You need to enunciate a bit more, and make your flow sound natural. You're too concerned with being on beat, that your voice sounds stagnant. Try to loosen up a bit. You got the voice though man!
The beat is dope and your lyrics are sick u just need to work on your rhythm with the song cuz it's not flowing with the beat but shits still sick I'd buy it
you gotta work on your flow man. right now your flow is all over the place and you sound very uncomfortable riding the beat. you should write your lyrics to the beat and practice your verse a couple hundred times before putting it down. just some constructive criticism, i dont wanna give away who i am but you've reviewed some of my albums. stay up.
@WilsonBata Thanks. I definitely appreciate it. I need to fuck with the 2nd verse again. The first verse came out dope (I edited out a lot of shit). You are right though. Thank you. I appreciate it once again. BTW, I gotta find out who you are!
Dope shit my dude. Like someone else said try memorizing your shit before you start, not only does it sound better/more authentic but it just comes a lot easier.
And I'm glad I'm not the only one who laughs at myself when I fuck up tryin' to record.
I saw this the other day just never got around to commenting.I've never seen you smile this much ever so I can tell you had fun.That's the most important thing,as long as you enjoy what you do then half the battle is won.The music biz is cut throat,very dirty game.I wish you the best with ur budding rap career.I write (not that much anymore) rhymes and spit for fun but my thing is the production side of it.I can relate.Keep doin' you ! Peace.
u pretty good my dude but the flow on the first song (im writing this mid video) it feels as though u are trying to hard to make the flow ur rapping with work not hating just trying to give my pointers n opinions since u gave me urs wen i asked u a question on my music and i normally dont ask cuz iv been rappin for 10 years lol
youre a dope mc brutha, respect !!!!! shout out goes 2 u aswell.
if u want more beatz just holla at me but it probably could take a while until i can send you over some stuff because i got my own project in the making.
put down a ruff copy then listen to it for a couple weeks over and over till you have your shit down tight.By listening to it over and over you'll figure out alternate flows and schemes and you be able to go back in a spit that shit totally natural
@MisanthropikOne wats up man wanna say i respect your opinion on anything to do wit hip hop..u speak tha truth.. u no u should hav ur own show on tv dude.. cause i no u would make it about real hip hop ..something tha the game is missin ...... i just want ur opinion on dis song i rap but i just made the beat on dis song thanx from ireland
i like how you didn't fake it, editing out real parts, dope. takes time, even techn9ne had mad trouble in the past, absolute power dvd had bunch of his studio time
wow damn this is the first time i see u rap spit flows like a true real mc bro b een subbed to u since march this year thanks to fadedhollysoldier! the second timeu rhymed wayy better bro the 2nd and 3rd time man! shit that shit was so fire yb therockstar from the bay area aka san franscisco or san fran how they say it.U no doubt is definitly the super mega underground king gotta perform this in vimieo and ustream bro and facebook.The world need to know who u are MisanthropikOneaka hewhohungers!
u know what u should do??.. rap like 4 bars at a time,stop, then the next 4 and so on and so 4th.. it will come out clean and on beat. i use to do tht too.. but lyrics are there homie
Very nice. Keep doing your shit my dude. Shits dope. Flow does need work but the lyrics are there. I appreciate that your taking your time and making this shit instead of just putting out bullshit.
Ay man. Check out my freestyles. If you put a comment on them I'll buy the LP/EP when it comes out , I probably would anyway but that will make certain. ('.
I liked that, nice beat rhymes r good like the concept,i agree with wilsonbata u do need to work on the flow a bit but overall i felt dat
dablakryu 3 months ago
@MisanthropikOne LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROCKSTAR STATUS BITCH FUCK OFF ! LOL GOOD SHIT BRUH
61989esham 3 months ago
This man's a beast! Keep on going!
LeEG0 4 months ago
You need to enunciate a bit more, and make your flow sound natural. You're too concerned with being on beat, that your voice sounds stagnant. Try to loosen up a bit. You got the voice though man!
CrassPunk99 4 months ago
big
GreekNeek 4 months ago
Second verse was whack
Maxamilli245 4 months ago
u whack son give it up stick to ur music commentary.
