Oh my gosh! When i saw you just standing there in the first couple seconds i was like "This is going to be funny" But then you started popin! Then i was "DAYUUM! GO HEAD GURL!" lol.
what can i say....black ppl didn't come up with dancing or dance moves so i don't consider this trying to dance like black... THIS is actual dances now a days that ppl do anyway... wasn't bad or anything too...i thought it was great, you have talent, keep it up, do need sharper moves but everything was great!
you can tell you have some kinda rythm and dance moves up your sleeve u just needed a little bit of guidance.A for effort hunny it wasnt that bad it looks like u had fun!!!
Girl shake dem hatas off because you certainly know what's up!!! I practice this dance all the time and you're by far excellent at it. Plus great improv! Keep up the good work, you got style!
no offense, but it looks like ur ass is hangin out the whole time, but besides that the moves were cool an the way u put em 2gether was original. overall it was pretty cool!
@eager2meetmiley11 UM OK, AT THE START U WERE OKAY, BUT GETTING TOWARDS THE END VERY SLOOPY. NOT DOIN TH MOVES RIGHT. I THINK U SHOULD FREESTYLE THAN COPYING A DANCE MOVE. ESPECIALLY FROM CIARA. STICK TO FREESTYLING
i dont see why everyone keeps picking this dance apart for every little flaw. i dont know about the other crazy, stupid people on this planet who dont know a great dance when they see one, but i thought it was AMAZING. so much better than i can ever do, and prob better than all the other criticizing idiots who have most likely never danced in their life, so have no clue how hard it is. my only advice is to keep strutting your stuff sista!
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i like it, but its kinda like a slow hip hop. but somthing that would help u look better is keep up the lessons and loose some weight. but if u dont drop sum pounds then wear a shirt that hides ur belly :{}
The girl is thin enough. Do you want her to be one of those girls that starves themselves so you can see her rib cage protruding through? Get a life because the girl isn't fat and doesn't need to lose any weight.
danm GET IT GIRL~just needs toning up on the moves it was sloppy but i know u have some bad ass talent...but make sure u dont wear that attire next time, because the way you dress actually limits you from doing certain moves and dress attire actually makes a difference with choreography but u did a fabulous job!
ummmmmm......ok? i think u need to work on the popping moves a little bit more before u actually put them to use cause ur not that smooth but overall i think it was not bad.
Since American Idol And So You Think You Can Dance Started, Hmmmmmm how can I say this, some people need to find other hobbies instead of being copy-cats, at least be able to copy good:
You kept doing the same moves over and over its good for a course but in between you should of changed it up...different dance between courses, courses can be the same almost like a song. Good job though.
dang!! y r some ppl SO rude?? there's better ways 2 give good criticism! (when i say that i mean 2 HELP the person [GOSH DANG IT!!], anyways sorry bout that. i think u did an EXCELLENT job considering u didnt have any dance training and just learned from videos. something i found helpful is recording urself and studying the video. and i believe if u try to relax alil more u can see that its not ur dancing thats the prob but that u cant relax =] great job!! keep it up! azn power!! <333
the whole routine i learned from a vid i found on youtube. the freestyling and rest. is mostly freestyle lol. the waves and popping i learned from tutorials.
Honestly, I thought it was a bit sloppy. Mostly around the middle of the song. I think you should've cut the song and danced a shorter time. That would've probably made it a little less repetitive, in my opinion. You should put a little more energy into it and make your moves bigger, there are some moves you really should be emphasizing. Move around a bit more, but don't move around sloppily, keep it firm. Just my advices.
yeah there was a slight fear of moving around the stage TOO much because i have gotten that critique before for moving around too much... so i gotta find a good balance
Your version of Goodies was, cute. If you ever decided to perform this number again, which I think you should.. I recommend you to focous on your steps a lot more . you have them all down, but you're putting them out sloppy. Much props tho.
