Hmm the accent kinda throws me off abit. But you do good job with a emotion, but I felt like you were holding out on second line. And on the first line it felt like you got tongue tie. I suggest you redo. Try also without the accent if you can.
drakekid7 7 months ago
@drakekid7 Understood.
skoh03 7 months ago
I'd definately say you've improved skoh! both in emotiona and clarity, good job man, keep it up!
BennyBanardo 7 months ago
@BennyBanardo Thank you BennyBanardo :) I'll definatly continue to keep it up!
Hmm the accent kinda throws me off abit. But you do good job with a emotion, but I felt like you were holding out on second line. And on the first line it felt like you got tongue tie. I suggest you redo. Try also without the accent if you can.
drakekid7 7 months ago
@drakekid7 Understood.
skoh03 7 months ago
I'd definately say you've improved skoh! both in emotiona and clarity, good job man, keep it up!
BennyBanardo 7 months ago
@BennyBanardo Thank you BennyBanardo :) I'll definatly continue to keep it up!
skoh03 7 months ago