Smile for Me (Mary's Song) Original Song by JC Van Luyn

[BloodyKisses30]

:D WHOOT IM IN THIS VIDEO :DDD

[poetbjc64]

hey man are you making an album for these so we can have them?

It's be nice if you did.

As you can tell by how many people listen and like your song and emotions in them.

[XxBeklopptxX]

uiiii wie süzzz

[tarad8699]

write a song for me!

[Treidelhaut]

gute stimme...

mach weiter!!!

[bamjpogi]

it's really great because he's singing from the heart...very talented. but as i observe, just a little higher note and you'll puke. practice on your diaphragm :)

[emokaribob]

thats so sweet!you make my heart melt.

bahaha

[mamy101]

That was so sweet of you to write this song for her.You are such a sweet person and a very good friend,You cute little person[you knew I had to say that]

Hugs to you baby,

Mary

[TrueMusicGirl5]

I can tell you're a really good friend to her. At least you didn't run away when she started crying. And I agree that the worst thing a woman can do is cry in front of a man, even thought I am a woman. Duh. :) I thank you for writing such beautiful songs. My friend says, and I agree with her, that you are nearly perfect. We can't say totally perfect because we don't really know you but we wish you all the best and keep doin' what you're doing. :)

[StacyLynn1216]

Your song is very good. Thank you for writing me, and please do so again. Take care, and I will smile for you:)

[jesusramirez000]

i like your song especially the guitar

[skylitxmonstrosity]

Haha. I'm the last one. :)

[littlejay6]

I know what your saying that its hard for a guy when a girl cries in front of him and wants to talk to him, but once the tears are dry and you see that smile it makes it all worth it

[sweetybaby01223]

this is my fav of them all :) i love ur music

[snskidtv21]

great song!! 5 stars mang. ^-^

[LizzibeeParker]

aw. that sucks for her but such a good song....

[oyurinunes]

OUCH !

[samdude14]

Who is Mary? Your gf?

[Matte1011]

Great song! Great melody and phrasing. Sounds a little out of your range in some parts. Try a step down w/out the capo. May work better. Or even half a step may work. It's only the high parts that are flat. Not hatin, just constructive criticism. Great songs man keep them coming.

[brans717]

I love it!Thank you for sharing your talent!

[EmilyLiveProductions]

this song is so sweet, really I loved it *-*

You're amazing :)

You win another subscriber :)

[Sbhatia94]

Its great! Thanks for sending it to me! You're a wonderful singer and the lyrics are great. Keep it up! =D

[ptitesushi]

That's wonderful ...

Keep ooon :)

[whome1994]

well done jc, good song, ood singer , good vid. kee up teh good work . :-)

[j0er0cksmyw0rld]

i love this song, it's so cute, it's so great! 5 stars, and i already favorited it!

[xxxSunbeamxxx]

Just revisiting this video JC - happy memories :) So many beautiful girls in this video - the power of a smile is truly amazing. This song is just lovely and your video just wonderful...:)

Sunbeam :)

[deeeeereeer]

only... feeling

[widdelprumpf]

I love you JC=) that song is so beautiful

[lilbits]

Very nice. Lovely song.

[naruschika]

i must say. you remind me very much of Lifehouse

you're an amazing singer. ^.^ AND you totally din waste my time. consider yourself as havinga new suscriber=P

[SportzStar16]

it's ok- 3 star

[louiseappelquist]

Try not to swallow the words :)

beautyful song, just try to get the words out a LITTLE clearer...

Sometimes it sounds a little to much like humming..

Keep up the good work :)

AP

[starRN08]

a song is created either thru personal experiences or another person's story. Mary is just so lucky to have a friend who can put her story into a song and to be sang with emotions. Keep it up JC!

[Kassendra2]

That song is so sweet..but you did have trouble with some of the high notes

[gathitube]

man, you're a veeery good friend. :)

[Merijonna]

this song made me cry I know how your mary feels I have been dealing with something like that for a long while only thing is that he loved me once upon a time. it also touched me bacuse most everyone calls me mary

[jcvanluyn]

just makes me say "so glad I wrote it"...thank you, "mary" tc, JC

[12scolsrud]

wow she is lucky to have you as a friend

[babyruth15]

aww how sweet. great song

[liri1993]

Wow, Love it. lyrics+music both.

x

[PeaChocFru22]

so sweet and im sure it meant a lot to her even though it was uncomfortable =)

[SasoLMisa]

That´s great ...XD I´m a little fan XD but...it´s not as good as at..or on? XD the other songs^^

but you´re voice is beautiful^^

[shygirlfm]

dude you need to work on the high notes. You were off. I can totally picture Simon Cals face. You might have a few nice and smooth ones but really theres lots of rough spots.

