I just did this play literally five days ago. My Mark was better. The pacing here is a bit fast. You have to consider comedic timing. And we kept the explicit language, my professor allows us dramatic licenses when we direct. Good effort though .
i love this show! i was Al in it last year at my school... I really like this vid cuz Al is a girl in this, also. :) Great times working on this show!
I'm not gonna say anything about them performing bad because i know how much work it takes to put on a show..even if it is 10 minutes.
But one bit of advice....
don't play the character. BE the CHARACTER. At points it seemed like they weren't listening to eachother, they were just waiting for their lines. LISTEN to EVERYTHING that the person says....your lines will come quicker and be more real. BUT great energy and timing. BRAVO!
The acting could be better. The lines could be more clear and articulate. I don't have much appreciation for Al being a woman; it simply demotes the character in my opinion.
i'm sorry, but Al was intended to be a man and it just doesnt work if he's a woman. for instance, the lines that Al delivers to the waitress are almost innuendos. talk about awkward!
so true... but try doing this play when al is a guy and so is the waitress or should i say waiter... lmao AWKWARD!!! lmao but funny act i really liked it...
I'm the waitress in our school's version. We have a real cheesesteak, and I REALLY don't want to eat it. :P
fizzyclown 4 months ago
I just did this play literally five days ago. My Mark was better. The pacing here is a bit fast. You have to consider comedic timing. And we kept the explicit language, my professor allows us dramatic licenses when we direct. Good effort though .
jenghi21 9 months ago
Mark is horrible
cozmo931 1 year ago
NEEDS WORK ! ! !
paulsmithisms 2 years ago
What did you guys use for a cheesesteak? Im directing this show and im looking into making a prop food cheesesteak, but im not sure how.
GoldenSun8D 2 years ago
I just did this show and we just used a regular cheesesteak. It helps that I'm doing this show in Philly.
Calikola 2 years ago
I did this play in 8th grade, and we did SOO much better, im sad to say. Luv this play though!
ivorywall 2 years ago
im in advanced drama in my highschool and this needs alot more work its so bland
gregster186 3 years ago
the guy needs to articulate
castrocaligirl 3 years ago
i love this show! i was Al in it last year at my school... I really like this vid cuz Al is a girl in this, also. :) Great times working on this show!
AlmOst00AngEl 3 years ago
I'm about to direct this show.
I'm not gonna say anything about them performing bad because i know how much work it takes to put on a show..even if it is 10 minutes.
But one bit of advice....
don't play the character. BE the CHARACTER. At points it seemed like they weren't listening to eachother, they were just waiting for their lines. LISTEN to EVERYTHING that the person says....your lines will come quicker and be more real. BUT great energy and timing. BRAVO!
jimmyisforhaters 3 years ago
eh..its alright. a bit sketchy...
I can tell they are acting.....
they shouldnt act like the..they should BE the character lol
B0nDr3W 3 years ago
Great stuff. Let me know what you think of ours.
banzzahomes 4 years ago
wow insulting grade 11's trying their best. real big of you guys
boomshalkalaka 4 years ago
The acting could be better. The lines could be more clear and articulate. I don't have much appreciation for Al being a woman; it simply demotes the character in my opinion.
bickeringbishop 4 years ago
Eh...I don't know. Acting is a little short of mediocre.
rypavano 4 years ago
i'm sorry, but Al was intended to be a man and it just doesnt work if he's a woman. for instance, the lines that Al delivers to the waitress are almost innuendos. talk about awkward!
LiteraryLoser86 4 years ago
so true... but try doing this play when al is a guy and so is the waitress or should i say waiter... lmao AWKWARD!!! lmao but funny act i really liked it...
jaybaybayallday 2 years ago
wow that must've been.
with ours, we had the waitress almost fall in love with marcus when he said "screw you!" (having the opposite effect on her)
yeah, this was a great play to do. i highly enjoyed it
LiteraryLoser86 2 years ago
need some acting work here.
Yardbird977 4 years ago
I love it Nick man great job!
StevenPeters 5 years ago