HARDCORE/METALCORE SONG I WROTE

[SGFedex]

TABS PLEASE!!!

[nbadjamesus]

This has 130,000 views. You don't have links to your band anywhere! This video was how I found out about ETC, and I've been following you since. Not everyone is a lurker like me. I heard this and had to find out what band you was in. Needs Heartist links everywhere.

[Kadaj86x]

Really really nice man!!! i love it!! specialy the gallop patterns

[miro2639]

Hey, are you from Holly Go Lightly?

[jinsol1205]

Cool! Like it!

[dyeguy5647]

This is great!

[maestrostring00]

not too bad for the style, it feels kinda good to know that other people besides me write stuff more than just Gmaj chords n shit w/ the same cliche arpeggios n etc

[DaBFalcon]

respect! All u need is a sick vocalist.

[ASMAattack7]

hey! can you please message me the tabs!

[Flopcore]

What program did you use to make the drums?

[SmolderingUnderdog]

Keep doing what you do, you cool for trying to hurt someone's feelings on the Internet.

[TheGreatVitopius]

fucking. bad. ass.

Write lyrics to this shit man. I'll scream to this all day long.LOL

[deanxleong]

How do you make songs? O_o this is crazy good. ._.

[xdrumnut1]

awesome job!!! i love the breakdown alot!!!!!

[CarDrift09]

nice boy , very nice

[ThePlotofRomans]

That was sick dude.

[ChromeCelica00]

1:50 88 people weren't ready.

[emoornot4]

@ChromeCelica00 HAHAHA FUCK YEA EPIC!!! :)



[rob1brown2]

bad ass motha fucka! :) lol

[Trufflesama]

Sick breakdown!;)

[metalbynumber]

I remember watching this when it first came out! Looks like alot of fun! Makes me want to punch babies in the face!

[101preciouse]

really good!!!!! :D

[Blasianpower2]

haha i really wanna scream to this .;c are you recording from your computer or what?

[emoornot4]

@Blasianpower2 yea man straight from my commpputterrrrrrr

[xFuN17]

awesome riff

[ambereyesx570x]

this video and these comments just prove my whole view of new music. People do not know shit about good music. This song is generic as fuck. when is there going to be good music again??? NEVER

[GartmanTheSlayer]

@ambereyesx570x Good music isnt the same as original music fag. Good music is something you enjoy listening to, not what you consider is the "right" music to listen to.

[ambereyesx570x]

dude you are a homo hardcore is terrible. learn some real metal you noob

[WoeAttackOfTheMice]

@ambereyesx570x Music is an opinion. Dumbass punk. You wouldn't say that in my face.

[GGuitar45]

@WoeAttackOfTheMice Well it's definatly not about calling people dumbass fags.

[WoeAttackOfTheMice]

@GGuitar45 Dumbass punk* ? And actually, it can be. So.... yikes... this is awkward.... 

[GGuitar45]

@WoeAttackOfTheMice No, Music is about playin what you belive. Attacking people with names has no meaning. People who actually understand music would know that. They also say what they think face to face, not over the internet.

[WoeAttackOfTheMice]

@GGuitar45 Wrong, Music can be malicious. Dude, you have no idea. I would definitely tell you this straight to your face if I had the chance. I don't even feel like explaining this to you anymore.

[GGuitar45]

@WoeAttackOfTheMice Really? Cause I could rant for hours about music, cause i know the real meaning of it. Every body likes different music, but thats not even what it's about. It's about relataing to it or havving a connection. Music is who you really are, not just a past time. So like i said if your making fun of some one cause the likes or doesn't like a type of music, then you are just makeing fun of you're self and music in all. Maybe you should sit down and think about this before judging.

[WoeAttackOfTheMice]

@GGuitar45 That is exactly what I'm saying!!! Dude, you have me all misconstrued. I called the other guy a punk for judge this guy harshly.

[GGuitar45]

@WoeAttackOfTheMice oh, well sorry man, i just gett really into music sometimes. My apoligies

[tredlanosnibor]

@GGuitar45 Oh. I thought music was for people to interpret it however they want.

