Just Looking - Monologue

[thedarrellsmithjr]

lol Acting- "baby i do want a relationship please lets work this outtt...(starting to cry) i want this to work babe jus give us one more chance" lol jus a little line i would respond baxk 2 u with lol

[AtLastOnTheGround]

Your acting is too polite. As the wonderful acting teacher Sanford Meisner once said, "Fuck polite!"

For a monologue like this, you need an emotional preparation that puts you in the same mindset as your character would be here.

Also, the acting is too conversational. It's good to look for truthful delivery, but don't try to make it sound "naturalistic."

[ledes91]

It's really good, i liked how you changed the words! it gave it a teen feeling =)

[Osteomorphis]

That seemed so real it scared me.

[Classy50sGal]

thank u! you dont know how much that means to me

well, minus the scared part lol

don't worry it was fake haha

[JONASfanticxoxoxo]

that was soso good!!!!!!

[EccentricPuzzle]

o_o that was pretty good.

[iseelimegreenpeople]

Needs more emotion but good idea of how to use the text of the monologue! :D Keep working on it

[justguessmyname]

good!