@halofernandez0029 We are working on more, As hard as it is to believe, we have had nothing but technical difficulties one after another. Our recording xbox Red ringed (for the second time) last week. Sorry,
@CipherProductions10 Good theory, but no it's not. :p If Eridanus is a constellation how could it also be a planet? It's just what we came up with. Thanks for your view!
@CipherProductions10 Well you've taught me something. But I can't stress enough that the name of this planet was just one we came up with. Any likeness to Eridanus is coincidental.
keep the same music or no music at all i love the ambience and the mood it really does make you scared like in the end you just sit there waiting for something to jump out but nothing ever does except when the creature runs past the camera thats what really makes it scary
i like it... accents are interesting. and i would put out an ad for different voice actors... cus some of the voices are too similar. good idea though :)
Good. Voice needs more.... inflection, and the spartan was..... not odd. A person on the ship? If it was an elite, then it would have stood out. Spartan could be mistaken for ship crew.
@ZyklonBStudios It's meant to be a spartan, but for spoilers sake I won't go any further than to say it's a spartan for a reason, and it's wearing particular armor for a reason.
Voice acting needs work.. Also, your credits did not fit in the screen, work with it a little next time... But good job overall. Maybe make this thing on the camera an elite, and not a spartan?
I'm greatly impressed. You created such a great atmosphere that worked with what you were trying to achieve. Voice acting was a bit off but that can easily be improved on. Impressive quality, good choice of effects, I'm loving what I'm seeing. I barely do this, but I'm going to subscribe, I truly cannot wait to see more from you guys.
The voice acting is a bit... dry... And the thing at the end looks a bit too ordinary to be scary. Maybe try using evade with the speed turned up so he rolls a far distance and quickly.
"A horror film by..." in future parts. You don't see:
"Star Wars. A Sci-Fi film by George Lucas."
The rain effects need a little improvement, splashing on the ground and if there's a camera angle on an angle (looking down slightly) the rain should adjust to that.
This is an amazing video. Only problem as others have said is the voice actors. Get some more ranged ones and this will be off the charts. Also the ending was really creepy. Good job.
Where is act 2 its been a uear
noble7monash 2 months ago
i hope you get the next episode out before the end of the month
splicer1508 4 months ago
Lot of cursing...but still. Nice.
CazualNinja 5 months ago
what map?
TheDudd100 5 months ago
Damn somebody beat me to it.
batmanfan281 5 months ago
Your First and best video and you stopped making more.
halofernandez0029 7 months ago
@halofernandez0029 We are working on more, As hard as it is to believe, we have had nothing but technical difficulties one after another. Our recording xbox Red ringed (for the second time) last week. Sorry,
ShamefulProductions1 7 months ago
I think the title is supposed to be spelled Eridanus
CipherProductions10 7 months ago
@CipherProductions10 Good theory, but no it's not. :p If Eridanus is a constellation how could it also be a planet? It's just what we came up with. Thanks for your view!
ShamefulProductions1 7 months ago
@ShamefulProductions1 Actually Eridanus is a planet in the Halo Universe, and Master Chief was actually born on Eridanus 5.
CipherProductions10 7 months ago
@CipherProductions10 Well you've taught me something. But I can't stress enough that the name of this planet was just one we came up with. Any likeness to Eridanus is coincidental.
ShamefulProductions1 7 months ago
AWESOMEZ
ToaKai3456 8 months ago
Good to see some Australian machinamaters though you could probably turn down the background noise of the actual game tho
34675117 8 months ago
man i cant see anything its flippin black and too much cussing at the beginning! who just randomly curses for no reson
pineconedude1 9 months ago
@pineconedude1 Australians do
34675117 8 months ago
@34675117 haha!!! although i dont usually talk to australians on a regular basis....
pineconedude1 8 months ago
love the rainy weather effects, wish Bungie actually put it into the final games...
wallacelin0508 9 months ago
posh twat
EddK1994 9 months ago
Voice acting wasn't bad. Only thing I really saw wrong with it was that in some parts, the sound effects were up too high.
DawnAscendance 11 months ago
You typed in Chuck Norris's name wrong in google again, didn't you. -_-
Crudeowl229 11 months ago
I'm not going to lie, This actually made me pretty scared... Or some what jumpy.
JetFormerS232 11 months ago
keep the same music or no music at all i love the ambience and the mood it really does make you scared like in the end you just sit there waiting for something to jump out but nothing ever does except when the creature runs past the camera thats what really makes it scary
allthepeeps90 1 year ago
hope to see a more acts. only thing id do different is, sense they are probably military they should all be the same primary color.
cupcakejman 1 year ago
where the part two ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
ww1fan525 1 year ago
incredible although the acting a little bad but other than that good job
XDraydenReapZX 1 year ago
hey man whens part 2?
CRaZiiEJ117 1 year ago
hey this is really good, intense!
