Actually I know of many excellent writers that have a very hesitant way of speaking like 'um-ing' out their thoughts. I guess when you spend your days deciding what words to put to paper, which sentence paths to choose, then speaking becomes more complex, as you have uncovered the underlying complexities, that you ignored and sated through blissfully ignorant, when you had your blinders still attached.
There were 27 uhs or ums in that video and it wasn't even 2 minutes long! Making a video is like writing! Edit! Edit! And edit again!
Besides that rather glaring error, this was a semi-informative piece. However, I would like to see a video that had more unusual tips. Because, somehow, I feel like I've heard all of this before...
five basic truths with non-fiction articles, who what when where how and why,
fiction, art imitates life, if you see a way she looks that resembles something of beauty express it, and keep up with the trends in publishing and create something new out of something old....yahoo hot searches, twitter.com and other sites
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I thought the advice was sound and to the point. The other people who've commented seem to be big critics... though I don't count ONE video submitted on the subject of writing among any of them.
Generic advice and presented poorly. She is not very emphatic about writing and looks extremely drowsy , which leads me to think that she is semi-stoned or burnt-out (in the high sense of the word). Nonetheless, thanks for the post lady!
Actually I know of many excellent writers that have a very hesitant way of speaking like 'um-ing' out their thoughts. I guess when you spend your days deciding what words to put to paper, which sentence paths to choose, then speaking becomes more complex, as you have uncovered the underlying complexities, that you ignored and sated through blissfully ignorant, when you had your blinders still attached.
arnthorla 6 months ago
your voice is too low.
TheTravelfool 7 months ago
um is loud thinking in voice form.That's the sign of unscripted talking ,
you're fine lady,
thanks for tips
tmwst 7 months ago
This is why, um, I love youtube, um, 'cause of stuff like this, um
letrend 8 months ago 5
She may know how to write... but she needs to learn to speak...
Crazedmonckey 9 months ago 4
What is wrong with this video?
bwillwall 10 months ago
There were 27 uhs or ums in that video and it wasn't even 2 minutes long! Making a video is like writing! Edit! Edit! And edit again!
Besides that rather glaring error, this was a semi-informative piece. However, I would like to see a video that had more unusual tips. Because, somehow, I feel like I've heard all of this before...
LilLaTLuv 10 months ago
the teacher of "UMM" Language :D
Oprahsagal 11 months ago 5
24 ummms...
p3rryksy 1 year ago 8
five basic truths with non-fiction articles, who what when where how and why,
fiction, art imitates life, if you see a way she looks that resembles something of beauty express it, and keep up with the trends in publishing and create something new out of something old....yahoo hot searches, twitter.com and other sites
stsaylor29 1 year ago
um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um um ummmmmmmmmmm um um um um um um um um
fountainstein 1 year ago 30
@fountainstein That is so mean (laughing on the floor).
MrZimp09 1 year ago
that was a very long 1 min 49
stupidflounders 1 year ago 2
I thought the advice was sound and to the point. The other people who've commented seem to be big critics... though I don't count ONE video submitted on the subject of writing among any of them.
bradypassant 1 year ago
Generic advice and presented poorly. She is not very emphatic about writing and looks extremely drowsy , which leads me to think that she is semi-stoned or burnt-out (in the high sense of the word). Nonetheless, thanks for the post lady!
TheVeryConfused 1 year ago
you say uhm too much.
SquigglyWigglez 2 years ago
@SquigglyWigglez .. lol. YUP. I hope she doesn't write like she umm umm talks.
Hector2028 1 year ago
I AGREE
selmoonneamt 2 years ago
Honestly. I didn't learn a thing about writing rather than the usual rhetoric. Tell us something we don't know.
Patdisel 2 years ago