Welcome to Hell Chap. 10

[jennyoj]

wowerzz go jennifer !!!!!!!!!!

[yaytotallyfunkykiwiG]

omg the bit with the question was so clever i read it like three times because it was so well-written

[redonculouisnjlvr96]

awsome that is how you beat a bitches ass!

nicely done jen!!!!

[ChinchillaNecks]

Hey. Come read my Jonas Brothers love story. It's called You and I. I so far only have one chapter but I want people to go read them. :] Thanks.

[danitichenor97]

LOL THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!!!

p.s.I know I am late on reading the series but my dad took my internet away for a while and I haven't benn able to read

xoxoDanitichenor97xoxo

[shelsyluvsnickjonas]

wow im spechless nice chapter

[flutegirl1995]

ha jessie's probly just like ummm does this mean we arent stopin at mc donalds por kid

[flutegirl1995]

wait did tanya say she wouldnt be surprised if jessie WASN'T a man hore, isn't that good? wait does she mean like gay or sometin. last time i check not bein nick(in this story) is a good thing lqtm

[flutegirl1995]

oh nice shes usin miss no it all to tell nick bout wat he did. ha i knew this wood hapen ha. yep.

[JoeJonasLuver98474]

i wish u would post on this!!! i love this story!

[JBlover1122]

whoa. i am listening to welcome to my life by simple plan and it totally fit this chapter.

[iluvdogs1212]

moreeeee!!!!!!!

[787blueheart787]

more please and o man that is what i wanted to this bitch danesha at the dance last night when she slapped my friend

[caseadilla222]

woahhhh!

make the next one as soon as possible

[spidergirl41]

post post post! omg nicks a father and he cheated on jen!

[Ciinderellla]

OMJ! I'm sooooooo SUSCRIBING!!!

[NickJCarzy50]

hehehe thanks! =) and Im posting tomorrow on this story =)

[haileyps]

LUVV ITT! When are you posting again?

[NickJCarzy50]

tomorrow

[J3SSiKiiNSx3]

when r u posting again?

[NickJCarzy50]

um, this WAS on hold but I should be posting this either tomorrow or Wed.

[erin2062514]

well it's friday now so post!!!!!!

[NickJCarzy50]

no...saturday...sorry but one more day..

[arnticute95]

you know YOU SUCK! URG! GOSH PERSON!! hahah i should hunt you down for making us wait! but i wont because then no episodes would come out!

[oxTheJonasBrothersxo]

wow... cant wait for more!

[dynamitesgirl]

Ur story is awsome!!!!! I am so bored and the worst part is that tommorow i have no school which is good but i have 2 dig through garbage thanxs 2 my soccer coach when i should be practing 4 my schools volleyball team:(

[NickJCarzy50]

eww, yikes! =/ that stinks literally lol

[jamers0125]

ooh nick found out

[SKATERgirl0x]

rough day.  yea, that explains it aha

[HugsROveratedJustFYI]

OMJ Wow I loved it! You have to like post more!!! I REALLY love your stories!!! :D

[NickJCarzy50]

not tonight i got too much to do

[om6114]

Wowweee! (:

[xXxBeMineJoeJonasxXx]

wow harsh chapter so whens the next one????

[NickJCarzy50]

sometime tonight! =)

[dancergirl4797]

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­o

[NickJCarzy50]

heyy whats up?

[dancergirl4797]

not too much you?

[angelicalyluvsblu]

loved it!!!!

[Allygator64]

GASP! I'm thirsty... brb... Ok now to finish my comment! Wow! that was a very revealing chapter!

[o0Jonas0o]

omg. seriously. post. more. NOW.

[NickJCarzy50]

i will soon

[beachlovinjonasfan]

whao!! that was great!! i wonder what nick will say to jen about being the father?!?

[atombex13]

Oooooooo This Is Getting Realy Goood :D

Write More Soon (:

[icanwritestories11]

tanya is mean!!!!! haha i bet nick crapped his pants when she said that

[depplove23]

awesome i wonder what nick will do..omg i know know

he will be the perfect gentleman and father and wont be an ass anymore...am i right? huh? huh? huh?

lol i know im crazy but what can ya do?

nothing.

ha ha ha

[becool1344]

i loved it!

[50675]

please post more!!!

[spaceofme15]

wow good one

[jfreehill]

good.

[crazynjonasluver293]

LOVE THE STORY

[JonasLove916]

Loved it!! Nick needs to go after her!! Stupid Tanya lol. She doesn't know everything ha =P Post the next one soon please =)

[mrsnickjonas092294]

Luv it!!! Post more?????Plz"?!?!?!?!?!!

[parkety777]

yeah Nick should probably go after her!!!!

[ParamorexFreak]

awesome!

[mileyfanatic10]

Wow. That was good! :D

[heartdajonasbrothers]

omg! wow! i cant wait for the next one

[poisonlove17]

awesome chapter

can't wait for more

[LoveeeJonas]

omg this was good =] love it

[JonasStories]

awesome