A lot of my material ive wrote just comes from things i just see in every day life that makes me laugh then i put it on paper and exgerate it lol going to start performing soon just have to see how it goes, good luck to all aspiring comics!
Good point about foundation Chris. However just writing jokes does not require a strong emotional point of view or foundation. Coming up with a good personalized comedy routine does, however. I can write jokes all day about any given topic just by looking at the topic and challenging myself to write the jokes. How do you do that?
Being angry is an energizer, for me. It makes me try to find some humour in the situation. I try to find a weak link in whoever it is ticking me off. My age and gray hair is great camoflauge for the real me.
hey guys! Ive jus uploaded my video of my first stand up gig.. i would really appreciate it if u take a look at it and give me constructive comments. Thanks :)
I agree so much. I hate acts that consist of one guy saying a bunch of unrelated jokes in a monotone. And don't get me started on Dane Cook...generic piece of shit.
No, and you're right. I just don't like Dane Cook. And I guess I was just thinking of him and a few other comedians I just don't get when I made my first comment. It doesn't work for me but hey, if they get other people to laugh then there doing it right, I'm just not one of those people.
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A lot of my material ive wrote just comes from things i just see in every day life that makes me laugh then i put it on paper and exgerate it lol going to start performing soon just have to see how it goes, good luck to all aspiring comics!
BradleyComedy 1 month ago
@BradleyComedy Doing the same. Good luck to you as well, brother.
tatsujinMasurao 4 weeks ago
@BradleyComedy yea my first open mic will be on march 7th but we are the future of comedy
MikeWill2127 2 weeks ago
saw ppl that saw your page that'll see me say that i saw ppl that saw your page and wanted to say hi and wanted to say hi.
ghostrecon755 2 months ago
just don't pull a kramer and you'll be fine
Torontoraptures 2 months ago
Thanks.
94ejack 2 months ago
All my jokes are angry rants fueled by frustration.
Sabre809 2 months ago
Good stuff.
JakesHomeWorkouts 3 months ago
He has a good point, It really does help. It's good to see someone in expertvillage actually have knowledge of what they're talking about.
zacwashere2007 4 months ago
Good point about foundation Chris. However just writing jokes does not require a strong emotional point of view or foundation. Coming up with a good personalized comedy routine does, however. I can write jokes all day about any given topic just by looking at the topic and challenging myself to write the jokes. How do you do that?
StandUpComedyClinic 5 months ago
Oh man. I always felt there might have been a gap in some of my act. I'm writing this down for sure. lol
MrDodger5150 6 months ago
Saw your page and wanted to say hey!
naturesuphoria 6 months ago
Oh I love this. He just explained the 10 year foundation of material I've been building yet never performed as stand-up comedy. Fun.
TrumanTehSupraTiger 6 months ago
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WHAT IS YOUR POINT OF VIEW YOU DUMB FUCK!
alecchambers12 7 months ago
@trakomako try weed and a six hour shot! works for me! :)
Alihisss666 7 months ago
@Trakomako u could become a comedy writer u can use your material and sell it to other comics just an idea
Koolnamesaretaken 7 months ago
Tash: I never really get American stand up, though, I really only laugh at British comics.
TashAndRosie 8 months ago
Thumbs up if you plan to do Stan up comedy.
Alexgt20 8 months ago 8
umad?
TheAceofNate 9 months ago
not helping
TheAwsomeniss2 9 months ago
You know weed helps too =D
2Way2Close 9 months ago
@2Way2Close amen
YoungBelushi 1 week ago
I write it cause it's funny
jthen75 10 months ago
aha its true, chris tucker always started his sets with "im pissed off"
vict0r1ous 11 months ago 2
wow..how short, simple, and profound.!!!!!
trufiend138 1 year ago
0:12-0:14! (clap)(clap)
crunkerrrday 1 year ago
I want whatever this guy us smoking :p
sonnyd124 1 year ago
Very good advice
TheSvartdemon 1 year ago
Jerry Seinfeld mastered the point of view of confusion.... Eg. "What is the deal with ______"
IH8WRONGPPL 1 year ago
@IH8WRONGPPL Is it a pea or is it a nut...
