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  • Where is act 2 its been a uear

  • i hope you get the next episode out before the end of the month

  • Lot of cursing...but still. Nice.

  • what map?

  • Damn somebody beat me to it.

    

  • Your First and best video and you stopped making more.

  • @halofernandez0029 We are working on more, As hard as it is to believe, we have had nothing but technical difficulties one after another. Our recording xbox Red ringed (for the second time) last week. Sorry,

  • I think the title is supposed to be spelled Eridanus

  • @CipherProductions10 Good theory, but no it's not. :p If Eridanus is a constellation how could it also be a planet? It's just what we came up with. Thanks for your view!

  • @ShamefulProductions1 Actually Eridanus is a planet in the Halo Universe, and Master Chief was actually born on Eridanus 5.

  • @CipherProductions10 Well you've taught me something. But I can't stress enough that the name of this planet was just one we came up with. Any likeness to Eridanus is coincidental.

  • AWESOMEZ

  • Good to see some Australian machinamaters though you could probably turn down the background noise of the actual game tho

  • man i cant see anything its flippin black and too much cussing at the beginning! who just randomly curses for no reson

  • @pineconedude1 Australians do

  • @34675117 haha!!! although i dont usually talk to australians on a regular basis....

  • love the rainy weather effects, wish Bungie actually put it into the final games...

  • posh twat

  • Voice acting wasn't bad. Only thing I really saw wrong with it was that in some parts, the sound effects were up too high.

  • You typed in Chuck Norris's name wrong in google again, didn't you. -_-

  • I'm not going to lie, This actually made me pretty scared... Or some what jumpy.

  • keep the same music or no music at all i love the ambience and the mood it really does make you scared like in the end you just sit there waiting for something to jump out but nothing ever does except when the creature runs past the camera thats what really makes it scary

  • hope to see a more acts. only thing id do different is, sense they are probably military they should all be the same primary color.

  • where the part two ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

  • incredible although the acting a little bad but other than that good job

  • hey man whens part 2?

  • hey this is really good, intense!

  • Hey, where's a part 2? I've been waiting ...

    

  • i like it... accents are interesting. and i would put out an ad for different voice actors... cus some of the voices are too similar. good idea though :)

  • Wtf... The time is 9:11....

  • reminds me of dead space good job

  • Really good, I want the next one :)

  • wow really good machinima.btw i can make really scary voices if you want some

  • this is the captain i fuckin love this fuckin cereal fuck are you fuckin sayin fuck you well fuck you

  • whan is the next one coming

  • Awesome, but like everybody else said the voice acting was lacking.

  • I subscribed :)

  • make more 

  • Voice acting was a bit off, but otherwise it was great. Can't wait for the next one.

  • from the flood: nice job, but the voice acting needs work..just be more confident when you do it.

    how did you lower the guns btw?

  • @Alexthapanda

    Searchbar.

  • Extended conversations sound weird.

    Other than that, it was great.

  • Tha Flood was herez

  • Done well, just need to improve on our borders, voice lighting and FX

  • this is great so far

  • Good. Voice needs more.... inflection, and the spartan was..... not odd. A person on the ship? If it was an elite, then it would have stood out. Spartan could be mistaken for ship crew.

  • @ZyklonBStudios It's meant to be a spartan, but for spoilers sake I won't go any further than to say it's a spartan for a reason, and it's wearing particular armor for a reason.

  • @ShamefulProductions1 Not bad, not bad.

  • voice acting sucks bawlz

  • @CannedBullets I'm aware, sad to see you didn't enjoy it.

  • @ShamefulProductions1 everybody's irish awwww yeah

  • Flood was here. Flood approves.

  • @Shadowemonc thanks man, mind commenting on this in the flood? Post needs a decent revival :(

  • Voice acting needs work.. Also, your credits did not fit in the screen, work with it a little next time... But good job overall. Maybe make this thing on the camera an elite, and not a spartan?

  • That was very well done. Keep up the good work!

  • I'm greatly impressed. You created such a great atmosphere that worked with what you were trying to achieve. Voice acting was a bit off but that can easily be improved on. Impressive quality, good choice of effects, I'm loving what I'm seeing. I barely do this, but I'm going to subscribe, I truly cannot wait to see more from you guys.

  • @ShadowlordArk Thank you for such... such a complimentary comment, that means a lot. Expect to see more ;)

  • Good gob 8/10

  • /@MsDoorhinge thanks :) nice comment 9/10

  • The voice acting is a bit... dry... And the thing at the end looks a bit too ordinary to be scary. Maybe try using evade with the speed turned up so he rolls a far distance and quickly.

  • Looks good. Hope you keep it up.

  • flud wuz here.

  • Looks good guys, cant wait to voice act in it :)

  • Constructive critism:

    Voice acting is average.

    Cut out the part where it says:

    "A horror film by..." in future parts. You don't see:

    "Star Wars. A Sci-Fi film by George Lucas."

    The rain effects need a little improvement, splashing on the ground and if there's a camera angle on an angle (looking down slightly) the rain should adjust to that.

    Keep up the good work. :D

  • This is an amazing video. Only problem as others have said is the voice actors. Get some more ranged ones and this will be off the charts. Also the ending was really creepy. Good job.

  • @Titanboy123 Thanks

  • twist ending?

  • @xx777y perhaaaps ;)

  • Great work, superb editing, excellent audio quality, needs a few more ranged voice actors. Other than that keep them coming!

  • @EternalMotionPicture Thanks for the input!

  • Yeah, this is like top-notch quality, keep it up!

  • @mindspa24 will do!

  • You should make the voice acting less more on the funny machinima side. Over all pretty good.

  • @Kellonv thanks, we'll work on that

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