,..the kind every songwriter wishes they could,.........:-) I been there--the apple orchard moments are so golden and time passes so quickly...my little handfuls now towering above me...they were in my arms, only yesterday....the cruel side of life, we cannot slow it down......precious songs, precious pics, precious family......Laurie
cinderellalifestyle 2 years ago
apple orchard moments...precious indeed:)
reliablebow 2 years ago
Awesome Justin! Great stuff!
Bass734 2 years ago
Great original! Loved the changes in the guitar.. harms...all around composition...just wonderful!! Nice family pic''s for the vid too! *****
Cameragirl803 2 years ago
Justin this is brilliant.. I relaly enjoyed and the video is great ! 5*
ronb15 2 years ago
liked your song and the video of your family.
emilyharder 2 years ago
I like your harmonies Justin.
5 stars
LouiseGloor 2 years ago
yap, you were right, this one was brilliant too!
i enjoyed this "other side of you" a lot and will nox subscribe on you^^
SaboraMaira92 2 years ago
good song sir well put together - nice melody
dnarbbrand 2 years ago
Wow Justin. Very Inspired. Love the video... Photos make me smile. :) [Your voice sounds exceptionally good]
MsEllieJ 2 years ago
This is Fantastic work Justin. Did you know that Roger Miller recorded a song by the same title back in the 60s ?
doctorcastille 2 years ago
Absolutey brilliant Justin...heart wrenching...bittersweet tune...All the star thingys...awesome tune....
fingercheese 2 years ago
Great posting 5*****
Claude
6K6R 2 years ago
great one! thx
andrewjon 2 years ago
I adore this Justin, I adore your beautiful family too...and I see that my previous comment is gone :-( Love your vocal harmonies and the rhythm of the guitar...Very catchy...Really dig the fingerstyle part at 2:36...
LadyWeaver 2 years ago
great song... 5+ stars
cheers for sharing...
Sasha
48track 2 years ago
Love this song Justin..your lyrics are awesome my friend
Rocket
Ottawarocket 2 years ago
Great video! I love it!
This is just incredible!
Endless stars!
Bear
austinsplace1 2 years ago
Cool man! Great pics. There's no shortage of fun round yours, by the looks of it. Take care. Jock
anonplace 2 years ago
love the harmonics here in the break man! another song from the heart, and ur inspiration is adorable....peace
captxxchaos 2 years ago
That's splendid.
marcoacca 2 years ago
Listened to several of your tunes this a.m. including The Note, Hurt, Ordinary Life, trying to channel some inspiration. Your prolific output is astounding! Thanks again for commenting on my 1st original. Just put up my 1st original with lyrics and even though I may never have the quantity or quality of your output you are an inspiration. Thanks, Josh
shroomage34 2 years ago
I didn't even read the disclaimer. the song is good. I like it. it made me feel good, nice chord changes and unique lyrics. That's all I need to know.
No need to explain what you thought you borrowed from. Lennon borrowed, we all borrow. There's only one song, everything else is just a re-write.
Really nice harmonies and strumming too Justin. And Lennon would have liked the song as well if just for the number reference. well done.
And great pics. a home run.
Paul
BradfordandLasso 2 years ago
Very nice, pretty, Your children must be very proud of you!
I will give it five!
billysnoid 2 years ago
Hi Oswlek, you are truly a blessed man!
5 stars
vernonore 2 years ago
Great song 5****...Mel
amazongift 2 years ago
Very nicely done. ~ Raz
mishrathium 2 years ago
Got a really epic feel to this tune- like the way it crescendoes towards the end of phrases... the break down then straight back in is great! 5 stars!
ChapmanLewis 2 years ago
Thanks for a incipient look into your world Justin , to have such a gift must make your heart gambol sometimes . Fav 5/5
BeautifulGirlByDana 2 years ago
Excellent! Your music is great.
busywave 2 years ago
You are quite an awesome fellow, Justin. A great artist and great role model to boot. Now don't come back on me now, just go with it...haha. I love this song, sincerely. -Ron
rhopen 2 years ago
Beautiful video ! Great sound. winston
plowboyes 2 years ago
Excellent!! I love the song and lovely pics!
BigLoveZone 2 years ago
sweet tune and video!
chickiesgrettagirl 2 years ago
Beautiful tune and beautiful family you got as well,im sure that your son loved it bro,well done,5 stars !
Demoman1980 2 years ago
Great commercial potential Just, love the beat, melody, chord progression, harmony, words, I also see some influences here, crosby,stills Nash, 70´s
Really good Justin
Rick
bios36 2 years ago
nice sound!
CynthiaRutjens 2 years ago
I know you want more criticism, i know you like details, but all I have to say is beautiful.
mytosis33 2 years ago
Not only do you create wonderful songs Justin but a wonderful family.
withnailus 2 years ago
very nice! liked the harmonies a lot in this one. 2:30 - 2:50 was a great little break (that I had to repeat about 5 or 6 times!) :D great photos as well!
timelapse19 2 years ago
very nice great way to wake up in the morning
depfox 2 years ago
Nice work Justin, Loved it!, I can see what stufish4040 meant with the comparison to CS&N, 5 stars and faved. Was a pleasure to listen to. Cheers Ash
BruisedArcade09 2 years ago
Very cute video and great music! 5*s
BluegrassForte 2 years ago
wow that was so lovely 5000******* xxxxx ive just put a new one on two xxxx
BecciBarham1993 2 years ago
Hallo Justin, I am just listening to your song for the second time. I love it very much. And I love the pictures you used for the vid. You have a very nice family. You are one of my favorite songwriters. Friendly greetings!
Anette
TanteA 2 years ago
i'm in love with the picture at 0:30. <33
another great tune, and a beautiful family.
healthyaddixion 2 years ago
great sound and song.
RobJamesPaynter 2 years ago
Wow! . .what a morning! I've just listened to a brilliant track by rhopen, and the next one I come to is a brilliant track by Justin! I got shades of CS&N on the double upstroke of the guitar - don't know the other references. hehe :p Super song, mate! 5*****
stufish4040 2 years ago
This is my favourite one that I ve heard you do . Love the lyrics and the arrangement is first class. loved the little break at 2:40. Bravo Bravo
davemorag1 2 years ago