[emmaisapumpkin]

Hey I'm Emma formerly known as TokioHotelxx483, This video turned out so well! Happy Holidays!

Forever Love,

~Emma xx

[BobAcoustic]

Great lyrics, but I agree with "docrivs" that the key was a little too high for your range.

Just drop that capo a couple frets, and you'll surely be able to hit all the hgh notes that you struggled to reach.

[fueledbyfiorenza]

great!

[RotBlume01]

wow it's amazing! Bye. Kiss=*

[ashherzXferreal]

aww..that was beautiful. i don't know about any of you other girls but if i were Mary, this song would have made me cry, not because i was sad, but because it was so beautiful! [:

[yk168]

dude this is amazing man guitar is great keep it up mate

[docrivs]

this key seems a little high for you, but the vocal melody and all the little nuances you create with your voice are really good. you've also got good fingerpicking skills. i would probably play a different guitar soundscape under your vocals, but it does suit your style. good tune. good musicianship. good lyrics. keep them vids coming!~docrivs

[middlex49]

sorry I forgot the had between the I and chicks

[middlex49]

awsome song,I understand what you mean,I chicks cry right in front of me and I had to make it stop or make her feel better.

[SARAHH213]

aww man, this song really hit home. Good job. Great guitar skills, man.

[MalamuteBewondert]

Very peacefull and ofcourse beautifull!

Greets

[artistorwitch]

Wow... amazing.

I love the song.

Wonderful job.

[JepasJen]

you're so sweet and nice^^

[BorgaJesse]

Sing it with a voice u can handle insted =C

[BorgaJesse]

:S....

[ceciliadanell]

Hi! Thanks for the mail :) You're good! Couldn't find the Johnny cash song you were talking about, but yeah Cash is great!

[aaliyahfan077]

this is so beautiful. i love your talent!!!

[Felix1085]

Beautiful. You have talent, you only need a little more polish. Never stop following your dreams.

5 stars.

[menanatwo]

i love kaiser,love the music,your songs are really good..

[Anewashere]

What a cute song!

[experbtalents]

Great.5*.keep it up!@Joon W.

[tg2420]

hi sweety what a sweet song

[tunafishcasserole]

this vid is fucking horrible lmao

[gothi6]

wow i think that was amazing who agrees with me! :)

[mdillybar]

thats such a sweet song. i'm in mary's situation too and i thought this song was so sweet <3.

[SexyGoddess426]

Very pretty song. I like it. your voice kinda reminds me of John Mayer. your very talented, i'm jealous of your ability to write songs. I tried to write my first one, but i don't know the basic structure of songwriting..? anyways, keep it up!

[reallyharried]

Your lyrics, strum, melody and feeling are all wonderful. You already know hundreds of folks love your song and your performance. Your voice has a beautiful timbre, too. As others have said, you're rather pitchy in your upper register. I don't agree with those that said you should pitch the song lower or that you should only sing in your lower register. You should have that upper range and be able to use it just fine; it would be beautiful with the right placement and breath control.

[mjecpa]

Hey brother, you are quite good. Very passionate delivery, and great lyrics. I recommend you to post the lyrics in the description of the video, so we can sing along!

Try some Robert Johnson or other blues performer, and I also have some requests, two of my favorites: When a Blind Man Cries of Deep Purple and Since I've Been Loving you of Led Zeppelin.

[dramaqueen40061]

This song speaks to me becuase me and Mary have very similar experiances... Any way amazing song! Keep up the good work.:)

[willb48]

An affecting performance. The lyrics are outstanding. The vocal near-misses at certain notes contribute to the effect - dissonance, after all, is a virtue in this mood.

Kudos.

[nojmit24]

who's that sexy girl at 1:22???

hahaha

[Jenavee26]

Hmm...

Hit the notes precisely.

I hate to sound technical right now, but I have to say; you have a lot of unsure and unstable notes here, that it gets in the way of me feeling the song. Sorry, but I guess that's it for now.

[iamnotchanging]

love the lyrics decent singing too!

[jbook2]

a bob dylan song i've been seeking..... dont knowthe name.... the story... mom, telling her son to be a part off the system.... he goes to war... mom relized what she has asked of her son.... he is delivered in a body bag... she crys.....good song......

[georgejtez]

song is "John Brown"

[Eaeminem]

your not really hitting the highnotes but the text is good

[Cinyara]

★geart song i love it keep on singin★

[annmac50]

You have passion talk to me annmac.I teach vocals you are so smart babe take care annmac

[ilolome98]

hehe love the smile and wow this was amazingly good! non the less from u!!