[GGuitar45]

@tredlanosnibor Thats what i said

[MrGustl1992]

wow really good!

[emoornot4]

@MrGustl1992 thanks dude

[Solismg03]

This has been done like a million times before. Do something original

[emoornot4]

@Solismg03 this was also written years ago when it was original.

[MessiahToNoFaithBand]

@emoornot4 This shit was being written way before this video.

[SierjKhaletski]

well done!!! the first breakdown really is cool!

[FantasssyKidd1]

DUDE YOU'RE FUCKING GOOD!

[FlyingVshredz]

I was gonna say this is the most unoriginal thing I've heard. Than i realized you posted it four years ago, So i'll give you a break.

[jakeochoa16]

I would buy this on iTunes :D

[bodhi2683]

excellent song. now u just need some words to go over them chords.

[MrDougIsHere]

siic

[highvoltagestudios]

dissonant as hell.... i like it

[joshhardy1]

wow go famous with that one

[GaboRK666]

Yeah... the first Breakdown is cool ;)

Look for u!

[SwirlyBrokenHearts]

this is exactly the kind of thing id write for an 8 string guitar, id play it lower xD

[TheCristiannnnn]

what tunning are u in

[PopPrincesses]

This sounds awesome. :D Would you have added vocals to this track? This was a long time ago though wasn't it. XD

[4muldowneys]

metal suckssssssssssssssssssss. but you are a good musician. try jazz or classical, or something good.

[MetalliCxZero]

@4muldowneys the retardeness caught me off guard

[slipknot3807]

this is great its well put together good job man keep rockin \\m//

[emoornot4]

@Thringer09 yesss! completely.

[Thringer09]

@emoornot4 What program are using? Is it hard to use?

[ATOMIKMASSdrummer]

sounds amazing dood

[fshn4jc]

Gemini?

[63skateman]

hey dude nice song can ya send me the tabs ?

[MrNickchick]

dude, ur pretty pro

[emoornot4]

@MrNickchick thanks so much!

[BreathingWhileBuried]

Ah you're from the band,well were (:

But still I find it strange ... in the description it says you wrote the song the other day but the demo of the song is recorded in 2006 while this vid was posted in 2007 ?

[THEprojectMIKE]

Gemeni!!!!!! Why didnt you guys keep this song when you were a band?

And Jonathan, please tell me you are going to someday soon start another heavy band.

[BreathingWhileBuried]

dude

Isn't that from End The Century

The song Gemini has some of the exact some riffs that you use ...

[scorpionv666]

Awesome dude! I want to be your bassist :P

[jedimastergarcia87]

Nice playing dude. And nice Schecter guitar too. I got me a Damien 6 FR. I liked the ending solo. It was kinda creepy but cool sounding. :3 This is probably the best hardcore/metalcore song I've seen so far. You gonna make or join a band? I'm trying to get the hang of hardcore/metalcore music, its hard. x.x

[baseballpguitar]

sick breakdowns man

[virginiatechfanx]

i have already heard that before stealer of music HEAVY METAL IS GAY!

[InstrumentalsDE]

This is great, I wish I could play that well.

[uhmMichaela]

i like it , and your cute ;3

[JORDANROUBIQUE]

you bro if you move to southeast texas theres a band waiting for you. =) and believe me, the drummer, (me) is just as good as chaserrr and i write my own parts lol.

[whittyful]

nice man

[deathwatcher221]

great job dude keep up the good work

[emoornot4]

@regectedfilms hahaha thats probably how you found me ;)

[rawrily101020]

hey omg ur so good ilyy!!! and ur hot sub bakplease!!

[emoornot4]

@rawrily101020 Thank you so much!!! =]  Appreciate it!

[batsy526]

dude why are you so fuckin amazing



[emoornot4]

@batsy526 This is old I wish someone would buy me a new webcam so I could start making videos again! :(

[djjorreborable]

@emoornot4 i'll buy you a new one dude! i want more of that! eventhough i live in belgium i'll send one ! ur great greetz from belgium

[giants4635]

Great job! Always good to see people being creative with new music. Let me know what you think of my originals as well as they are all for charity and all proceeds will be helping with the Gulf crisis through United Way.

