Zanessa Stroy Rated R

[sonnymcfarland]

GOOD!!

[Adennos]

porn on youtube!!

[debjani4321]

@Adennos

[hsmzannessaforever14]

woww..

[JemixxJoexxDemixxLUV]

u like jashley wow SY

[shaunaar]

it was really good for your first episode:D

[aliyainlove]

cant wait

[gizmolp1]

more

[seniorqueen08]

yes! definately want more eps. cant wait

[Dimond12310]

It was really good for your first time writing

[slippers489]

more fucking needed

[xxSmislaxx]

That was really good!!

[blueeyedblack1]

You did a great job on this episode. :)

[happyrainbow99]

@ KissMeBaby3100 don't care what everyone say

u know girls just wanna have fun lol

and i'm thirteen watching lots of these r-rated stories ^^

guess my mom wouldn't like if she knew ...

[KissMeBaby3100]

ok all i have to say to that is: HOLY SHIT! umm, that was freakin weird as hell, but it was good, dont get me wrong lol, everybody said i probably shouldnt have watched it, because im 14 going on 15, but i dont care. it was good by the way, i have watched worse so im good. haha

[OfficialTeamZanessa]

wow...u think you should quit? nooo! do moree!

[snoopygirl4441]

yes!! MORE!!! (as says Vannessa) LOL

[xXEmmeAlexaXx]

wow she's slutty (vanessa)

[hotashleytisdaleclub]

thats was wierd

[leolover96]

as a writer myself i think it was very good for a first timer but you definitly needed more passsion between them, alot more of the "I love you i cant live without you" stuff you know lol. really good though, keep trying:)

[TheNatasha157]

Loved it! U could've done more fucking but is okay for ur first time!

[niezwaagk]

its good but i dont want more

[4801480889]

this story iz noot shit

itz reeeeeeeeeaaaaalllllllllllyyyy­yyyyyyyy goooooooddddddd

[zanessaluver900]

loved it

[Zanessafan12345xoxo]

umm ive seen better. it all happened 2 fast. u should have added more luv in2 it. like more kissing and less moaning and ugghhhhhhhs and fucks. so ya it needs alot more improvements becuz this is suppoded 2 be like reality not just a story.

[xzacefronobssessedx]

*stares at the blank screen after it ended;blinks*um.....wow..no offense but I've seen better...

[puppyluv19972009]

OMG that was so awesome plz make more!!!

[Maychick1717]

loved it

[poopookittycat]

If that was your first time making a Rated R vid, you did really good. Others usually start out with PG- 13, there not that detailed, I don't really get into those. Loved it!

[smexielexi42]

cant wait 4 the next 1!!!!!!!  it was soooo good!!!

[saldazemenite]

loved it!! awesome!! pls make more!!!

[sftbllchika99]

BRILLIANT!!! i LOVED it!!! dont think otehrwise bcuz you're an amazing writer!!! no rush but cant wait for the next eppy!!!

[doodles365]

i think u should make one with the whole thing sex start to baginning that was sweet but they need to do more than just have zac go into her

[HSM0158030]

cool

not shit

keep um comming

[sabrinababy219]

haha! i lykd itt!!

[tamluvsavril]

trust it all to be about sex vick lol

[skinzonwheels]

thanks for the comments guys i will try and make more soon but i got college :(

[kcgfligf]

love it!!!

[RRgamefreak]

that was awesome. you should definitaly make more!

[skinzonwheels]

haha thanks soph :L ly too x

[misstrindade]

that was not bad.. I kinda liked it!

you have to keep going and you'll gettin' better with time''

[weerach91]

tht was good... keep em coming :)  x x

[SophieOOx]

Lmfao vik you dirty bitch :P Lyxx

[VHudgensE]

this was good!!!!! Not shit. Keep dis coming!