Well I saw you reply this video to that Ciara Goodies Video Special.. and I've been studying her moves because I am planning to make a 3d animation using some/ if not all her moves.. and then I came upon ur video.. and recognized all Ciara dance moves.. except they were very sloppy. Its just a general critique.
girl youre awesome even me who's a dancert cant catch that routine i need some one to help me to poszt a vid on youtube me dancing some of ciara but anyways youre a great dancer keep it up
it's okay... i guess. you could improve on timing and get more smooth with your movements even though some is popping you should try getting your pop's more how do i say it. to the beat? and like hit harder.
after the first minute it kinda looked like you were tired and was out of dance ideas. the start of minute 2 was uhhh... weird. but it was an okay effort for having to dance for sooo long lol.
lol yeah. the sync on youtube is a teeny bit off. and i am trying to improve more on my popping. but its sort of harder right now to deliver hard pops when you're trying to do it fast too! hahaa. i was tired after the first minute even tho usually i can go on dancing for 4 hours straight. sigh.. lol but its either i'm out of shape, or adreneline lol
nice!!
MultiDancers4Life 4 months ago
Oh my gosh! When i saw you just standing there in the first couple seconds i was like "This is going to be funny" But then you started popin! Then i was "DAYUUM! GO HEAD GURL!" lol.
iiMakeChuEmo 1 year ago
what can i say....black ppl didn't come up with dancing or dance moves so i don't consider this trying to dance like black... THIS is actual dances now a days that ppl do anyway... wasn't bad or anything too...i thought it was great, you have talent, keep it up, do need sharper moves but everything was great!
truewy 1 year ago
Stop dancing like you're black.
devinkelsie123 1 year ago
damn she is good she willl prolly have a job as a dancer
mizzblackwolf1985 1 year ago
pull you pants up :p
TheKcktv57732 1 year ago
i can honestly say you killed it i thought you were gonna be stiff and off beat not tryna stereo type u or anything i loved it loved it
hellasexycaramel 1 year ago
you can tell you have some kinda rythm and dance moves up your sleeve u just needed a little bit of guidance.A for effort hunny it wasnt that bad it looks like u had fun!!!
SupaBadBitch89 1 year ago
LOLOLOLO!!!!!
BboyDyme 1 year ago
umm...
actually...it wasnt all that bad.
you just just need to make your moves more sharp.
but go girl(:
janaydance 1 year ago
Girl shake dem hatas off because you certainly know what's up!!! I practice this dance all the time and you're by far excellent at it. Plus great improv! Keep up the good work, you got style!
moonbabyam 1 year ago
oit of beat! not good!!
karizz69 1 year ago
BOOOO learn to dance.
mckillac88 1 year ago
You should of wore something better.
audraisaprettybitch 1 year ago
hahahaha!!! that's all I can say...
anne14garcia 1 year ago
? ?
Lovezdaanswer 1 year ago
no offense, but it looks like ur ass is hangin out the whole time, but besides that the moves were cool an the way u put em 2gether was original. overall it was pretty cool!
rachaelizdown1990 1 year ago
her boobies only move hahaha
psychocoin 1 year ago
agree horrible
flower764 1 year ago
your really good chicka
megatinkerbellz 1 year ago
omg u CAN dance!!!!!!!!!!
babygirl5968 1 year ago
you no dancing i love your the best
ajeejenkins1 1 year ago
@eager2meetmiley11 UM OK, AT THE START U WERE OKAY, BUT GETTING TOWARDS THE END VERY SLOOPY. NOT DOIN TH MOVES RIGHT. I THINK U SHOULD FREESTYLE THAN COPYING A DANCE MOVE. ESPECIALLY FROM CIARA. STICK TO FREESTYLING
merash87 1 year ago
wow, ur really ;D gd xxx
younniko 1 year ago
u did horrible learn how to dance baby
MsChannHUNN 1 year ago
ok i dnt kare i made a statement.......