[IHateGays6]

breakdowns were sick

[watchuwant1]

in 1 word: sick

5/5

subscribed, i havent even looked at ur other vids yet

[emoornot4]

@watchuwant1 haha thanks so much man! Im looking to getting a new cam so i can record some new videos! :)

[leightonransome]

nice

[ausguitarist]

dude that opening breakcore part is fuckn brutal. nice work

[diegociposur]

In that this final touch it????

[MrScruffyHamster]

cool song. Interesting hat.

[MultiMonkeyStudios]

Thats beast you should make an album

[DBL19]

its sick mate

[kingofterrors0]

its pretty good man, i wouldn't call it hardcore but still really good, i just gotta ask why aren't you playing leads?

ah yeah and that you should probably take the second breakdown out, i at 1:55 it completely ruins the momentum of your song, just an opinion though. anyway keep rocking!

[luckypoofballl]

to bad no more end the century. i thought for sure they were getting signed

[vinsane94]

cool song man, writing isnt easy. i just put a song up too its so weird lol. did u record the drums and other parts yourself or u just play guitar?

[CageKiller1]

Nice song man. i like it

[atreyu921]

i like it man, good use of slow rythym sections followed by faster tempo ones. i was feeling the rythym guitar roles a lot-what do you use for the drums backround?

[emoornot4]

@leg0man2 HELL YEA DO IT MAN!!!!

[emoornot4]

@sprousebrosfan27 Thanks man!

[activetwinsandund4d]

what tuning is it bro nice vid kinda laggy but good im writing a song 2 its really sick

[Hudzan]

You're looking @ the wrong direction , we're over here LOL

[jorddaaaannnnnnn]

i made lyrics to this aha ;D

fucking talent bro,

[Cavalry678]

thats sick, what tuning is that? x

[emoornot4]

@Cavalry678 D!!! HAHAHA

[Emil5life5life]

FUcking noob

[jkennedy1007]

dope

[Heckno4923]

u should send me the tabs for this man if u could id appreciate it

[jwshields76]

yeah the songs decent! but u got my grandma,s doily on your head lol

[phz123]

nice video dude.. you seem to know what you are doing.. i loved it... i also could imagine some vocals on top of that.. and that would make an awesome song.. keep up the good work :)

[emoornot4]

@phz123 Thanks man! all my newer stuff is way crazier and im looking to get a band together in cali, but i need some legity drummers !

[Jonnycis]

@emoornot4 hey dude I live in cali and i know a drummer thats pretty good and looking for the same stuff as you, get back to me if your interested thats shits hella good

[emoornot4]

@Jonnycis thanks man!

[shawnv898]

haha nice song buddy i wanna put some vocals into it good stuff!

[gioitti1]

dude you're totally in End The Century! :)

[emoornot4]

@gioitti1 used to be!

[fshn4jc]

 knew i recognized you! you were in end the century!

[emoornot4]

@fshn4jc yeah man! i was! =]

[mrunknown]

surprisingly i like this song its pretty decent. but i kinda felt like that breakdown shouldnt have been there like it was played too earlier but hey its ur song so theres no right or wrong other than that good job bro.

[whitewinterclothing1]

what did you use to write the drums and other guitar in this? like what program?

[MetalHybrid]

I can imagine screaming vocals on this or clean singing with harmonies. Good song buddy!!!

[loseurmind14]

Sounds like Chiodos. . . Needs to be a bit more brutal. What program do you use for this?

[Asmodai4]

I am a bit bored by metalcore so far but i must confess that this song is excelent becouse it has an individual and never heard sound. I really like it. Find a screamer a bassist and a drummer and record the song.

[emoornot4]

Thanks ream! I didnt think you were buddy! :) rock on

[emoornot4]

Cool edit pro with Line 6 Gear Box/Pod Farm

[Bertling88]

Dude this is great! Keep up the good work!

[emoornot4]

Thanks dude!

