This is beautiful. It seems to slowly gather power , from dream to appreciation, appreciation to awakening, and finally with sudden force, eruption: "Liege-Lord..."
(and it's the second poem of yours I've listened to since finding you a couple of days ago, with that new-and-novel-to-me word: susurrate)
I'm in love with this poem, Charles- it's your best, I have to believe.
The second stanza recalls the sublime, tickling voluptuousness of Hero and Leander, and the third, the aching, bone-crushing longing from afar of The Eve of Saint Agnes. This piece of dazzling electricity is like their perfect merger and sparkles on the screen.
Beautifully kinetic, erotic details of a dream made flesh envisioned by a soul of limitless imagination. I thank Charles, Cernuda, and Emilio for this incandescent
dreamscape of yearning. Our fantasy lives are often more enjoyable than our earthbound existence but for once ... I want my pebbles polished and pulse quickened while awake by a three-dimensional EROS--with or without leaves--in real time.
Quite the opposite dear friend:I do thank you for you awesome channel."Soave sia il vento" with Tatiana Troyanos is unsurpassable. Also,I think she is the most perfect Cherubino ever.
Wait a moment! Beauty in my mouth? What a nonsense! I am not a Poet like you, so what's the point of it? No,no...I will swallow that Beauty in order to place it in my heart FOREVER...Thanks Charles,thank you so much...
As for me, i recently wondered who could be so kind as to expose a man like me, to the menace of Beauty once more,and to place Beauty in my mouth like the core of an apple... the answer is clear to me now: YOU, my dear Charles...
In forth Duino Elegy, Rilke wondered who could be so cruel as to expose a child,still unconscious of life,to the menace of death,and to place death in his mouth,like the core of a fine apple...
This is beautiful. It seems to slowly gather power , from dream to appreciation, appreciation to awakening, and finally with sudden force, eruption: "Liege-Lord..."
(and it's the second poem of yours I've listened to since finding you a couple of days ago, with that new-and-novel-to-me word: susurrate)
Tsjerk 2 years ago
Thanks Todd. Susurrate is a useful word, if a bit literary :)
brychar66 2 years ago
You are a muse
Wonderful
heartbeat3 2 years ago
Beautiful..thank you Charles...this guy is Antinous..perfect photo
nicksynnz 2 years ago
Thanks Nikita :)
brychar66 2 years ago
beautiful verse, beautiful voice, your fan in California, Glen
glenfitch 3 years ago
cheers Glen :)
brychar66 3 years ago
I'm in love with this poem, Charles- it's your best, I have to believe.
The second stanza recalls the sublime, tickling voluptuousness of Hero and Leander, and the third, the aching, bone-crushing longing from afar of The Eve of Saint Agnes. This piece of dazzling electricity is like their perfect merger and sparkles on the screen.
The video effects were great too, by the way ;)
VanguardCommunard 3 years ago
Thanks Gray, glad you liked it. I must catch up with your French Revolution vids soon.
brychar66 3 years ago
Beautifully kinetic, erotic details of a dream made flesh envisioned by a soul of limitless imagination. I thank Charles, Cernuda, and Emilio for this incandescent
dreamscape of yearning. Our fantasy lives are often more enjoyable than our earthbound existence but for once ... I want my pebbles polished and pulse quickened while awake by a three-dimensional EROS--with or without leaves--in real time.
superdooperstupor 3 years ago
Quite the opposite dear friend:I do thank you for you awesome channel."Soave sia il vento" with Tatiana Troyanos is unsurpassable. Also,I think she is the most perfect Cherubino ever.
vonspre 3 years ago
Aca andas, putanno? No te da asco ser gay? Cochinón!
xipe02 2 years ago
Cute!
My congratulations!
yotuveuncoche 3 years ago
Just wonderful. Thank you for this nice moment.
treblechoir99 3 years ago
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Wait a moment! Beauty in my mouth? What a nonsense! I am not a Poet like you, so what's the point of it? No,no...I will swallow that Beauty in order to place it in my heart FOREVER...Thanks Charles,thank you so much...
-Emilio.
vonspre 3 years ago
As for me, i recently wondered who could be so kind as to expose a man like me, to the menace of Beauty once more,and to place Beauty in my mouth like the core of an apple... the answer is clear to me now: YOU, my dear Charles...
vonspre 3 years ago
Well thank you for exposing me to the menace of Luis Cernuda dear Emilio...ist unbeschreiblich!
brychar66 3 years ago
In forth Duino Elegy, Rilke wondered who could be so cruel as to expose a child,still unconscious of life,to the menace of death,and to place death in his mouth,like the core of a fine apple...
vonspre 3 years ago
Beauty from the Poet Laureate of Love Between Men!
EROSGODOFGAYS 3 years ago
Thanks Allen, I'll have to try to live up to that title ;)
brychar66 3 years ago
Another "lovely." Poetry speaks to us in a voice not otherwise heard. Just lovely, thank you.
sturdyguy 3 years ago
Regards to you Conrad and thanks for the kind comment.
brychar66 3 years ago
Oh, my vile Hubris.
As I puff and preen about my own small poem, I find this and am humbled.
Thank You for this elegiac Triumph.
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
anglicansag 3 years ago
Thank you too Piero. Your 'own small poem' is great :)
brychar66 3 years ago
I've recently read "The Picture of Dorian Gray," and I must say, this really reminds me of Basil Hallward.
koryargonic 3 years ago
yes Kory it's the same thing seen from a slightly different perspective, like the picture in the attic is in the mind. thanks for that, Chas
brychar66 3 years ago
the expression is just through words, rather than a painting.
koryargonic 3 years ago
Wonderful sweet as honey .Thanks always.
5513011 3 years ago
Glad you liked it Sam :)
brychar66 3 years ago
beautiful.
and beautifully read.
moreaudan 3 years ago
you are very kind, thank you
brychar66 3 years ago
Lovely! Thanks so much.
1zangelique 3 years ago
thank you Gary :)
brychar66 3 years ago