DUWANAful 1 year ago
what the hell were u thinking........
DUWANAful 1 year ago 9
@DUWANAful
about food :3
CtlunatC 1 year ago
too stiff
brittany8564 2 years ago
wow!! good job!! Your dance is so good, I wish i could dance like you!! keep up the good work, you're very amazing :))
qqq242424 2 years ago
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I'd let her suck my cock.
iRewel 2 years ago
ur 'ok'
BabyyyGirlzzz 2 years ago
i liked it she was great
mypuppysnameistempo 2 years ago
i c hatersss.;;;;;; RSWedDotCom....JiiiNxD...THIZZINYEE.....anymore????
babedoll19 2 years ago
hiphop isn't supposed to be sloppy who the hell says that
JiiiNxD 2 years ago
awesome! <3
SoundousX 2 years ago
??....LOL
gun87rose 2 years ago
hmmm in sum parts she waz doin great,,,,bt thn in othrz she lookd kinda lost????
THIZZINYEE 2 years ago 6
your definitley not fat & i thought your dance was awesome !
goregirls101 2 years ago
i dont see why everyone keeps picking this dance apart for every little flaw. i dont know about the other crazy, stupid people on this planet who dont know a great dance when they see one, but i thought it was AMAZING. so much better than i can ever do, and prob better than all the other criticizing idiots who have most likely never danced in their life, so have no clue how hard it is. my only advice is to keep strutting your stuff sista!
footstepsdancer 2 years ago 2
@footstepsdancer IM WIT U....DEN HIP HOP IS UR OWN STYLE OF DANCING WIT AN UP BEAT....LEARN YA STUFF PPL...... SHE WAS GREAT... I LOVED IT!!!
livinmusic08 2 years ago
ballet? lol thats kinda funny since i've never taken ballet before
CtlunatC 2 years ago
Dude ,this is hip hop its supposed to be sloppy. NO DUH!?!?! do you know anything about hip hop dancing?
gracielulue 2 years ago
Obviously you don't bc that's some shitty hip hop dancing.
RSWebDotCom 2 years ago
i thought it was ok. a lil sloppy.
hawaiianbabe1103 2 years ago
tiz ok use less foot work next time tho
16yearsbaby 2 years ago
I like the way you dance .-. you look cute at the ending making yourself look like a doll that was cool P:
Sk8tergirl322 2 years ago
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i like it, but its kinda like a slow hip hop. but somthing that would help u look better is keep up the lessons and loose some weight. but if u dont drop sum pounds then wear a shirt that hides ur belly :{}
kene1996 2 years ago
The girl is thin enough. Do you want her to be one of those girls that starves themselves so you can see her rib cage protruding through? Get a life because the girl isn't fat and doesn't need to lose any weight.
nofxrocksthisplace 2 years ago
you are an very good dancer. It just looks like you kind of scared, with confidence, youll be 10X better. But either way, your talent shines through.
omfgyahh 2 years ago
danm GET IT GIRL~just needs toning up on the moves it was sloppy but i know u have some bad ass talent...but make sure u dont wear that attire next time, because the way you dress actually limits you from doing certain moves and dress attire actually makes a difference with choreography but u did a fabulous job!
haleyhottness 2 years ago
haha wow yhu suckk ! tell ah 3 year old 2 jump around && move their arms && this is wat yhu'll qet ! haha qaaaarbaqe
TheeBabimack 2 years ago
i like the way you pop but the rest it was like your trying to get to the next part of the song but good job XD
iraqiXtiger 2 years ago
LMAO....THAT WAS FUNNY...lol
guddabutt 2 years ago
ummmmmm......ok? i think u need to work on the popping moves a little bit more before u actually put them to use cause ur not that smooth but overall i think it was not bad.
ik30n3r 2 years ago
That was really good, but needs a LITTLE work... that's all ( dudes if you don't like what I think then leave me alone! )
BUNNYYEA 2 years ago
There were OK moves, but dat was HELLA sloppy.
itsatubathangshawty 2 years ago
Oh,,,,,,,,,what the da hell, if you was gon copy da video den you should of did dat betta..........you need to stick ta free stylin
itsatubathangshawty 2 years ago
Since American Idol And So You Think You Can Dance Started, Hmmmmmm how can I say this, some people need to find other hobbies instead of being copy-cats, at least be able to copy good:
kwanyoman 2 years ago
i liked it, the moves were hot!
