Journey
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  • Very nice, Alyssa. Long time, no see.

    Easy

  • Personal and revealing as ever - thank you for sharing..

  • @dashpoet Thank you hun! I wrote a lot of these months ago and neve rhad time to put them up. Now I have some time, but am in a much better place. :-)

  • I find this deeply disturbing...had two people we know kill them selves in the last

    two weeks! See pain in the eyes of the subject and profound sadness.

    Not sure what the meaning is perhaps just my mood due to current events.

    Thanks for the share!

    <3 Jessica

  • @jessicakobe I am so sorry to hear about your losses!! This poem is of one being in a sadder place, with thoughts about moving toward a happier place and wondering what it will be like, along with the struggles ie "twisted dance" will be when leaving all one knows. Thoughts arise of giving up because its an "easier" thing to do in that pain stops, but not the road desired, nor taken.

    I wish I knew what to say that might help ease the pain you're enduring but I can honestly say I don't :-( *hugs*

  • Something that really hits home for a lot of people. Nicely done.

  • @Brendajlk Thank you very much. Somehow I overlooked your comment and will be sure not to do it again! I tried to go with the mood of the economy and a side not many people show.

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