Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $
The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....
Of all the songs I heard this was the one that moved me ... Corresponded to the feelings I feel, to my state of mind ... This boy has exceptional talent, I loved a lot ... Congratulations, really! :)
also .. i think you should call your song " when minds collide" or " Inner battle" ... at 2:18 it almost reminds me of a duel.. well not really a duel but 2 couples fighting or... someone fighting with their conscience iono.. maybe its weird for me thinking that but it thought it was cool...
it's a good song and i'm not gonna rip apart any little mistake you made when it comes to keeping up a good tempo and fluidity but one thing bothers me.. the title.. it's was way too happy of a song in the intro to be a song about war.. the middle was fine.. nice range of emotions but refine and work on the timing and such and it'll be a great song!!
haha its true it's not the most fitting title. truth is, i hadn't come up with anything so when it asked me to write something down i was like "shit i need to call it something!". Anyway im looking for another title so if u have any suggestions please send me and i'll be happy to change it. =P
@Gothguy47 The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....
@Gothguy47 Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $
Its very good :D but you need to practice with a Metronome...
TheZooomm 1 month ago
Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $
Dalthii 1 year ago
The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....
Dalthii 1 year ago
Of all the songs I heard this was the one that moved me ... Corresponded to the feelings I feel, to my state of mind ... This boy has exceptional talent, I loved a lot ... Congratulations, really! :)
Dalthii 1 year ago 2
also .. i think you should call your song " when minds collide" or " Inner battle" ... at 2:18 it almost reminds me of a duel.. well not really a duel but 2 couples fighting or... someone fighting with their conscience iono.. maybe its weird for me thinking that but it thought it was cool...
HeartOfSorrows 3 years ago
..omg im in love..... excellent...
HeartOfSorrows 3 years ago
this is reallly good, i like it, so now- were're the sheet music.?
klapouszek29 3 years ago
it's a good song and i'm not gonna rip apart any little mistake you made when it comes to keeping up a good tempo and fluidity but one thing bothers me.. the title.. it's was way too happy of a song in the intro to be a song about war.. the middle was fine.. nice range of emotions but refine and work on the timing and such and it'll be a great song!!
gluedmonkey 3 years ago
haha its true it's not the most fitting title. truth is, i hadn't come up with anything so when it asked me to write something down i was like "shit i need to call it something!". Anyway im looking for another title so if u have any suggestions please send me and i'll be happy to change it. =P
Gothguy47 3 years ago
@Gothguy47 The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....
Dalthii 1 year ago
@Gothguy47 Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $
Dalthii 1 year ago
you need to work a little bit on fluidity. as well as the thought of the piece. i mean, it's a good piece but could be improved in my opinion.
XTuffxXxStefieX 3 years ago
i agree with you completely. the good thing is i'm always making adjustments to it. so if i record it again it will sound nothing like this one =P
Gothguy47 3 years ago
in the first seconds you already had my attention :)
beau-ty-ful!
Hyperkind1989 3 years ago
You really know how to compose longer pieces of music! I always have trouble when trying to do that.
cshtarkov 3 years ago
do you have the sheet music on your computer ?
Ottokar315 3 years ago
no i don't have it on my computer.
Gothguy47 3 years ago
who wrote this song ?
Ottokar315 3 years ago
that would be me...
Gothguy47 3 years ago
Sweet!
Gianfrancoco 3 years ago 4
This is really nice. I especially like the little part that starts around 4:00, it was nice.
we3are7art9 3 years ago 3
Beautiful!
bAll3r9StYl3 3 years ago 2