SeanaSparkle2 2 years ago
very nice:) good dacning.
pinksox1239 2 years ago
damn girl u can dance
ronicasf 2 years ago
wow
whara007 2 years ago
you must feel the music..
fcmhoney 2 years ago
HAHAHA
itsatubathangshawty 2 years ago
that s ok but you did good for a minor
missthang1441 2 years ago
u have ..how should i say this?...uh very good moves but its that ur just a little stiff on dancing them but otherwise..it was nicee
JenJK417 2 years ago
it was alright
its jus really sloppy
but the moves were gud
mcerwello14 2 years ago 2
needs more work to it but you'll do great next time
campy125 2 years ago
i got bored after 40seconds of it
callaboo 2 years ago
0_o
tubefan6464 3 years ago
i dnt knw about everyone else bt i just didnt think dat was gud at all.. i mean there were sum parts bt hell no im sorry..
mackadameonnut 3 years ago
you can do better
chelseaily 3 years ago
that was so good i wish i could dance like that and you were on the right beat too
katierules10 3 years ago 3
WHOA!
aunit12 3 years ago
nice moves gurllllll...just get ya rythem on track..but that was the bomb..keep it up..i love to dance to gurl..it eases stress and its fun!!
tete313 3 years ago
You kept doing the same moves over and over its good for a course but in between you should of changed it up...different dance between courses, courses can be the same almost like a song. Good job though.
corysgirl69 3 years ago 2
good or not is purely a subjective matter..the fact that she is bold enough to dance in front of a crowd is an achievement in itself...good on ya :))
massamune70 3 years ago 9
it was alright ican zee better
babycakez707 3 years ago
your really good
pretzel435 3 years ago
Damn dat was good
QuincyHiggins93 3 years ago
thank you
CtlunatC 3 years ago
u alright
samoangurl4life 3 years ago
dang!! y r some ppl SO rude?? there's better ways 2 give good criticism! (when i say that i mean 2 HELP the person [GOSH DANG IT!!], anyways sorry bout that. i think u did an EXCELLENT job considering u didnt have any dance training and just learned from videos. something i found helpful is recording urself and studying the video. and i believe if u try to relax alil more u can see that its not ur dancing thats the prob but that u cant relax =] great job!! keep it up! azn power!! <333
sweetmid9angel 3 years ago
and you coppyed ciara's dance ruteen so whatever
Pirates0004 3 years ago
you dont own the choreography so you dont have a right to say who can or cannot "copy (learn)" the choreography.
and you just said you learned the dance also so that bascially means you copied the dance also. so what ever -.-'
CtlunatC 3 years ago
so what i know that dance u copycatter i learned it before you and i m better at it not so sloppy
Pirates0004 3 years ago
so? many other people have learned the dance also. you dont have to be so stuck up about it.
calling me a copy cat from just learning the dance means you're a copy cat too.
CtlunatC 3 years ago
the whole routine i learned from a vid i found on youtube. the freestyling and rest. is mostly freestyle lol. the waves and popping i learned from tutorials.
CtlunatC 3 years ago
wow u are good...
can u give me the link of the mp3???
Jaejoongkakkoi 3 years ago
gimme your email and i'll send it to you
CtlunatC 3 years ago
Honestly, I thought it was a bit sloppy. Mostly around the middle of the song. I think you should've cut the song and danced a shorter time. That would've probably made it a little less repetitive, in my opinion. You should put a little more energy into it and make your moves bigger, there are some moves you really should be emphasizing. Move around a bit more, but don't move around sloppily, keep it firm. Just my advices.
