IELTS Argument Essay Writing 1 (4 of 4)

[pony0710]

You are an excellent teacher. You are doing a great job. I've benefited a lot from your IELTS writing strategies. However, it is better (will definitely earn us higher marks) that if you could include more advanced English sentence structures in your writing...kind of embellish it. Thank you so much anyways! I highly recommend this video. (Thumbs up!) Hope you can upload more and more videos similar to this one, hopefully with more advanced English sentence structures. Thank you :)

[Salsa566]

Thanks Ryan. The greatest lesson I have ever had. Thanks and Happy New Year!

[basithq]

What is "analyzation"?

[rcaneful]

fell in love with his voice....

[WatsInDaName]

It's funny how a computerized teacher disagreed the idea discussed in this video. Lol! Jokes apart, for this video I Liked, bookmarked and shared.

It's been more than 3 years since I took the IELTS exam. I am sitting for my next on 3rd December. Please wish me luck. And, thanks a lot for informative posts.

P.S: This is the first and only channel I ever subscribed on YouTube. Thanks a lot Ryan

Cheers!

[rajat2571]

mind-blowing teaching by you,RYAN. this is of great help for the poor ielts aspirants. long-live ryan,you are an ANGEL.

[jatinderbhatia86]

thank you very much ryan.you probably may not be aware how much good work you are doing. i got 7 bands in writing just by following your guidelines .thanks for work again .

[SuperPelinpelin]

Ryhan I like your all video which are related to ielts. They are really sucessful such as your accent is understandable, strategies are really efficient. I took the ielts exam 4 times but I never have got 6.5 overall bands. İn particular my writing 5.5-5.0. And I think these videos should be beneficial to learn the wrting style. Thanks very much.

[leoralphv]

motivation and discipline are key? or should be are keys ...

[leo1907]

Very nice video Ryan!!...I understand it very well. Thanks for helping students who really need this kind of instruction!!.....greetings!!

[kyahato]

hey you did not write any positive points about technology teaching.....

[francistwo]

Thank you a lot ,your tips are the best !!!!!! my exam is within 2 weeks and I hope well , by the way today is my birthday happy birth day to me lool :) .

[simon1430]

You only disagreed because you know if technology replaced actual teachers you will lose your job xP

I was joking, but thanks for the tips, they are very valuable. My exam is tomorrow. So afraid :(

[EnglishRyan]

@simon1430 My secret is out. Good luck tomorrow. :)

[drincubus74]

thank you this is really helpful, i am having a test in 2 1/2 weeks, its already improve my writing skill eventhough i just notice this channel an hour ago.

thank you

[MsTRINITAS]

clear.concise and engineering like teaching style.The cutting into pieces is somewhat like that of an engineer's way of solving a problem.

[natashiamidori]

no i took the test in indonesia , hahaha ,well i hope the examiner will kindly consider the mark, eventho i think it is quite impossible :(, but yah ...,hahah so frustrated....,

[natashiamidori]

hopfully this tutorial can help me pass the ielts test..., haaah im so nervous, wish me luck for tomorrow ryan!

[EnglishRyan]

@natashiamidori I will be thinking of you tomorrow. Good luck!

[natashiamidori]

@EnglishRyan , i sent u an email ,hahahah its about my ielts test ryan T_T... hopfully u can help me, im waiting for your reply ,thaannkk :)

[EnglishRyan]

@natashiamidori Hi Natashi,

Yes, I received your email. Sorry to hear you feel it didn't go well, but thank you for letting me know the Task 2 question you received. Did you take the exam in Australia, by chance? I had another student email me about 3 days ago who had taken the exam in Melbourne and received the exact same question you did!

Stay positive! I'm sure your performance is not nearly as bad as you think.

[nadine2323]

more video plss.. can you check essay..tnxs

[EnglishRyan]

@nadine2323 Yes, I can. Please contact me by email for more info.

[vastav2011]

Thanks a million fr ur perfect guidance ....

[EnglishRyan]

@vastav2011 My pleasure. Thank you for the comment.

[amroshami1]

More then excellent. I really got too much benefit from your easy, valuable way i n but .handlind an essay

[EnglishRyan]

@amroshami1 Thank you for your comment.

[alagheh]

hey, r u sure the writer is a native? he has mistakes and he is too slow at writing.

[RoseanYoksi]

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[rashmishrestha24]

thank you Ryan very much for the great and helpful video.

[AlexHawn5]

awesome!

[mxtrang79]

Ryan!