WHAT IS THE DEAL
jckracing2 1 year ago
Being angry is an energizer, for me. It makes me try to find some humour in the situation. I try to find a weak link in whoever it is ticking me off. My age and gray hair is great camoflauge for the real me.
Anon5K 1 year ago
what about current events comedy were someone does something stupid and you revolve around that?
xist522 1 year ago
well i am frustrated comedian ...
geoffdoor 1 year ago
thank you murphy
lookitspejay 1 year ago
hey guys! Ive jus uploaded my video of my first stand up gig.. i would really appreciate it if u take a look at it and give me constructive comments. Thanks :)
filmgeek22 1 year ago
good video SuperShortAndSwee this is my youtube one check it out and i will be making a stand up soon
SuperShortAndSweet 2 years ago
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Whats Brown and hides in the Attic?
The Diarrhoea of Anne Franks
GamerGod7 2 years ago
I like it.
Archiewhynot 2 years ago
Jimmy Carr style. Pretty good if delivered deadpan
octavian2006 2 years ago
ha! lol! i'll share that
actionstingray 2 years ago
@GamerGod7 lol
if your going for live comedy acts, dont say that one if your being recorded or are alot of jewish people in the audience
mysticdarkrai135 1 year ago
if you're new to standup - check out coffeeandshowbiz-dotcom
beckydonohue 2 years ago
basicly what he's saying is that there has to be emotion in the joke
coyle09 2 years ago
Thank youuu My friend liam lane is going on britans got talent and he is doing stand up comedy. i will give these tips to him :D 5* and sub
CodeeLyoko 2 years ago
yeah this makes sense
superhapppyvision 2 years ago
are you fusterated =p
elgrath1 2 years ago 34
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You have to a stwong point of view.
SolomonKull 9 months ago
Holy shit! IM ACTUALLY ROFLING AFTER THAT CHRIS!!! UR SOOO FUCKING FUUNNNYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
rarnd 2 years ago
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GeneLightt 2 years ago
Larry King is so old his Birth certificat expired.
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A tie is what I like to call a dessperat attempt to look profecionall.
ToonBlaster86 2 years ago
Check out mine:
I'm not sayin Susan Boyle is ugly, but when I showed her a photo of my pet pitbull she said, "What? Where'd u find a picture of me as a baby?"
Is that funny?
Freedrzl 2 years ago
keep em coming
v funny
SaintCammy4444 2 years ago
fail
MyOwnPublicRhode 2 years ago
That was hell funny.
zyxon 2 years ago
no really no
JERRYATRIX2 2 years ago
I agree so much. I hate acts that consist of one guy saying a bunch of unrelated jokes in a monotone. And don't get me started on Dane Cook...generic piece of shit.
ATHODrew 3 years ago
I disagree with everything except the last sentence.
zyxon 2 years ago
i would punch you in the face for being so ignorant, but i dont need the aids
osmiumdogg 2 years ago
Lol, great comeback.
rarnd 2 years ago
Dane Cook can suck an asshole!
GeneLightt 2 years ago
thats an insult to an asshole! cook had a commedy tour right? who was spossed to do the commedy? cuz watever it is he does , it isnt that.
adzug 2 years ago
I have to agree with you. Dane Cook isn't funny. He does have charisma but that is not what I'm want to see. I want to laugh.
dormanbenton 2 years ago
Is this a direct attack on Steven Wright? There is room for various styles of stand-up. Not everyone has to be a story teller type comic.
madmartigan21 2 years ago
No, and you're right. I just don't like Dane Cook. And I guess I was just thinking of him and a few other comedians I just don't get when I made my first comment. It doesn't work for me but hey, if they get other people to laugh then there doing it right, I'm just not one of those people.
ATHODrew 2 years ago
good advice
thomasbannon 3 years ago 17
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haha... search for "how to write a standup comedy show day 3"
MBarford01 3 years ago
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Not bad, but if anyone really wants to see how to write a stand up comedy show, click on my channel. We are currently running the first 4 episodes in a 8 part series which is informative, concise, and precise, and has a laugh or two along the way. Or YouTube search HOW TO WRITE A STAND UP COMEDY SHOW. You'll be glad you did.
CapitalLaugh 3 years ago