TwilightxNight 3 years ago
u are excellent.
umm few pointers.
u do the arm poppin thing alot throughout the dance..and u are kinda always in one spot..move around a lil..energy is pretty good. soo great job.
soccer55star 3 years ago
ah thank you thank you.
yeah there was a slight fear of moving around the stage TOO much because i have gotten that critique before for moving around too much... so i gotta find a good balance
CtlunatC 3 years ago
if only i had more friends who dance T__T
CtlunatC 3 years ago
Your version of Goodies was, cute. If you ever decided to perform this number again, which I think you should.. I recommend you to focous on your steps a lot more . you have them all down, but you're putting them out sloppy. Much props tho.
mexicanplayerr 3 years ago
haha thank you. if i perform this again i dont think it will be at my school lol, cuz they'll probably be bored and wana see me do something new.
could you point out something that I do that is very sloppy? and advise me on how to fix it? cuz i'm too lazy to look at the vid XD
CtlunatC 3 years ago
Well I saw you reply this video to that Ciara Goodies Video Special.. and I've been studying her moves because I am planning to make a 3d animation using some/ if not all her moves.. and then I came upon ur video.. and recognized all Ciara dance moves.. except they were very sloppy. Its just a general critique.
mexicanplayerr 3 years ago
ok juuuust curious lol.
CtlunatC 3 years ago
oh i see it now lol thanks
CtlunatC 3 years ago
girl youre awesome even me who's a dancert cant catch that routine i need some one to help me to poszt a vid on youtube me dancing some of ciara but anyways youre a great dancer keep it up
babyganst89 4 years ago
lol thank you
CtlunatC 4 years ago
ur welcome
babyganst89 4 years ago
that was nice
brooklie57 4 years ago
I love it :D
holybid 4 years ago 2
[i don't speak english very well...]
You really held back a lot, but still amazing =]
You put your own style in it, which is important... and the ending is reaaaaally³ nice xD
all the best for you ;*
cecihgaby 4 years ago
lol thank you. i think your english is fine even tho this is such a short message haha
CtlunatC 4 years ago
it's okay... i guess. you could improve on timing and get more smooth with your movements even though some is popping you should try getting your pop's more how do i say it. to the beat? and like hit harder.
after the first minute it kinda looked like you were tired and was out of dance ideas. the start of minute 2 was uhhh... weird. but it was an okay effort for having to dance for sooo long lol.
LydiaChu 4 years ago
lol yeah. the sync on youtube is a teeny bit off. and i am trying to improve more on my popping. but its sort of harder right now to deliver hard pops when you're trying to do it fast too! hahaa. i was tired after the first minute even tho usually i can go on dancing for 4 hours straight. sigh.. lol but its either i'm out of shape, or adreneline lol
CtlunatC 4 years ago
im serious luna, you can pop!!! i cant pop or lock wel haha XD
bands182 4 years ago
lol it just takes practice man lol. 3 months ago i was just introduced to popping. practicing everyday helps ALOT! keep practicing
CtlunatC 4 years ago
not impressive at all lol
ellis117 4 years ago
eh. i'm not very happy with it either. not my best
CtlunatC 4 years ago
wow, Bubblycheese's response to this comment was very clever. and impressive. <--sarcasm
hardwoodfloor1300 4 years ago
awesomeness =]
yep show em BHS ppl that Chinese can dance BETTA!
since when did ur poppin skill get this good?
keep it up!! i want to see something even better for next arts night! =D
toilabinh1986 4 years ago
WOW YOU'VE GOTTEN SO MUCH BETTER.
I like the ending lol
Yellowmedic 4 years ago
Luna i dont care what you say, you KICK ASS!!! You are an amazing dancer and if you look mad crazy everyday xP
Winry137 4 years ago