Salvation - prologue.

[lovedrunkx33]

I love history, so I have a feeling I will really love this xD

[famousgirll77]

this is really awesome i like it so far!!!!=]

lol

[MegaDisneyvideos]

I just looked back and noticed how long Hope was! haha anyways Hope doesnt have anything to do with this so Im gonna talk about this. I think this is very inspiring your my favorite writer on youtube and you inspire me to write. So far Im writing three stories at the same time! thanks so much for always making me feel happy =)

[trippskeee]

Soooo weirddd, I know an Alex Jones, in real life. o.o x]

[holly96er]

i love it ur a great writer!!! i truly do love this story love it... (make it Telena) :)

[TheUltimateReader]

Ohmygawd, I friggen' love this. ;O

[HorseriderHP14]

This looks really good!! Cant wait for more!! :DD

[xAshuleexLuvzxNickyx]

wow this is AMAZING! :D

i love it (: Jelena :]

[morgiejonas]

I had two ideas for a story but its not like anyone will read it it will just have 14 views which makes me irritated because I Work hard I Wonder how you get so many views and comments anyways this is really great I can't wait to read more!

[swirlygirly411]

aaw shoots, i loved gravity :( but thats okay, whatever floats your boat :)

[MrPrezRocks]

it's different...good different of course :) Loved it :D sadly...i didn't read Gravity....not that i didn't want to....i was just reading too much @ the moment, but i will surely continue this :)

[nesreencutie]

Love it :D

[OhHiThereJemi]

So, it's a Jelena? :)

[gomezandhudgens]

i already LOVE it. :]

[jonasandjonas]

Holy crap, I am in love with this.

[sunshinepartaaaay]

outstanding, absoutely brillant.

[kneykney11]

Interesting and mindblowing, like always.

It's not a typical plot. It's something different. :)

Amaaazing. :D

[ILoveNiley3]

wow! sounds amazing :)

[lisandra97]

I'm not imagining anybody while reading this.

Just Bree, and the people around her.

Not Selena, Miley, Taylor, Joe, etc. But watch

people are still going to complain about couples.

-.-

ANYWAY! THIS WAS GOOD! (: I can't wait to see

where you are going to go with this.

-.^ Where did you get your inspiration from? xD

[stashhjonas]

@lisandra97 The inspiration came from I don't even know. I just thought about Independence Day & how people live kept under tight control and I sort of used it in a fictional time period & stuff. :)

[lisandra97]

@stashhjonas Oh. (: That's really nice. :D

[HeyDudeex]

wow!

[xfallingdreams]

I dont like it...I love it <3

[xilovemusic13x]

amazing writing!

[101Skylight]

please......i'm dieing......i NEEED more...it was soo good

[steph4dougie1]

WOW it's amazing babes can't wait to read more :D

[joeandnickarehawt]

lovveee it!

[lindamas1]

amazing!!!

[NickJGirl474]

!! LOVE IT !!

[dreamerxnelena]

awesomeness! I love it sooooooooooooooooooooo much! xD

[Burbles101]

I already love this so much.

[timberwolf0083]

ahhhmazing.

[MissCutie0192]

Okay, So my friend said youu were a goood writer,

&& I just really checked this out, && It's ahuumazing.

[jonasbrothers2072]

it seems awesome. :D i love stories that are placed in the past. :D

[kayyxbabie7]

JELENA, WUT?

JOE SOUNDS SO BADASS.

ITS HOT AS HELL.

HOT AS FUCKING AFRICA.

LUKE IS HOT AS FUCKING AFRICA.

[Msalbel]

This looks amazing!

[mzzjudylee]

your writing is like so frikken fantastic. . .I think

I just might-might. . .-dies- xO

(:<

[abeautifulheart13]

very intresting..

[nickjerryjonasluvr11]

LOVE IT! So amazing great job!

[xxcupcakesweetiexx]

FREAKING AMAZING. I TOTALLY LOVE IT <3

Someone missed the Like button... poor unfortunate soul.

Good job, Stasia(:

[xoWorldOfChancesxo]

Aww I'm going to miss Gravity.It was one of my favorites <3

But this story makes up for it.I love it but i'm a little confused?

[ellaayyx3]

Loved it!

It's really interesting.

[sparkxofhope]

Like it? :O

Love it. Amazing so far.

You wonder what'll happen, who's the person...and well..yea. xD

[bigpurpledinosaurluv]

Your a great author . You should write a book ; Id buy it :)

[Manfeva]

I loved it :) Very interesting... It reminds me of the Holocaust.

[hottielahot]

this is awesome :D <3

[vampbuddies3]

omg amazing!

[xothebeliever]

i loveee. <3;

[texasbabe23able]

if this was a book i would so tottaly buy it awsome job =)

[tintan23]

why don't u apply for partner? I love your writing!

[tintan23]

cool story it sounds like a book i would buy at a book store

[ForeverxAlways101]

This was flawless & I love how you put this story up on Independence Day (;

I can picture everything perfectly, and it makes me feel dreary and sad that people had to live like this. You set the mood perfectly (:

[7894miley]

Oh emmm geee! This was fabulous. Flawless. Loved it! :) Please post soon!!

[SouthernGirl1092]

wow..!!

this is soo different from anything i've ever read.

i'm also, loving Joe's character Luke. I have a

thing for a bad boy Jonas =D

[xmileyxdelenaxful]

this is like really amazing!

[123lolaLOLAlola123]

like it? more like loved it!

i'm sad Gravity won't be written anymore,

but this story seems really cool, and the writing is flawless,

usual.

you are, by far, one of the best youtube writers, as well as one of my favorite five.

i hope you'll post again, soon!

:]

[lAlAlANDMACHiNE09]

wow, i was seriously holding my breathe during the scene with Luke

wat a bastard! lol

this is AMAZING. Ur stories are always so orignal and I admire you so much for that! Great job i cant wait for the next one

[CookieMonsterGir1000]

This sounds amazing!



[itsnelena]

aww i was really liking gravity :(