BLACKMANIZGOD 4 months ago
I'm liking your style man, I can see you got that old school type of flow.
Keep practicing bro you are spitting some raw shit man.
I hope you release your EP of LP on CD I will support it.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 4 months ago
beats dope, bars is nice, it's dope to hear this cause I've been subscribed you to you for a minute dude. I like it
wakeem93 4 months ago
The beat is dope and your lyrics are sick u just need to work on your rhythm with the song cuz it's not flowing with the beat but shits still sick I'd buy it
littleman938 4 months ago
The voice is dope
thecausenj 4 months ago
damb i'd buy it its good still
kkkronking 4 months ago
@AM33ZY Na,D-Pryde isn't even good.
amor49er1 5 months ago
@amor49er1 you trippin but that your opinion and you entiled to it
AM33ZY 5 months ago
you should review d-pryde's mars mixtape just sayin lol
AM33ZY 5 months ago
you gotta work on your flow man. right now your flow is all over the place and you sound very uncomfortable riding the beat. you should write your lyrics to the beat and practice your verse a couple hundred times before putting it down. just some constructive criticism, i dont wanna give away who i am but you've reviewed some of my albums. stay up.
WilsonBata 5 months ago
@WilsonBata Thanks. I definitely appreciate it. I need to fuck with the 2nd verse again. The first verse came out dope (I edited out a lot of shit). You are right though. Thank you. I appreciate it once again. BTW, I gotta find out who you are!
MisanthropikOne 5 months ago
Dope, Can't wait to hear this.
ProfoundShaolin 5 months ago
when that dude played the first verse with the beat, you sounded like dr.dre
OldSkoolisForever 5 months ago
Dope shit my dude. Like someone else said try memorizing your shit before you start, not only does it sound better/more authentic but it just comes a lot easier.
And I'm glad I'm not the only one who laughs at myself when I fuck up tryin' to record.
TheDealer1228 5 months ago
Good work son, keep it up, can't wait to hear the final product
bitbybit1231 5 months ago
I saw this the other day just never got around to commenting.I've never seen you smile this much ever so I can tell you had fun.That's the most important thing,as long as you enjoy what you do then half the battle is won.The music biz is cut throat,very dirty game.I wish you the best with ur budding rap career.I write (not that much anymore) rhymes and spit for fun but my thing is the production side of it.I can relate.Keep doin' you ! Peace.
dubbsway4life 5 months ago 3
@dubbsway4life Thanx my nig.
MisanthropikOne 5 months ago
u pretty good my dude but the flow on the first song (im writing this mid video) it feels as though u are trying to hard to make the flow ur rapping with work not hating just trying to give my pointers n opinions since u gave me urs wen i asked u a question on my music and i normally dont ask cuz iv been rappin for 10 years lol
AM33ZY 5 months ago
dope, reminds me of kool g's flow
MrFORDE69 5 months ago 3
youre a dope mc brutha, respect !!!!! shout out goes 2 u aswell.
if u want more beatz just holla at me but it probably could take a while until i can send you over some stuff because i got my own project in the making.
keep doin ya thing homie
TimelessBeatz1992 5 months ago
I can't wait to hear the finished product!!
bWo4life12 5 months ago
he's right, it was nasty
liltunechi4eva 5 months ago
its a pain in the ass to record some days if people who know what im talkin bout
hecd21 5 months ago
damn,i didnt know you spit.best of luck wit your music man
hecd21 5 months ago 2
lol u hate women
ChinaDMute 5 months ago
@ChinaDMute Nah.... I hate bitches that play games. LOL
MisanthropikOne 5 months ago 11
@MisanthropikOne I love your tags!!!!lol
SLC133 5 months ago
put down a ruff copy then listen to it for a couple weeks over and over till you have your shit down tight.By listening to it over and over you'll figure out alternate flows and schemes and you be able to go back in a spit that shit totally natural
JlockTheVideoNasty 5 months ago
keep it up man
Makkiakelli 5 months ago
Am i the only one that thinks that he looks like 50 Cent???
FunnyButSadVideos 5 months ago 3
Try memorizing your words before going to the booth. It makes your words sound more natural and also it takes less of your studio time.
