...close your eyes and hold 'em tight! (shortfilm)

[socialprojectss]

P.S. How do you not have more views? This is pretty high-quality stuff (Aka, better than Smosh)

[socialprojectss]

For the shot where she drops the photo, )2:20) instead of changing shots really quickly about 6 times, just do one far away shot where she hits the picture with her foot, bends down, looks at it, then cut in closer to her looking at the photo.I also don't like how the camera gets all blurry around 3:05.Have her act dizzy instead of showing it. I swear I"m not trolling you, but you have so much potential and good equipment/crew that I need to be really nit-picky about these little things.

[socialprojectss]

I like this one a lot better than the last, but there a few things, mostly cinematography that I would change. First of all, the shot at . Also, the camera appears to be in what I like to call "no man's land" where it is not focusing on her whole body or her hand, but kind of on her forearm, which looks amateurish. For the shot around 1:00, it's hard to tell what it is, give more of a direct shot. The shot at 1:44 is terrible, really looks amateurish.

[chinnuism]

man your short film is cool and frightened me a bit.. man congrats

[holgerfrick]

@klappinsounds: der film war unter den top10 beim shocking Shorts award 2009 und hat bei fright nights filmfest zwei preise gewonnen :-)

vielleicht sollte ich ihn noch ein wenig rumschicken... danke!

[klappinsounds]

Hallo, spektakulären Film. Es schuf so viel Spannung! Haben Sie senden Sie diese an einen Film Festival? Es könnte nominiert werden. :)