[Nazuros]

you got skills with a guitar but i dont think i would call this metal.. more emo

[MenOnBirthControl]

nice hat fag

[thettremelos]

Go eat a dick

[Heckno4923]

nice name homo

[MenOnBirthControl]

nice cap fag

[Heckno4923]

dude this was so intense! i could never write anythin like this!

[emoornot4]

Thanks man, this is def way older than all the new stuff I write though

[blawrence012]

good song writing.

[masarrasan12]

dude, dis shit is nice, dat breakdown was really mad .. love it bro

[L9323]

youre good better than these other kids who say "original" metalcore, now having said that, you have talent but breakdowns are overrated and i think you can be original just work your sound, u have something for sure.

[alabasterclam]

breakdowns are epic, and i can appreciate the other music, but a metalcore song just doesnt satisfy me without one, idk, thats just me. and jonathan writes BRUTAL ass breakdowns on top of writing beautiful music. just saying. breakdowns arent overated.

[CoryJacobs91]

0:49 to 1:00 SOOOO SICK

[sharkyandmywheel]

that was pretty damn cool man keep it up

[red77house]

Dude, Can i take this song for my band? :p

Pleaaaaaseeeeeeeeee! haha

[pidrgu]

yes but u gotta give credit if u play it live

[emoornot4]

HAHAHAHA not a good idea dude

[Cavalry678]

@red77house what the fuck? why would you ask that, you utter nob face. sick song make sure you keep it man! xx

[emoornot4]

Thanks so much! :) thats the first time I heard spanish march though! lol

[emoornot4]

You know me so well! :) I absolutely love lady gaga, I wish one day I could sing like Justin beiber, and maybe I am :/ hmm.. hahaha

[pingu0555]

fucking brillient!

[TheInfamousKyle]

This is just as gay as every other fagcore song I've ever heard, so as far as that goes, I guess you're doing just fine. And way to hit the same note over and over again.

[emoornot4]

lol.

[GibsonV421]

@rubenskates7 get a fuckin life at least this dude is doing something with his.

[emoornot4]

Thanks do0d =]

[GibsonV421]

@emoornot4

dont mention it man

keep rockin

[Arcand651]

haha nice chirp

[BVisionProductions]

Dude this is FUCKING AMAZING! Do you have a finished mp3 of this I could have for my ipod?

[emoornot4]

Actually I do have the mp3 buddy

[BVisionProductions]

Dude please hook it up!!

[DCSmith1989]

Dude... got tabs for this song?

[emoornot4]

No tabs yet budd but they shouldnt be to hard to learn by watching.

[DCSmith1989]

yeah... gotta listen to it like 500 times but i should get it lol

[ernieball3645]

Awesome song

[Peace4455]

killer.

[exsymphony]

the thing i dont like about these genres is that all the songs sound too alike. boring. only some r decent. i much prefer post hardcore/progrock/ mathcore. i mean seriously wen he said ready did that mean its the breakdown? then all he does is hit an open e....wow wat a breakdown.

[red77house]

@exsymphony Its dropped D noob.

[exsymphony]

either way bland breakdown noob.

[takarakamika]

@rubenskates7 im sure you are super gay, quit hatin on this dude

[forthewhitewalls]

i enjoy it. good job man

[PamelaBiotch]

Loved it. (:

[TMYvideos]

"WE, CAN'T RUN AWAY, THIS TIME!"

old school End the Century sonn

[otarujtox]

cool.  (Y)

[JORDANROUBIQUE]

JONATHAN! do me a favor please?! if you could some how work your majic and find a band or some musicians in south east texas that are looking for a drummer and hook me up?!

thankyou.

[002Underoath]

i play guitar and my friend plays drums, but we both moved to ohio, if you'd have ask sooner, i'd help ya out sorry

[JORDANROUBIQUE]

@002Underoath its fine bro. lol. i foun d some musicians through some of my friends that were already in a band.

also being a song writer i have to say very nice job. that was exelent and exceeded all expectiations i had uploading the video. only question is how u got the other tracks playing. is it you recorded on something or some computer generatied struff. keep it up wanna hear more frm u