Not like I mean to be a hater... good animation.. but I just see too many "borrowed" moments from the movie. And the parts that weren't needed a LOT of work... not bad, but did NOT look like Ariel. The nose was quite the honker!
Let's see..
:34 looked either from 'Part of Your World' when Ariel says "I want more", or when she first enters Ursula's Lair..
:42 Had to be when she was on the boat at "Kiss the Girl", when she first got legs, when she smiles at the dinner table, etc. Hrm.
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poses needs more life and expressive qualities. poses should be able to tell what the character is expressing.
and she was on the right side of the screen @ 0:29, it'd be best to keep her on the right side of the screen. less confusing that way
also, when she notices the pearl, you can show her leaning towards it as if she's very interested. The current pose you drew doesn't show her excitement much.
COULD ALL OF YOU SHUT THE FREAK UP? THAT WAS MY LITTLE 6 YEAR OLD DAUGHTER! HOW IS SHE GONNA SPELL? I HAD KNOW IDEA SHE EVEN KNEW HOW TO USE THE COMPUTER IF MY DAUGHTER (WHOS NOW 7) MAKES THE CHOICE TO GO ON MY ACOUNT W/OUT TELLING ME AGAIN AND SEES WHAT YOU GUYS ARE SAYING SHE WOULD CRY FOR HOURS SO SHUT UP! GOT IT?
@ceddin515 I can't draw her perfectly I was not dissing this because honestly it is very good just giving constructive critisim. I do enjoy this they did very good, but the hair seemed stiff and the shading could have made it even more amazing thats it. lol. So sorry to say this but i'm in an art school. Trust me I know how hard it is to draw Ariel and to animate.
Be careful of the 180 rule. You had her facing screen right then it cut to her facing screen left then back to screen right.Just flip the image at 0:32 or have the camera spin around her or something. Less confusing :)
I admire it, if you did it just for fun or for a school project or whatever, it is still truly a work of art. I'm an animator too, doing a short clip is hard, and who ever doesnt admire it is just ignorant. Good job!!
Uh, you don't necessarily have to be an artist to be able to recognize good art. Not that I agree with him, I just think your argument is really weak.
@clusterchuck just because someone can't do better doesn't mean your art doesn't suck. cause seriously. your art sucks. as does your animation. my lord. ever hear of a little thing called weight?
@adrienndidi Sweetie, have you EVER animated in you life? I go to art school and i can tell you, animation is probably among the hardest things to do. do you know how long it takes just to animate a single second? This animation was the result of veyr hard work, and you'd do well to appreciate that.
as an artist, i can fully understand why you got the letter. Disney is insanely protective of their characters. A daycare near me had mickey, Minnie, Donald, goofy, and ariel and belle painted on the side of their buildings. They god a cease and desist notice, threatening legal action if they did not paint over the mural. You just can't use other people's characters without their permission plain and simple.
@nickel94andanime ooh we got that too! But I'm sure it works the same. I've cn lots of programs evn though it changes whatevr, it's still the same. Although a little changes. But works the same I guess.
pleaseee!!! tell me what the name of that song? is really beautiful... can u tell me please i will be waiting by the way : " thanks" wonderful job!! =) if u can give me the song i will love it... be happy!!
wow thats so awsome!!! i can't wait to see it!!! i love singing to the little mermaid! haha check out my videos if you have a chance and let me know when you have the video made! I can't wait to see it!
beautiful !,..honestly i dont like the negative comments that takes up alot of time and effort love it keep it up! :)
vamptastic100 6 days ago
I dont understand why there are so many dislikes
Ashleyrwaaawrr 1 month ago
i liked it
Carma12100 2 months ago
THIS SUCKS
sabrinaluvsconnor 2 months ago
I like it! But Ariel is a bit too skinny....
jewlsgrl96 2 months ago
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kittyvschi 2 months ago
Not like I mean to be a hater... good animation.. but I just see too many "borrowed" moments from the movie. And the parts that weren't needed a LOT of work... not bad, but did NOT look like Ariel. The nose was quite the honker!
Let's see..
:34 looked either from 'Part of Your World' when Ariel says "I want more", or when she first enters Ursula's Lair..
:42 Had to be when she was on the boat at "Kiss the Girl", when she first got legs, when she smiles at the dinner table, etc. Hrm.