NotSoCoolAfterAll2 5 months ago 3
appreciate the vid. sounds legit. will tune in for more information regarding the album.
portblazerfool 5 months ago
u suck
888kermit 5 months ago
@888kermit Your mamas tits
MisanthropikOne 5 months ago 16
@MisanthropikOne wats up man wanna say i respect your opinion on anything to do wit hip hop..u speak tha truth.. u no u should hav ur own show on tv dude.. cause i no u would make it about real hip hop ..something tha the game is missin ...... i just want ur opinion on dis song i rap but i just made the beat on dis song thanx from ireland
1990CHROME 5 months ago
@MisanthropikOne shit forgot to tell u wa tha vid was Who am I (the Fuzzy Fella ft.Bigg Slyy & Sematecino)
1990CHROME 5 months ago
i like how you didn't fake it, editing out real parts, dope. takes time, even techn9ne had mad trouble in the past, absolute power dvd had bunch of his studio time
dustinbowls420247 5 months ago
wow damn this is the first time i see u rap spit flows like a true real mc bro b een subbed to u since march this year thanks to fadedhollysoldier! the second timeu rhymed wayy better bro the 2nd and 3rd time man! shit that shit was so fire yb therockstar from the bay area aka san franscisco or san fran how they say it.U no doubt is definitly the super mega underground king gotta perform this in vimieo and ustream bro and facebook.The world need to know who u are MisanthropikOneaka hewhohungers!
Criticismguy2009 5 months ago
u know what u should do??.. rap like 4 bars at a time,stop, then the next 4 and so on and so 4th.. it will come out clean and on beat. i use to do tht too.. but lyrics are there homie
themavkidd 5 months ago
sounds good
rekronce 5 months ago
one word.... DOPE
sniperboy1754 5 months ago
keep it up bro ill b waiting 4 it
superspartan1110 5 months ago
Very nice. Keep doing your shit my dude. Shits dope. Flow does need work but the lyrics are there. I appreciate that your taking your time and making this shit instead of just putting out bullshit.
ttredraider2017 5 months ago
did you go over your lines much before you went to the booth or is it just cause its on the spot?
sk8ergangsta2003 5 months ago
Wack flow.
j04370859 5 months ago
I definitely would play this song for a long time.
Slicknificent 5 months ago
Flow could use work. It kinda sounds awkward to the beat.
AppropriateShit 5 months ago
fuck yes, a legend in the making!
Kurotensity 5 months ago
Hot track man. I'm really feeling that beat. I would buy it for sure.
chestveeg 5 months ago
ur rhythm could use some improving but other than that shit is dope!
UseHERname93 5 months ago 5
dope!!!!
139knowledge 5 months ago
nice shit bro
ballzyification 5 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
omg this is something new ...its dope as hell
keep going Misanthropik :D
hilack5 5 months ago
This is the shit, man! Get this out now!
smashbrosfiend 5 months ago
This is dope... Lol but who's gonna review YOUR album?? Since we're used to YOU reviewing
zIxNiGhTMaRexIz 5 months ago 30
@zIxNiGhTMaRexIz Theneedledrop lol
walkerdj1 5 months ago
@zIxNiGhTMaRexIz deadendhiphop
fitzcannon 5 months ago
@zIxNiGhTMaRexIz How bout one of his subscribers
fmcneillii 4 months ago
That's what's up man
cooldude9174 5 months ago
im unable to download music i only have a playstation 3 so doubt ill be able to get this unless it gets officialy relased in uk
4play38 5 months ago
Can't wait for your music to come out.
engdynastymusic 5 months ago
Will be awesome to hear some finished stuff!
JunkyardGod89 5 months ago
and dope t-shirt
immobilarity1 5 months ago
fucking ill, cant wait to hear the final product, would love to hear the lp/ep
immobilarity1 5 months ago
dude can rap!
kenillla 5 months ago 12
I hear you son keep doin' ur thing.
mdessaso 5 months ago
Ay man. Check out my freestyles. If you put a comment on them I'll buy the LP/EP when it comes out , I probably would anyway but that will make certain. ('.
MrThe2053 5 months ago
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MrThe2053 5 months ago
First time I've ever heard you spit. Keep working dude. I have a feeling that this will be a dope EP/LP.
chrispaul1996 5 months ago