[Viximosh]

Beautiful song.really lovely but you do nd 2 wrk on da singin in parts.

[sglgirl1]

★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★  thats how many stars this song is worth

[sglgirl1]

omg i really like this song

[jcvanluyn]

urjust2kind=)

[endofthesong]

i love the fact that your voice has a very "jason wade" from lifehouse quality to it. i think you should work on your higher pitched chords though. they are a little shaky. but other than that, i really like this. to think that you actually wrote it on your own! good job :).

[nicoleassaf]

wow!! is one of these girls mary???

[IWMV]

wow!

ich think it´s a beautifull song!!!

you sing very well :)

mach weiter sooooo!!!! =)

[jcvanluyn]

hehe...nice deutsch!

[rory00o]

great

[sockmonki12]

i like it :)

[HansLo107]

Really amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

[imasporkandproud]

that is a really beautiful song amazing but as much as i loved it and i really did (it made me smile too i know that feeling as well) there where points on the higher notes when you sounded a bit out of tune sorry but i thought you might want feedback otherwise it is one of the best song tunes and lyrics that i have ever heard it was amazing emz xxx

[screama]

nice song man.,.,

[bellezzagrodolce]

Constructive criticism: Your higher range needs some work, but this song is very pretty, a good message.

[cleversmynamee]

beautiful song. you have a really good voice but the high notes came out weird.

[xxpheonixrose]

you have an amazing voice, though one comment the scooping on the high notes, and try to improve your voice because the higher notes sound wierd

[cleversmynamee]

yeah thats what i thought too.

[animefan4lyphe]

its a nice song, you have a cool voice and the lyrics r nice

[Dreammaze]

very talented! Really!

[ovan1099]

that was beautiful

[JapanAlex01]

your mouth kinda freaks me out a bit! lol sorry 8-) but the song is quite good! i guess any critism would be that you were off key a few times (you have a very unique/great voice! btw) but you shouldnt sing those high notes 1. you cant really do it well, and 2. the song is too obvious and templatish with those notes - try changing them to a lower note - not one specifically in that key - a strange note perhaps - a quirky note would defintely make the song sound more original and fresh!

[d4068561]

sorry but to me you sound out of tune and you mumble at times..... but good song and good voice.

keep it up and you'll get there ^_^

[hottpinay808]

are u philipino?? ang cute mo kasi ei..jejeje

[Temari34]

Not bad^^

But tell me, warum sollte ich Deutsch lernen, wenn ich es schon kann, weil ich ja aus diesen netten land komme??? also deine nachricht hat mich ein wenig verwirrt um ehrlich zusein...vorallem das mit tokio hotel...ich hasse tokio hotel....

aber ich find dein lied nicht schlecht ausbau fähig :D

[Mari7amri6]

This song has so much potential and great job with lyrics and music!

..suggestion, try this in a lower the key, step or two, helps with your voice not to strain and with note. And you get ofcourse more power in your voice - not that it always has to have it, but it works. For this song is really great! Dang, you really have talent!! Keep up the good work, keep rocking!

[TokioHotelJenta]

YEAH!!

You rock..xD

[Nikki91950]

lol. i'm confused. the pictures threw me off, but it's a pretty song.

[xMleen]

Wow amazing.. <3

[bradx92]

How come?

[QueenLucyThe2nd]

;__; I've had this happen to me; loving someone who didn't love me in return. But I didn't have another guy to cry on ._. I DID have my best friend though. She bought me a giant bar of chocolate ;)

You did a great job on this though ^^ I think es ist sehr wunderschoen and sweet

[mmervinster28]

my name is mary, and this has happened to me :(

not the crying in front of a guy part though...

good job! :)

[NJJmylove]

whoa! this is amazing! i love it! 5/5

[Skkae]

It became sharp at some parts, but overall - it was amazing.

Such a deep and meaningful song, I could feel the emotion in your voice.

Keep on rocking. <3

[gobannas121]

oh my goodness you have a lot of talent you need to show it too alll of the world ! C :

[babypasion]

aww it deefinetly made me smile lol

[RitchieV123]

well i finally checked your e-mail. sorry for the longest latest reply for you most recent video. i think this song is very meaningful and it put's a smile on people's face to whoever listens to it. awesome job

keep em' coming

^_^

5 stars

[Opdepiano]

this is good, the one from Leona Lewis made me wonder if you could sing/ guitar, but this aint that bad mate

[tiiazh]

this is real cute song.. :)

[guddi92]

it is awesome! She must me happy to have you to stand by her :) im from iceland and i know a girl from germany she is here in school and her name is mary but it not the same girl you maked the song for.... this song is good i have tears in my eyes... :) keep it up! ;D

[nadeboy7]

sweet action dude. 5*****!!!