I like the procedure you guide to the learners, however, it still lacks some techniques of using vocabulary. And, is it a mistake of 'ANALIZATION'? I never heard it, and I did check dictionary :)

Anyway, what I felt about IELTS is OVER requirement for international students somehow. I believe that native speaker students can't do it well like it is required for international ones. And for non-native English teachers, they have to achieve 9.0 to work in British Council.You think native can?

[Tioskis]

You are my hero! :-D

[sameerkhnl1]

i've been told that in these questions one has to present both arguments for and against the given topic. But your essay deals with only one side of it. Also i want to ask whether we can present more than one idea in a single par. I was wondering why u excluded the third arguing point

[anna34652]

Thank you very much for the upload. This is the only Essay Writing Instructions I can understand in a very simple way. I will be taking an exam in a month and I am very confident this will be very helpful to me.

[abadlopez09]

Thank you very much.

[TheMirigama]

This is excellent. I typed it as note for further use in my class. Thanks for your kind attempt. Best Wishes! God Bless you  and all behind the curtain!

[exgeneral0542]

thank you for the upload

[pring17pring]

This part of IELTS exam takes 40 minutes to be finished, and I really like this tutorial very much. You were able to assist us, your viewers to have the full knowledge on writing with just a length of time. Thank you very much sir. ;-) [I'll be taking an IELTS exam next week.]

[bravoawan]

Mr Ryan, i really like your structure it made very easy to fill up words requirements what we need. Can you please help me with following questions.

1: Conclusion in each paragraph and conclusion at the end, Does it make more sentences for conclusion than required in essay?

2: Essay that should contain around 250 words, how many supporting paragraph we should have in it?

3: Does same style work for General as well as Academic writing?

Thank you for your efforts to help student around the world

[aamahkl]

you are verrrry verrrrry GooD teacher thank you sooo much !!!

[highang]

omg u are my hero lols

thank

[binny7007]

Hi, EnglishRyan.........your videos and way of delivering the language is Awesome. it seems like someone is teaching you directly by sitting at front of you. Really appreciate your work. Keep it up and thanks.

[ajsagi180]

Mr.Ryan i really appreciate your work, my sincere thanks to you........cheers

[gunjeetsingh]

good job mang....ye yee.

[jologs21]

thank you...

[Latenritemmu]

Thanks Ryan!!!!!

[sunitej]

thanx!Mr.Ryan.its a great help and have you post any task one video.i tried to search but i could not found.

again thanks.

[LPYUAN3721]

Thanks a lot ~~I ^ ^

[saimawaheed07]

Excellent video. Every thing is very much clear for writing an essay.

[goldman3031]

As a result of your video which is about how to write an argument essay, I became more familiar with writing and understanding how to write like such paragraphs. For that, I would be very thankful if you can accept my very simple gift which is 5 stars to encourage you to keep doing the good job!

I hope this paragraph is acceptable :)

[mj23cle]

Thanks Mr. Ryan your lesson about argument essay is really helpful for me in preparation for my IELTS exam... hope I did well, about to find out today what my score is...

Thanks so much!! really appreciate your videos... -mj

[nelsonmiaarenas]

Thank you Ryan you are big help. please keep posting

[themachinegunn]

is it clear that technology will never take over? how do you know? can you see into the future?

[lobmattsin]

lol,didn't you read the support paragraph, this is just his conception regarding the answer

[Zwairyz]

i think you too often reapeat same words. You should use synonyms instead. However, I am really grateful for your tutorial, as it is definitely helpful and made me more self confident. I am really nervous, because I am sitting IELTS TOMORROW :/

[detzkie79]

how was your exam?

[themachinegunn]

what a reapeater huh?

[Harikrishnalove]

The real problem I have writing in English language is the terrible anti- Latin racism California have, particularly in Northern California and more specifically in San Francisco State University. They lucky that Latinos are peaceful and never tried to became living-bombs under any pressure and humiliation. Good for us!

[Harikrishnalove]

I am not affraid to tell everyone that I failed three times the CBEST, although I passed Math since the firts try. However, I am going to do it for the fourth time in October using Ryan's advise. Wish me luck everybody!

[saam50]

gud

[shimixkonoxrinxazn]

It looks so easy to do it, Mr. Ryan but with the undertime pressure, I don't think I can do it. Anyway, may God give me more confidence and wisdom.-Dalisay

[nickolasyt]

so, this kind of essay you presented is enough for a student to get very high marks? or just an average example? i think it just a guideline.

[sina6002]

Thank you so much.

 It was very helpful to me...

Cheers

[znklony]

thank u very much ryan.. it's very helpful ..

and i have exam on 13 augest i wish to do well ..

thx agine

[mailtaran]

what is the the result of your exam pls reply

[devviindah1]

....superb Mr Ryan...

