Pretty good for an 8th grader. His presentation is good, but it feels like there is no individual voice, just a group of ideas someone else came up with and given by someone else. I will not list every fault, because we are all humans, perfection is unattanable. You did well, not the best speech i've heard, but definatly the best from an 8th grader.
This was really mature. It showed how important this was to you! Good job! You could run for president! And btw, i think you have a wide range in vocabulary. Very good
Samwise gammgine Is much much better
Nostro200 4 months ago
nice speech please just ignore all the haters
SalsaShoeProductions 6 months ago
bla bla vla...thats alll i heard from this video
Nostro200 8 months ago
Not as good as lotr
MrBoBoTom 1 year ago
@MrBoBoTom hahahahaha, good one XD
basman777 1 year ago
Im sorry but that was super lame ha Obama lookin ass nigga
68blitzen 1 year ago
@TheAce707
Obviously you're right. Because you spelled attainable wrong hahaha jk you're right though
68blitzen 1 year ago
FAG
eggorox 1 year ago
? WTF is this?
Nostro200 1 year ago
Pretty good for an 8th grader. His presentation is good, but it feels like there is no individual voice, just a group of ideas someone else came up with and given by someone else. I will not list every fault, because we are all humans, perfection is unattanable. You did well, not the best speech i've heard, but definatly the best from an 8th grader.
TheAce707 1 year ago
little cock sucker will make a great leader in a goverment
spammuel 2 years ago 3
its too long. plus, he is being way to repetitive.
steve44925 2 years ago
i love it
way to go
flitterific 2 years ago
I'm running for vice-president at my school, and this is a really good example for me to follow when i write my speech.
hartmander7 2 years ago
This was really mature. It showed how important this was to you! Good job! You could run for president! And btw, i think you have a wide range in vocabulary. Very good
fabulosityforever 3 years ago 2
this is actually better than some ppl in college!
brandonsnotebook 3 years ago
good job
gibsonrocker94 3 years ago
not a bad speech, but reads too much
katitijani 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
u suck
supavideo 3 years ago
future president?
tylercjcl 3 years ago
I think this is a really great speech!
Thank you so much for sharing,,
Keep it up :)
DF23 4 years ago 4