i'm really enjoying your delivery for your new songs, and i think it'd be pretty damn impressive if you could update this song since the lyrics are just superb.
DOPE! you got yourself a new subscriber!your helping restore my faith in rap, scince i found this underground youtube thing Ive had sweet rap overload! I like what you rap about in this song, it actually has purpose 5 stars! check my shit if you got the time
just try to keep your flow more regular and your voice steady.
pro:
this is an awesome instrumental. Nujabes is the man.
You are a damn good lyricist. Your patterns are nice, very eloquent, nice rhyming scheme and variations, and overall its very introspective. Infinitely better than any of the crap that's playing on the radio nowadays.
its fucking dope, you have some deep, imaginitive lyrics. i really like it. if there was anything i would say is just work on the flow, make it a little more smooth, keep the voice manipulations u use tho, theyr dope, just work on perfecting your flow and il cop ur album along with many others. period.
aw dude... yo this beat is so great. people are all about different feels in beats. and THIS is what ima llll about bro. i would love to spit over one of your beats
haha this is still my favorite one :-)
toroga1 1 year ago
would you ever consider redoing this song?
i'm really enjoying your delivery for your new songs, and i think it'd be pretty damn impressive if you could update this song since the lyrics are just superb.
thalamatitus 1 year ago
Weres the instrumental?
reasontolivetoday 2 years ago
You have any mixtapes out? You should make a track with crystal seth man
ryansrunner 2 years ago
Hey brother,
Mad props to you!
I'd like to post this on my Facebook page.
My brother Kurtis Blow Walker needs to hear this!
If you're on FB hit me up!
Judy Winfree
TheOtherWinfree 2 years ago
Awesome!
guitarflamenco77 2 years ago
sick bro, btw how did u get the instrumental version of this song?
Ohmybhuddaitskevin 2 years ago
Aww man this is killer
toroga1 2 years ago
this is very inspiring-
it is truly genuine, and for what its worth- i think your a truly unique artist. keep it up.
xxnadaynadaxx 2 years ago
nice! whered you find the instrumental version of this? i cant find it ANYWHERE
iiBansukii 2 years ago
i looped it together
YouIAmMusic 2 years ago
YOU LOOPED THE WHOLE SONG OVER AND OVER? that works haha thats smart haha Thanks
iiBansukii 2 years ago
lovin the lyricss.... <33 and obviously ur voice ;)
xoMandyLovesUxo 2 years ago
this stuff is inspirational i can listen to this while writing lines of my own nice job
moonsoonmenu 2 years ago
i like your voice man, sounds like a white xzibit, 5 * peep my vids, i'm a british rapper
mitz657 2 years ago
love this song, nice verse
straightupkid 2 years ago
...
You remind me the real days of hip-hop..
TheFurySage 2 years ago
very nice mate! The only thing that bothers me a bit is the sound from garageband( reverb delay on vocals)
Very nice rhymeflow. Thumbs up.
walnutspacecake 2 years ago
chill man:)
bellyFull89 2 years ago
nice man
i hope dat u r gettin out dere doing shows n shit and not jus wasting ure talent on youtube
kalim93 2 years ago
hey man i been making beats and raps here in chile for about a month now and this is awesome
chrisguerra94 2 years ago
Dude, you got mad skillz.
sweetheart92115 2 years ago
dis is sikk keep it up
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kstarr14 2 years ago
men, greetings from chile i understand a lot of english nice lyric for real
keep the contact respect
bibliotecamusical 2 years ago
greezy flow b.
sick beginning for verse 1!
MK032 2 years ago
this is sickkkk keep it up man!
dexiangyu 2 years ago
Yeah this shit brings back memories. ILL. 5/5 and faved. Nice content and spectacular beat.
EneMEzSiKK 2 years ago
nice love the beat
deltarebelion 2 years ago
I liked this man ... 5 Star
UneGrandeLeaF 2 years ago
dammmm how long have u been rapping for???
TheToxicTwinzJ4L 2 years ago
not bad cool
SMCrazy25 2 years ago
nice.... real smooth
momwilliams08 2 years ago
nice man i like it keep it up sickness
just work on the flow a little
if u want im down to collab
prominent27 2 years ago
nice man u gotta good flow foreal
and im feelin the lyrics they're real just keep it like this and keep it comin ill keep watchin
theonlywhiterapper 2 years ago
sick wicked and nasty man
excellent work
firezoid1 2 years ago
0ooo i liKe!
razbsgurl09 2 years ago
wow nice
streckle18 2 years ago
hmm nice :)
deltarebelion 2 years ago
NIce flow
AJprotege 3 years ago
very good .. no effect ?:D
locmcdog 3 years ago
another uplifting song with so much fucking feeling....
DazBee69 3 years ago
It's like butterflies under waterfalls
nice imagery
RapterSteeez 3 years ago
DOPE! you got yourself a new subscriber!your helping restore my faith in rap, scince i found this underground youtube thing Ive had sweet rap overload! I like what you rap about in this song, it actually has purpose 5 stars! check my shit if you got the time
keep it up
Toast
RapterSteeez 3 years ago
I like this one =) One of my favorites
ChanceCharms 3 years ago
Really cool!
SeanaSparkle2 3 years ago
yeah where's bruce wayne at? *****
soopaninjalo 3 years ago
this is real right here. smooth !!
KidFred11 3 years ago
Another great display of lyrics. 5/5
gordontrue 3 years ago
yo, thats d0pe. great job with limited means
sinterQ 3 years ago
yo i like this one its deep, can't go wrong with luv sic pt. 3 beat too one of my favorites, awesome.
SuburbanInvasion 3 years ago
i think this is your best song yet great job keep it up
strykes22 3 years ago
deep meaning nice flows. keep practicing and become the best u can be
josiahceramics 3 years ago
criticism:
just try to keep your flow more regular and your voice steady.
pro:
this is an awesome instrumental. Nujabes is the man.
You are a damn good lyricist. Your patterns are nice, very eloquent, nice rhyming scheme and variations, and overall its very introspective. Infinitely better than any of the crap that's playing on the radio nowadays.
thalamatitus 3 years ago 2
This is amazing man. I really love the piano. Its become like a trademark to you man. that's awesome seriously just amazing. Im speechless.
DrISE786 3 years ago
eh, do u have "Strong Enough" by them?? if u do, can u post it?
m1776176 3 years ago
Is it weird that this song turns me on?
nmunmnm 3 years ago
also, to add, cuz i just finished listening.
its fucking dope, you have some deep, imaginitive lyrics. i really like it. if there was anything i would say is just work on the flow, make it a little more smooth, keep the voice manipulations u use tho, theyr dope, just work on perfecting your flow and il cop ur album along with many others. period.
city0fj 3 years ago
aw dude... yo this beat is so great. people are all about different feels in beats. and THIS is what ima llll about bro. i would love to spit over one of your beats
city0fj 3 years ago
MAAAAN!!!
xansx 3 years ago
Your getting better each day man!! Keep it up man! This is awesome man!
xansx 3 years ago