[BladJoe1950]

Awesome and amazing!!!

[rollingstonedreams]

Very good song writing. Can You send me the Tokio Hotel video?I've been subbed to you for along time on 2 of my channels.Very good music

[BloodyKisses30]

its sooo sweet

[3instrument]

Great one!

[imnotkorean]

your voice is awesome!

[Natasha3355]

you are great!

[jay3213]

If we live near eachother we should jam together.

All im gunna say is i live in ontario canada

(born longisland NY)

[BloodyKisses30]

u rok u live in canada im in alberta ^^

[mateoofccd]

negative comment... jk

[irishghetto]

What a great friend you are to be there in

your friend's time of need. Keep up the

good work!!!!!

[widdelprumpf]

Beautiful...i love you^^

[THEREDNECKPEPI64]

Cool!!!

*****

PEPI

[dabigfield617]

nice!

[mike6522]

not bad good job!

[PrincessKniki]

great song hunni as always brought a smile to my face to hear you sing xxx

[05morses]

made me smile :)

[dusia17]

great song:D it realy make my smile:D

[koham666]

great!

[facesonfire13]

thank you for the song. it was a lil off key i'll say but other than that it was very good :)

[lilbranadian]

The song is really, really nice...

The lyrics are amazing, melody!

That was amazing!

Just a little thing...

You don't need to go that high sometimes, cause it sounds a little bit off.

It can brings your whole work down, you know?

But it was fantastic!

[ldyxblaze]

i like it when you play the guitar. yea thats all lol

[meza321]

i listen to this song to much my friend. :D

[spiderchic45]

you didn't disappoint me

i HART YOU and your wonderful voice

:D

[imjustday09]

i love the song

and lyrics

yer voice changes alot though

but it was great

[soinshock]

Thanx 4 sending the video my way.

The words carry great meaning but your voice is changing still and you are in great need of singing lessons esp. to learn to pull from your diaphram not your throat. Also, a sound proff room will help with sounding like you are in an empty room. Cardboard and egg cartons is a cheap way to start. Try harder as you gave us great stuff before and we know you can do it ! Put your all into it !

Again, nice meaningful song, vocals need strengthening, go for it !

[MunLife]

a little bit off key on the high notes. but other than that, u're great :)

[feralchains]

this song is really beautifull, its got a hopefull quality to it... once again you don't dissapoint :)

[filly8oado]

to be honest, you a lil off key when you try and hit the high notes. Try tuning down to half step. But thanks for sending the video.

[mayparis]

thank you for the song) it is beautiful:)

[tashasherry]

That was really nice!

[Christieluv2209]

hey old friend thanks for sending the song to me. your an amazing song writer and you get even better with everything you do.

[animelover1992]

T_T that is sooo wonder ful

aaah! i love u ^^'

[lauriniababe]

that's amazing really nice

the lyrics touched my heart!

wow!!

damn it that goes really deep

its so cute video

everything perfect

and i am honestly!!!

greets from germany

[justherewatching]

very good.roeleke sent.keep singing you wiil be Blessed.mary

[katypig123]

ur a really good singer and very cute ;)

x-x-x

[chetkawrath]

hihi.whats ur nationality? :]]

[gtq838]

hey I'm glad I found this video again... I just listened to a couple of your other videos and you can sing... please rerecord this... I like the ideas it presents but (and I'm not trying to be rude I like you) the vocals just suck. whatever you did in the other videos don't change it... or change the melody line to something in your range...

I rate 5 stars despite this because I like the other vids... keep up the good work...

[worldonfire22]

you have a beautiful voice :)

[jcvanluyn]

aww shux=)

[chetkawrath]

lurve it. kisses for u! :]]

[jcvanluyn]

ilikekisses...=) girls only though XD

[sydvids1395]

i love u! ur truley amazing!! (:

[jcvanluyn]

*thank you smile*

[powerpuff182]

thank you for sending this, its beautiful! (L) it made me smile xo

[jcvanluyn]

so glad it did =)

[SariiihW]

So, if I only have to say something to the voice, i will say it wasn't the best.

But inside of my heart I feel the song and I think that this feelings going under my skin, are important. Go on practise, and find your way in music. But don't stop playing the guitar, because this was really beautiful and sweet.

I loved it<3

(:

[jcvanluyn]

ihartU=)

[amarantaluisa]

great!

[sasukebabe003]

I love!

[TurtlesRule4Ever]

what a good song! it made me cry!

[jcvanluyn]

*hands you tissue* =)

[jdstorms]

very nice!