RSMV Alone (Unfinished)

[TatixM1]

man, whats that effect that u always use forthe vids, i just cant find it on mine..plz respond

[yaymyshow]

@TatixM1 Can you be more precise please?

[TatixM1]

@yaymyshow like the video gets all blury and red with black and it shakes

[yaymyshow]

@TatixM1 What time?

[TatixM1]

@yaymyshow @1:21

[Run3Scap3M3rching]

Remarkable! I myself am making a rsmv, and i'm wondering how you made those quick flashes at 1:11.

[DRAGONESpwn]

I like the plot. I'd continue with it.

[pl0xy1]

better than bounceh O_O.

[ibfoisdjfisuaef]

Sorry,but ur another recent vids r better !..

[yaymyshow]

@ibfoisdjfisuaef Piano? If so, I'll continue that on a different youtube account. If not, hence the description.

[zohaib194]

@yaymyshow yeah make piano videos playing rebbecca black - friday or justin bieber - baby :D

[RSBounceLegend]

Aww it's unfinished :c still soo awesome though (:

[uglypuuure]

Sexy.

[yaymyshow]

@RhobinaHood that's about how long ago I stopped continuing this video...I really didn't think I did a good job on it.

[zPoinTBlanK]

@yaymyshow ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! CONTINUE THIS VIDEO IS FKN AMAZING!!! Rated 1000/5 and liked.

[FatalFartz]

Epicz

[Matixpuls3]

Pretty damn awesome, man.

[The45Quests]

I like the subtitles at the bottom of the screen, much easier to see. I like it for what you got done Ervin ;P hehe.

[lilshortysgs]

whos this by :O

[Slaskern]

I liked it, buttt i didnt understand the story line simply because it was a bit too over editted, so maybe try to vary between your actually lines in the songs, where your editting fits perfect, and a more calm editting for the story line parts?

[yaymyshow]

@Slaskern It's unfinished therefore, storyline being unfinished.

[Slaskern]

@yaymyshow Im also just refearing to the story line thats there, its hard to see whats even going on. its just my opinion

[yaymyshow]

@Slaskern Big part was cut off because I didn't have the recording in the beginning so they will be no surprise in not knowing what exactly is happening.

[L33tSkyProductions]

i cant even forget this one

[FasterxLouder]

i love the intro :)

[Jmjweightman]

seriously amazing :L this is one of the best previews i've seen all year :'] honestly finnish this or i will have to rape you :o

[Commander445]

i like the bits with me in it...

[TlPkTl]

Hawt RSMV.

[rsmvist]

good job :)

[Tomigun1001]

Great, keep up the good work :'D

[TheDamikey]

Ervin, You did some creative things but wasn't this supposed to be a RSMV with a storyline? Too bad you didn't finish it mate. Enjoyed it though. But you could have done a better job ;]

-Mikey

[yaymyshow]

@TheDamikey Hence the description ;].

[TheDamikey]

@yaymyshow Meh, Dont laugh with my reading problem! :[

[Scarybagvids]

I got a seizure reading the seizure warning :S

[yaymyshow]

@Scarybagvids Your eyes are fucked up then LOL.

[TheDeathTwo]

Like drugs for my eyes! Featured-

[edgaraszxxx]

its fkin epic there is no way to improve

[BeforeHerEyes]

HOLY CRAP. :D

THAT WAS SO GOOD.

[IMAHOBO2]

like always ervin, ur progressing to become a great editor.

[yaymyshow]

@IMAHOBO2 Although this one was disappointing for me ;P

[IMAHOBO2]

@yaymyshow well it looks different in the eyes of someone who isn't you :)

[yaymyshow]

@IMAHOBO2 A man with wise words ^^.

[TheBaranonBrothers]

I think you should have remover the min and max from 2:05 - 2:10. Other than that it was epic. :)

[yaymyshow]

@TheBaranonBrothers Reduce the strength of an effect to make the video more clear e.g. min - max?

[rsp0wer]

@yaymyshow the white contrast was very pure do a small shade with it not just do it brighter =/

[yaymyshow]

@rsp0wer Ahh yes I know what you mean. Thanks.

[therunedude788]

Another really great video for your awesome collection :DD really awesome. You are really the RSMV god.

[RmppProductions]

How can you improve?

#1: Do not rely as much on stock footage and Newblue.

#2: Less Overlays.

That's about it..it'd be perfect if you switched those up.

[yaymyshow]

@RmppProductions I barely used stock footage and newblue as well, but I'll try to minimise the amount of overlays used.

[sorakekairi]

Nicee :DD

[saradominkiller]

I wonder, how can you improve this ? let's see:

BFMV + this vid = epic win

OMG YOU CAN'T :O

[rsp0wer]

Remove all that whiteness :s

[yaymyshow]

@rsp0wer Could you be more precise please?

[GustemLt]

HOT.

[Kepitsecret]

wow :o

[bilic15]

amazing :D.

[tom123401]

nice! much flashes xd :p

[L33tSkyProductions]

This is fucking epic omg

[AhWei1996]

you don't really need improvements imo, it's already very epic.

[valdagalLOL]

Nicely done c:

[yaymyshow]

As I was unhappy with this video, I'd like to ask the people commenting to do me a favour as to what should have been changed for improve the video - please don't comment about the 'quality' of the video as an improvement, I will take notes and possibly take action with my future RSMV. Thanks.

~Ervin

[TheSouliG]

nice man, pitty for the quality thou.

[zohaib194]

cool ;D

[Runescape01Sara]

Wow...This is seriously awesome dude! Keep it up! :)

[Realinaa]

Nice Ervin!

[skykeiron]

epic

[Yrezifity]

Very nice! :)

[bugsenbunny]

nice but gotta refresh becus of 240p :P