Cerberuswaltz 5 months ago
fucking copyright....
freddyintrouble 5 months ago
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Magentashapeshifter 6 months ago
I love it :D
AttomicFart 7 months ago 2
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she's so ugly
sanahoriacons 7 months ago
muy fiero !
AnitaAlmada11 7 months ago
lol, whats the song you used?
i nkow its an audioswap, but i like the audioswapped music so..
:3
MultiKills7 7 months ago
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poses needs more life and expressive qualities. poses should be able to tell what the character is expressing.
and she was on the right side of the screen @ 0:29, it'd be best to keep her on the right side of the screen. less confusing that way
also, when she notices the pearl, you can show her leaning towards it as if she's very interested. The current pose you drew doesn't show her excitement much.
daiaennaa 8 months ago
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daiaennaa 8 months ago
nice looping
daniyellowjello 8 months ago
0:30 at that point is pretty ugly
cristobalnp 8 months ago
ugliest shit ive ever seen.
EveningFantasy 8 months ago
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nice job, dont read the bs ppl are saying about your video, its a cartoon, not the real world, hope to see more video of your work
bigwhiterowlow 8 months ago
nice job, dont read the bs ppl are saying about your video, its a cartoon, not the real world, how to see more video of your work
bigwhiterowlow 8 months ago
everything is good only the face on 0:31 its beatifull
GabriellaHSMFan 8 months ago
good job
LilGirlRed2011 8 months ago
not bad, just need a little more practice, but your art is waaaay better than mine! :D
TheQueenOfALLMusic 8 months ago
Pearls don't grow randomly on rocks; they're in oyster-type things.
kameo360fan 8 months ago 18
@kameo360fan and mermaids don't really exist. just go with it. lol
clusterchuck 8 months ago 67
noooo mamaeeees la dibujan vien feeooo y creoq ue esta maas bonita quien la dibujo
naxeee 8 months ago
0:29 i'm flying weeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! XD nice animation
filmfreak94 9 months ago
good job clusterchuck
shelbee0905 9 months ago
wtf?
girlytomzzboii 9 months ago
at 0:32 she has a kind of constapated look XD
gregwar7 9 months ago
COULD ALL OF YOU SHUT THE FREAK UP? THAT WAS MY LITTLE 6 YEAR OLD DAUGHTER! HOW IS SHE GONNA SPELL? I HAD KNOW IDEA SHE EVEN KNEW HOW TO USE THE COMPUTER IF MY DAUGHTER (WHOS NOW 7) MAKES THE CHOICE TO GO ON MY ACOUNT W/OUT TELLING ME AGAIN AND SEES WHAT YOU GUYS ARE SAYING SHE WOULD CRY FOR HOURS SO SHUT UP! GOT IT?
adrienndidi 9 months ago
WOW!!!! did u reeli draw those???? I LURVE IT!!!!!
if u didnt draw those... NICE ANIMATION!!!!!
i liked it best when the mermaid jumped into the water and swam back...! :D
lolipops1998gmailcom 9 months ago
may I know what music this is? :) nice animation to :D
JustForProjects1996 9 months ago
why is the little mermaid kind of mannish?
IfrickenAccept 9 months ago
honestly there are so many steps in making an animated film
this is one of the steps to the finish ^_^ and you did a great job of it
Applebutter799 10 months ago
she looks like shes about to be raped XDD
butternut3458 10 months ago
At 0:30 the mermaid looks like a man xD
TrainerVisions 10 months ago
this is really good sorry for the rest of the world but this is really good it's sooo hard to draw arliel
birgiteke 11 months ago
work on the hair more and shading looks really rough
simbalolo 11 months ago
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ceddin515 10 months ago
@ceddin515 I can't draw her perfectly I was not dissing this because honestly it is very good just giving constructive critisim. I do enjoy this they did very good, but the hair seemed stiff and the shading could have made it even more amazing thats it. lol. So sorry to say this but i'm in an art school. Trust me I know how hard it is to draw Ariel and to animate.
simbalolo 10 months ago
i came here thinking that i'd see some tits
o0Rice0o 11 months ago
Great start!