[firefightt]

thank you

[scalope87]

Wonderfull videos, very informative, can we use the same format for when taking the CBEST( california basic educational skills test.

Please Help I have my test June 13

Thank you

[abc202020202020]

Actually, English is not my native language, for that cause, I have thought that it is very hard to write anything in English, specially for IELTS writing module. But now, really ,really and really my thinking has changed because I have got confidence for writing. and that was possible only for Mr. Ryan. and I think he has done a great job for all IELTS candidates.  a lot of thanks

[dodochicky]

should there be counter argument involved in the essay?

[jsantoyoc]

thank you Ryan for these effective and actually useful online essay writing footages...

Cheers

[blaenko]

All of Ryan's IELTS videos are a great help for candidates preparing and taking the test. The clear and simple structures he proposes are perfectly suited for organizing one's thoughts and writing even under time pressure... Answering some sample essay questions at home is of course a very useful component to watching the videos. Anyways, thank you Ryan!

[DavideAlbanese]

5 stars!

[kabanisamir]

Hi ryan, thts realy helpful for IELTS student .........nice work. I realy appreciate it thnXXXX

[venussteffi]

hi ryan, thanks for the infos, most appreciated, well, am taking my ielts next month and am afraid i cant make it. am most hard up on writing but hopefully i could remember all ur strategies.GOd Bless. by the way, do u have any tips on reading and listening too? thanks

[fosterd27]

your videos are hepful but I have to write a 1000 word aurgument essay on whether or not the drinking age in America should be lowered.

[EnglishRyan]

Did your instructor give you an essay format to follow? If not, follow the argument essay format I provide in these videos and write 4-5 supporting paragraphs.  You'll be fine...

Good luck!

[tatarrinho]

Thanks a lot!

You have been helping me quite a lot!

Great job! Thanks!

[dilerzangana]

Thank you so much for all your videos, please keep up the good work....

[mahit24]

hi ryan this information is really helpfful for me as others .we all appriciate your work.great job thnx a lotttt

[manoj0072006]

I have one question for Mr.Ryan and it is "aren't you suppose to write counter argument in the 2 or third paragraph."

[EnglishRyan]

Hi manoj0072006

Please see my other videos on writing a discussion style essay.

Thanks

Ryan

[Corekoshe]

Honestly, it is an excelent resource for teaching and even for myself as an English Teacher also (soon to be sitting the IELTS). Simple and accurate. I had studied composition but lost my writing practice, this was exactly what I was looking for, thanks a lot for this, it's been extraordinarily helpful!

[A2theSamad]

thank's  agin... I realy appreciate it.

[baipc1983]

Thank you very much.

[iris2673]

Thanks a lot!It's very informative.Great job Ryan.

[nillapara02]

Thanks Ryan....your videos have helped me a lot with essay writings...good work

[mhyteddy]

your so Smart..very helpful to us who will be taking Ielts exam thanks so much..

[EnglishRyan]

Thank you!

[elborjeljadid]

Thanks very much for your efforts ,i really appreciate it .

[sevencolor2008]

Thank you very much.

[usamuchi]

Your presentation makes writing essays seem easy. The key to this as you pointed is being systematic. I will try to apply this on all my practice essays .

Thank you for your wonderful efforts in helping us to achieve success

[zzzmmmddd]

i wanted to know how many supporting paragraphs are usually required in an essay.

thank you!

[yizhihenanjing]

.Oh, ít's my pleasure to meet you. I've watched about 12 videos of yours . They're really helpful and indeed save my life, lol. Thanks a billion for your hard work . I'm looking forward to watching more of your videos in the future . Why don't you shoot one regarding writing IELTS task 1- the graph ?? I would be much obliged to you . Have a nice day ! ^^

[kakosuranosx]

Hey Ryan!

Thank you so much for the online lessons here in youtube. They are really excelent and useful to me. I think you explain Writting very well. We are very lucky to have excelent English teachers such as you and Jennifer ESL to explain many topics of English Language to us.

Best wishes.

[EnglishRyan]

Thanks!

[babieeamy]

ohh my, you are an awesome teacher and now i can do my essay with no problems than you so much

[usher1111111]

THANK YOU , VERY HELPFUL VIDEO

[EnglishRyan]

It's my pleasure. Thanks for the comment.

[PinkythePiggy]

IT'S SO HELPFUL!!!

Your videos do save me!!!

BTW, do you have any tutorial videos on Account Essay?

Thank you so so much!

[andreskandich]

Great this Argument Essay will help me a lot, believe me , thank now I feel more clear, thank Ryan.

[ssyxwzwf]

very useful.