GamerProProductionz 1 year ago
Hey, where's a part 2? I've been waiting ...
ZyklonBStudios 1 year ago
i like it... accents are interesting. and i would put out an ad for different voice actors... cus some of the voices are too similar. good idea though :)
Neekatron 1 year ago
Wtf... The time is 9:11....
BuffleMuffle 1 year ago
reminds me of dead space good job
night4466 1 year ago
Really good, I want the next one :)
jonesy90000 1 year ago
wow really good machinima.btw i can make really scary voices if you want some
george2p 1 year ago
this is the captain i fuckin love this fuckin cereal fuck are you fuckin sayin fuck you well fuck you
allthepeeps90 1 year ago
whan is the next one coming
ghost59able 1 year ago
Awesome, but like everybody else said the voice acting was lacking.
BandanaWedgie 1 year ago
I subscribed :)
SquadFiveShow 1 year ago
make more
ghost59able 1 year ago 7
Voice acting was a bit off, but otherwise it was great. Can't wait for the next one.
Artoofeva 1 year ago
from the flood: nice job, but the voice acting needs work..just be more confident when you do it.
how did you lower the guns btw?
Alexthapanda 1 year ago
@Alexthapanda
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Gondile 1 year ago
Extended conversations sound weird.
Other than that, it was great.
Microja 1 year ago
Tha Flood was herez
jetphire1 1 year ago
Done well, just need to improve on our borders, voice lighting and FX
honoureddOne 1 year ago
this is great so far
shaunmakesvids1 1 year ago
Good. Voice needs more.... inflection, and the spartan was..... not odd. A person on the ship? If it was an elite, then it would have stood out. Spartan could be mistaken for ship crew.
ZyklonBStudios 1 year ago
@ZyklonBStudios It's meant to be a spartan, but for spoilers sake I won't go any further than to say it's a spartan for a reason, and it's wearing particular armor for a reason.
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
@ShamefulProductions1 Not bad, not bad.
ClownAssasinator14 8 months ago
voice acting sucks bawlz
CannedBullets 1 year ago
@CannedBullets I'm aware, sad to see you didn't enjoy it.
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
@ShamefulProductions1
XardasDensrai 11 months ago
@ShamefulProductions1 everybody's irish awwww yeah
no0bh4ter1 10 months ago
Flood was here. Flood approves.
Shadowemonc 1 year ago
@Shadowemonc thanks man, mind commenting on this in the flood? Post needs a decent revival :(
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
Voice acting needs work.. Also, your credits did not fit in the screen, work with it a little next time... But good job overall. Maybe make this thing on the camera an elite, and not a spartan?
sNiiPePhAiiL 1 year ago
That was very well done. Keep up the good work!
DarthBlader12 1 year ago
I'm greatly impressed. You created such a great atmosphere that worked with what you were trying to achieve. Voice acting was a bit off but that can easily be improved on. Impressive quality, good choice of effects, I'm loving what I'm seeing. I barely do this, but I'm going to subscribe, I truly cannot wait to see more from you guys.
ShadowlordArk 1 year ago
@ShadowlordArk Thank you for such... such a complimentary comment, that means a lot. Expect to see more ;)
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
Good gob 8/10
MsDoorhinge 1 year ago
/@MsDoorhinge thanks :) nice comment 9/10
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
The voice acting is a bit... dry... And the thing at the end looks a bit too ordinary to be scary. Maybe try using evade with the speed turned up so he rolls a far distance and quickly.
OnyxReaper 1 year ago
Looks good. Hope you keep it up.
omegaglory77 1 year ago
flud wuz here.
CarnageHurts 1 year ago 8
Looks good guys, cant wait to voice act in it :)
VSCOMO 1 year ago
Constructive critism:
Voice acting is average.
Cut out the part where it says:
"A horror film by..." in future parts. You don't see:
"Star Wars. A Sci-Fi film by George Lucas."
The rain effects need a little improvement, splashing on the ground and if there's a camera angle on an angle (looking down slightly) the rain should adjust to that.
Keep up the good work. :D
jwl665 1 year ago
This is an amazing video. Only problem as others have said is the voice actors. Get some more ranged ones and this will be off the charts. Also the ending was really creepy. Good job.
Titanboy123 1 year ago
@Titanboy123 Thanks
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
twist ending?
xx777y 1 year ago
@xx777y perhaaaps ;)
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
Great work, superb editing, excellent audio quality, needs a few more ranged voice actors. Other than that keep them coming!
EternalMotionPicture 1 year ago
@EternalMotionPicture Thanks for the input!
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
Yeah, this is like top-notch quality, keep it up!
mindspa24 1 year ago
@mindspa24 will do!
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago
You should make the voice acting less more on the funny machinima side. Over all pretty good.
Kellonv 1 year ago
@Kellonv thanks, we'll work on that
ShamefulProductions1 1 year ago