Be careful of the 180 rule. You had her facing screen right then it cut to her facing screen left then back to screen right.Just flip the image at 0:32 or have the camera spin around her or something. Less confusing :)
Can't wait to see the finished product!
syminka 11 months ago
this is awesome, the swimming looks like someone professional from disney made it! thats how good it is :D
MermaidJess22 1 year ago
how long did this take to make
thenicolemo50 1 year ago
I really like how she looks when she swims(':
<3333
AbbyImaginary 1 year ago
Good job, but you should totally make a spoof of the movie.
Okalani5000 1 year ago
love the way her tail moves :)
enchanteDREAMer01 1 year ago
its like she gets shot out of a shitpipe at the beginning
rahtidboydem 1 year ago
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LOOOL "You just killed my childhood memories :(((("
she looked posessed at 0.30
apart from that its err..not..er bad
rahtidboydem 1 year ago
really good! :DD
Rosieuchiha 1 year ago
0:30 LOL
EiliVideo 1 year ago
Amazing. :)
BabyChii119 1 year ago
I like this, great job!
But I think at the beginning she swims a bit too fast, to be inside water.
Keinajuliet1 1 year ago
That's awful dude,plz stop drawing.
danielsyoutub 1 year ago
@danielsyoutub Shut the hell up,ok? I'd like to see you do better.
BabyChii119 1 year ago
@ 0:30 she looks reaaaalllyyyyy high xD
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jordynbabi20 1 year ago
ok people who are dissing this let me see you do better
sammielover22296 1 year ago
I admire it, if you did it just for fun or for a school project or whatever, it is still truly a work of art. I'm an animator too, doing a short clip is hard, and who ever doesnt admire it is just ignorant. Good job!!
RagdollEnnaira 1 year ago
Wow! That's amazing! I can't compare my own art to that...Well I only draw penguins for a living....LOL Just kidding...I have education...
blahblahlikespie 1 year ago
she looks anarexic
FreakDaMIghet 1 year ago
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it looks UGLY
no like really ugly in this
your a terrible artest
adrienndidi 1 year ago
@adrienndidi
lol ok, wheres ur art then? hahaha
clusterchuck 1 year ago 43
@clusterchuck
Uh, you don't necessarily have to be an artist to be able to recognize good art. Not that I agree with him, I just think your argument is really weak.
Gipshaw 1 year ago
@clusterchuck just because someone can't do better doesn't mean your art doesn't suck. cause seriously. your art sucks. as does your animation. my lord. ever hear of a little thing called weight?
xelioth 10 months ago
@adrienndidi LOL, thats so mean...u ddnt have to be that blunt and negative.
ytfjordan 1 year ago
@adrienndidi Sweetie, have you EVER animated in you life? I go to art school and i can tell you, animation is probably among the hardest things to do. do you know how long it takes just to animate a single second? This animation was the result of veyr hard work, and you'd do well to appreciate that.
BrokenDarkFire 1 year ago 4
@adrienndidi
*you're, *artist. If you are gonna insult someone, do it correctly
syminka 11 months ago
@adrienndidi well you are probably a terrible writer
Glexs30 11 months ago
@adrienndidi You're a terrible speller
wickedantionette 9 months ago
@adrienndidi U shut up this is AMAZING! U r just jealous because shes probably a better artist than U!
Btw U r an Awsome Drawer!
bekkiok 9 months ago
@bekkiok stfu
adrienndidi 1 month ago
@adrienndidi I don't think u could do any better..
MrTheforgottenyoutub 8 months ago
@MrTheforgottenyoutub shut up! i already stated that the comment was posted by my daughter but i am proud that she got you guys this mad
adrienndidi 7 months ago
whoa... what program do you use?
its fabulous.
josefjacq 1 year ago
I've never seen anyone able to do the hair correctly, but you did!!! THAT'S AMAZINGGGGG <333
irocklikerocks 1 year ago
You just killed my childhood memories :((((
angelmassb 1 year ago
this is awsome pawsome i remember the old audio!! I wish u oculd keep it!
karlaabc123 1 year ago
nice job, but she realy looks like she's a anorexic, and at 0:30 she kinda looks like gollum a bit ^_^
trinitycreen 1 year ago
as an artist, i can fully understand why you got the letter. Disney is insanely protective of their characters. A daycare near me had mickey, Minnie, Donald, goofy, and ariel and belle painted on the side of their buildings. They god a cease and desist notice, threatening legal action if they did not paint over the mural. You just can't use other people's characters without their permission plain and simple.
