Okay, so maybe you don't have a great future as a rap artist, but you have some fine lyrics there.
If you ever bump into Eminem in Sainsbury's or somewhere be sure to give him a copy. Even if he doesn't want to record it hopefully it will inspire him to do better & say more than he did in his dig a Bush ("Mosh" was it?)
Fuckin Cowardly Bastard..........
hazy5340 2 years ago
People in glass houses shouldn't throw stones.
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
nice video jack
and the last clip was that animal farm?
I've read the book from the clip i could tell that it was
nice words stick to your message
shinyears 2 years ago
yeh its from the animated film of animal farm, which ends differently to the book. lol
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
im sorry to say i agree everything here.
AidanTheSheepMaker 2 years ago
lol unlucky
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
Great words,powerful message the class war struggle goes on....Keep up the poetry man...Peace
Coirpeach 2 years ago 2
thanks very much
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
Five stars lad! good critic & creativity !
preacain 2 years ago
that was neat man,
turnleftsmashright88 2 years ago
Okay, so maybe you don't have a great future as a rap artist, but you have some fine lyrics there.
If you ever bump into Eminem in Sainsbury's or somewhere be sure to give him a copy. Even if he doesn't want to record it hopefully it will inspire him to do better & say more than he did in his dig a Bush ("Mosh" was it?)
Nice one Jack!!
GanjaStuPipesUp 2 years ago
You wrote this? It's very good. I'm impressed.
Gingerblokey 2 years ago
lol you sound surprised! cheers for bothering to watch, you must be my... sixth view lol
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
thats some good acapella maybe next time you sohuld feature lyrical ledgend muney munro! :P like it jack well done
rothyboi 2 years ago
:L:L:L yeh but u were in a mood with me when i made this
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
Five stars lad! good critic & creativity !
preacain 2 years ago
Good work Jack.
I like it a lot. 5*
TheObsidianSnake 2 years ago
cheers dean, wasn't sure whether or not to upload it, but of the few views it s received so far people have been very nice about it.
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
I like it!
sherriffnitwit 2 years ago
lol cheers sheriff, haven't heard from you in a while, how you doin'?
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
Good thanks
Very busy so not on as much as before.
All the best
sherriffnitwit 2 years ago
lyrical content and the messages is great, you just need to work on delivery and that comes with practice - Good stuff friend!
MrPragmatism 2 years ago
lol thank you
JackBrindelli 2 years ago
Good video. 5 stars.
overmind25 2 years ago
lol cheers
JackBrindelli 2 years ago