Flip -Side Ep 1-Tooth Paster

[johnnymutton]

it was very dark in the beginning and that made a bad quality, the camera was a bit too shaky. There were shots in the mirror where you could see the camera, so you should watch where you stand while filming. you should also plan what you are going to say, at parts you guys sounded like you had some trouble, knowing what you were going to say.

[CoolBeansFilm]

p.s. I know its supposed have a similar vibe to "the office" and i know its not really supposed to have "dramatic music" and i think its a good idea not to over produce it, but i would be good if you threw some music in every so often (such as the scene i mentioned).

[CoolBeansFilm]

i thought it was really funny when (Thomas?)was talking about how toothpaste is the answer to life and when (peter?) was explaining his "dress code". I think the worst part was at the beginning with the doll. I could not see very well, and it was just kind of boringish. Maybe add some "dramatic" music next time in scenes such as that one. Overall, the video was very well done and I liked the intro with the rubic cube.

[CoolBeansFilm]

really man, this video was awsome. The shots were good and, personally, I thought it was funny. Making more of these would be a smart choice and I really hope you do.

[skylinepicturesinc]

thanks - could you tell us maybe what you thought was the best part? the worst? Just any advice is always good, because people just like you are our viewers, and knowing what everything thinks is cool or funny really allows to make something of good quality.

[johnnymutton]

im sorry but this was terrible

[robberman615]

hey jonny same goes for you this was an awesome film saying that it was terrible makes you an idiot and you really need to learn how this is a quality film and your films are bad

[tomweavin64]

sorry man, this didn't keep my attention for longer than 2 minutes.

Shots weren't interesting, characters weren't developed that well... nothing seemed to have a purpose (what was the doll about? and the toothpaste?)

maybe I would have found out if you'd had kept my attention for longer, also try to work on lighting and using different angles of the same shot to add interest.

keep it up man

[skylinepicturesinc]

thanks for the advice

I do think you're right when you say that we need more content to keep people interested, but the point of this episode (the first one) was to establish the characters. You see that by the interviews and actions that they both do. See, the show is going to be an "Office" type documentary, so nothing important in the seires has really happend yet, this being the first episode. Maybe we could of shortened down a bit- thanks again for the advice.

[tomweavin64]

Ok yeah that makes sense, but I think condensing it down the the most vital parts would make it a lot more watchable, for example I don't think you needed so much footage of the clothes organising? just a thought

has potential though, I will subscribe and watch the next episode:)

[skylinepicturesinc]

thanks

[robberman615]

hey mr tom weavin idiot this was a great video and you need to shut up about how it wasnt good and didnt hold intrest because i watched the whole thing the first time you just are stupid

[tomweavin64]

wait... so the person who made the video openly accepts my helpful constructive criticism, whilst you, a 14 year old non-film maker, suddenly think you can persuade me that I'm an idiot for not thinking the video was perfect?

you're an immature little fool.

[ahlightning5]

Ya that was funny, some stuff wasnt funny, but its cool

[skylinepicturesinc]

how was it, overall?

[GoldenMule34]

what the hell was that

[christianbiedenharn]

you see thomas recording at 3:32 ha great video though