comicbookartistboi 1 year ago
is that anime studio 6?
nickel94andanime 1 year ago
@nickel94andanime ooh we got that too! But I'm sure it works the same. I've cn lots of programs evn though it changes whatevr, it's still the same. Although a little changes. But works the same I guess.
enchanteDREAMer01 1 year ago
sorry but is she anorexic?? in the disney verion isn't sch so thin, she's ugly thin. i also don't like the picture. sorry, even: ihate it.
legaalheid 1 year ago
@legaalheid lol
ytfjordan 1 year ago
Soz, but this song sounds shit! Too high pitched! x
xCheekyxQueenx 1 year ago
creepy
croemy 1 year ago 50
Can't wait to see Ursula!
SwayingAndSweeping 1 year ago
0:35 she looks the best.. but the rest she looks cracked out :)
brittany47371 2 years ago
she kind of looks like a cracked out ariel but hey it still good
balloonlover10 2 years ago
it was great but not for regular cartoons! i think u should be a comic book artist :)
bran87buck05 2 years ago
This is beautiful! Great job. =D
GenieBella 2 years ago 2
Wow! That's AMAZING! Great job! I LOVE The Little Mermaid. I want to be a Disney animator some day, so that was 'fin'tastic! Great animation!
DisneyGirl929 2 years ago
geez you guys are harsh :(
i think this looks really nice so far, it's not easy to replicate a character and animate it.
Kipeur 2 years ago
so poor
forestgrovebadboy 2 years ago 2
thats what i said XD anerexic ariel
DeathAmethyst 2 years ago
it is like she has anarecia
snudgepip 2 years ago 7
i love the way you spell that. honestly.
Raidoven 2 years ago
Well done! This is very good animation. =]
Morningdew1435 2 years ago 6
prettttty cooools:)
Andypop69 2 years ago 2
I like the pic of 0:37
dramaquen902 2 years ago
she looks slightly anorexic, add some meat to her bones lol
quinnn 2 years ago 66
not for being rude or anything cus it mabey was hard to make, but she looked kinda creepy XD
Meliss881 2 years ago 2
wow!!!!!!!!!!! thats all right
TheAtl3 2 years ago 2
lmao I wanted to watch this so I could make fun of it but the video is very skillful and I know I shouldn't :( lol
screamolives 2 years ago 2
nicee, she looked ultra manly at the beginning tho.
tehpixie 2 years ago
very good animation, im wondering how much time it took in your case ?
michalmichal11 2 years ago
good job
Chaospur22 2 years ago
That is really good animation skills. Great job!
calliestargurl1 2 years ago 3
she looks anorexic at 0:32
RandomCupieCake95 2 years ago 4
what is this song called
Ruthyzcool 2 years ago
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sakuramankai94 2 years ago
either you mean bulimic or anorexic :) anemic means she has thin blood
squirrlygig 2 years ago
oh dang, i meant anorexic, i was just thinking the word anemic when i was writing this : )
sakuramankai94 2 years ago
it's awesome can you jsut tell me how you did this job please it's wonderful!!!
orsone93 2 years ago
woww
CamilleBerardi 2 years ago
damn!!! awesome job my friend!! :) :) :)
pokemonlover342660 2 years ago
Nice. :D
This actually looks better than most TV cartoons. xD
CrystalJupiter 2 years ago
love your style!!!
artificus 2 years ago
wicked! whats thw song?
myst3ri0usp3rs0n 2 years ago
people in black by still life
xohsnapp 2 years ago
pleaseee!!! tell me what the name of that song? is really beautiful... can u tell me please i will be waiting by the way : " thanks" wonderful job!! =) if u can give me the song i will love it... be happy!!
mikemaurock 2 years ago
its actually one of the "youtube approved" songs cuz i had to replace my original audio. This is called "Sneak Peak" hope thats helpful
clusterchuck 2 years ago 5
@clusterchuck who is the song made by?
LydiaDollface 1 year ago
its awesome!!!!
but in the begining it looks like she has a eating disorder
SanteFeOwner 2 years ago 2
nice!
well done :]
kissysakura 2 years ago
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ew you cant draw!
ilt319 2 years ago
Cool.
Eonchu 2 years ago
omg you turned he into anorexic. LOL
gretch165 2 years ago 3
lol exactly what I thought.
Good attempt though.
luineff 2 years ago
Irgentwie komisch...
Linda12hobby 3 years ago
Artsy, keep the hip hop. 5/5
KetamineFix 3 years ago
Why don't you animate something original? You don't border on copyright infringement that way.
lovableladyfish 3 years ago
ew why she so skiny:S:S she loks wel ugly :S
katykiller1 3 years ago
I dont think its horrible at all .ITS WONDERFUL.
Love1297 3 years ago
okay i guess. whats the point of it though?
AllyCatOsen 3 years ago
roftl
she is weird in 0:31
So0oyRaN 3 years ago
she looks a bit weird in 0:31
jannzky1 3 years ago 2
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ariel is stupid!!1!!
vv1frogfan 3 years ago
cute :)
hannahhedgehog 3 years ago
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Extra !!!!!!!!!!
Nati961 3 years ago
very cute ^^
ForgottenxWords 3 years ago
really good
mermaidser 3 years ago 2
wow thats so awsome!!! i can't wait to see it!!! i love singing to the little mermaid! haha check out my videos if you have a chance and let me know when you have the video made! I can't wait to see it!
Singing4Disney 3 years ago
good job! I can't wait to see the rest!
amayaraquel 3 years ago
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its up on my channel now haha
clusterchuck 3 years ago
I LOVE YOU ARIEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Afrotechmods 3 years ago
Amazing work
JuanCSJ 3 years ago 3
This is brilliant, but I agree - she is WAY too skinny! Even thinner than the disney version!
paintingmycanvas1 3 years ago 2
thx, i tried to thicken her out a bit in the final version, check it out, its posted as a response to this one!
clusterchuck 3 years ago
ooooo im soooo close!!! expect the finished version hopefully before saturday!!!!!!! yay!!!this twizzle's almost finished!!!!
clusterchuck 3 years ago
if anyone has any last minute suggestions, I would LOVE to hear them cuz I'll be finishing the project over the next week.
thx!
clusterchuck 3 years ago
Great so far. no she does not look to skinny.
:D just keep doing a good job!
TangoMaureen07 3 years ago
nice! but why did you draw ariel so skinny?
nbblover01 3 years ago
oops sry, i didnt know i was making her especially skinny.
ps i'm working on finishing it right now!
clusterchuck 3 years ago
ooo i can't find time to finish this sucker! hopefully soon my sched will clear up a bit and i will FINALLY finish it. :)
clusterchuck 3 years ago
OMG, that was AMAZING!! I wish I could draw mermaids like you!
ztslovebird 3 years ago
This is beyond amazing, i can't wait to see it when it's finished
CantareDiavolo 3 years ago 2
omg your so awesome you should really be famous or something! Btw what classes have you taken so far i'm an amiture animator and illistrator myself
Pink1Popup1Book 3 years ago
when will this be done?
harpiegod009 3 years ago
oh god, ive been working on it for a few months and school and stuff have been so hectic so it will probably be a while.
clusterchuck 3 years ago
this is really good but the nose is a little off
balletXoxO13 3 years ago
Wow!!! And this is drawn with pencil?!!!!?? Wicked!! XD
fluffylovey 3 years ago
:) amazing.
can't wait to see the finished product.
Mzprezlee 3 years ago
This is so freaking cool!
Spectacular Job!
Feathersandploom 4 years ago
I TOTALLY second what SHE said!!! :D
grobaniteLarisa 3 years ago 2
You should create a few Wicked ones too
ythc05 4 years ago
oooo almost done! i still got a few more shots wich could end up taking a while cuz of school and stuff, but hopefully I'll be done fairly soon!
clusterchuck 4 years ago
you absolutely need to do one of ursulas songs when you are done with this one! your legally blonde animation blew me away!
DefyGravity897623 4 years ago 3
Which song are you going to put it to?
cheerbearsmiles 4 years ago
the world above! I'm so stoked!
clusterchuck 4 years ago
I'm amazed, omg thats sooo good. You are a talented artist and animator! That's so cool, can't wait to see more!! :D
Luvie2 4 years ago
That was awesome! Great job! She's my fave!
AmericanWoman84 4 years ago
Sweet! Amazing work! You're such a talented artist ^_^
SarcasticLeaves 4 years ago